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Butcher's broom increases chance of defect

And I feel like first HH x ananthic is just going to be unintentional anyways lol
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increase defect chance pretty sure
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Couldn't be me, I work with G1 and 2's. Someone in the 50s would make light work of the quest though I bet

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Critique this please!September 12, 2019 06:52 PM


Magnus Bane

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Please tell me your honest opinions. It's a species I've created!

Edited at September 12, 2019 07:45 PM by Magnus Bane
Critique this please!September 12, 2019 06:54 PM


Maverick

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Maybe fix the horns?

Critique this please!September 12, 2019 06:58 PM


Former Pack

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<div style="text-align: center;">what kind of species are they?

<div style="text-align: center;">canine or something else?
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<div style="text-align: center;">I'd like to know before critiquing.
Critique this please!September 12, 2019 07:01 PM


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quill said:
<div align="center">what kind of species are they?

<div align="center">canine or something else?
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<div align="center">I'd like to know before critiquing.

It's honestly just something thrown together
Critique this please!September 12, 2019 07:01 PM


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King of Hell said:
Maybe fix the horns?



What do you suggest I do to them?
Critique this please!September 12, 2019 07:13 PM


Nox

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I think they are super cute, but maybe the front shoulders could be defined a little more? I don't know. I'm going to be stalking the adopt thread if you end up turning this species into adoptables. You're doing great, I think I saw that you just started doing digital stuff and it honestly looks like you've been doing it awhile. ^^
Critique this please!September 12, 2019 07:13 PM


TeaBear

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I think it looks really cool, I love the fangs and horns too and the spikes on the heels.

If you were to open an adopts shop you could even creat like rarities for example
no horns/wings is common
horns and fangs rare
etc

You could even add heaps of other things like extra tails, eyes and even different types of wings too
Critique this please!September 12, 2019 07:14 PM


Nox

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Ooh, yes please. :>
Critique this please!September 12, 2019 07:15 PM


Magnus Bane

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I will probably make it an adopt^^ thanks for the input guys^^
Critique this please!September 12, 2019 07:16 PM


Former Pack

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This looks really cool though they look like their about to fall forward a little ^^'

Maybe move the Horizontal horns on their head a little lower? Something about it seems wrong to be

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