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Is chat Dead?
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Omg,, pigeon. I love it. <3 "i aint painting allat" lmaooo.

I love how you draw / paint feathers. The expression is so kind.
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thank you Samael *^*

i need to dedicate some time to painting feathers because i gave up on rendering them lmao
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Limbo wow
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wait sorry, i think that's considered text speech </3
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sorry to give you fomo (that's the best message i've seen all day) <3

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I need to get a cot so I can lay in the pet room with my cats when I want to draw/nap and don't have to worry about them wreaking havock in the rest of the house.
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Hades
you missed limbo art
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Vixen currently stuck at work but it Friday so I've got the weekend off and going though pups I decide to mass breed for spring first and realized after that I only have under 100 spots so XD hoping these pups will go before my next litters are due
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I missed limbo art? :(
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Not bad. Doing art. How are you?
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I did not know that thanks!
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I believe they changed that when they added the fact you can breed all of your wolves within the pack
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Arch it has????
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Leaf I actually think that's changed now
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Gabby your Alphas can not breed otside the pack just letting You know!

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CritiqueSeptember 18, 2018 05:13 PM


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So I'm looking for critique of my art
When posting pleade state what peice of art your posting for
Thank you

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Huge wolf project [sketch]
https://i.postimg.cc/pXQvpwCQ/Untitled124.png

#2
Hide and Seek [HEE contest]
http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

Edited at September 18, 2018 06:54 PM by Moonshire Pack
CritiqueSeptember 18, 2018 06:54 PM


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new artz added
CritiqueSeptember 18, 2018 06:59 PM


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Um they both look fine to me xD
CritiqueSeptember 18, 2018 07:32 PM


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The wolf looks great, but maybe make the belly "bigger" when it gets to its hind legs.
CritiqueSeptember 19, 2018 03:31 AM


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Thank you :D
CritiqueSeptember 19, 2018 05:07 AM


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Agreeing with Damian. The body/ belly lines should move down a little or else the legs would look too big, hind legs mostly but front legs too.
Round out the ears a little?
The back hind leg looks a bit off, perhaps move it forward a bit and add a bit of an angle so it doesn't look so straight? Or perhaps it was just the paw.

I can't help on the photo manipulation though. Sorry!
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the belly should be a little bigger near the back, and the nose/snout is quite pointed, I would round it out a little for a more realistic look. Other than that it looks great! Did you use a reference?
CritiqueSeptember 19, 2018 09:15 AM


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Thanks every for the critique
Currantly eveyone thinks my arts only work 100-200 mush so I'm Tring to improve

And I didn't use a ref however I was studying wnatomy for hours yesterday

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