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 TheFlyingKitten
06:50:33 Petri Dish/Sorceress
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What should I name this ding-dong?
 Rogue Turkey
06:49:17 Rogue is a Ghost
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 The Night Walker
06:48:47 Anemoia/Aedra PS4Usr
Tonne
Their dog is named batman xD
 devine
06:48:33 vi, devi
ha those are good names
My three chickens are "Soul Snatcher", "Mystery Colon" and "Aye-aye Kevin"
I had one named Chip but I she spends half her time with my neighbor's chickens
 TheFlyingKitten
06:48:04 Petri Dish/Sorceress
@Night

I love that.
 Tonneoshet
06:48:02 Tony - Neo - Bug
@Aedra
Bahaha! That's so random xD
Our old neighbours used to have Flash and Batman.

Flash was named that purely because she was the first to go running for food
 The Night Walker
06:46:57 Anemoia/Aedra PS4Usr
My friend has a chicken named pigeon. And another called galvanized steel.
 Tonneoshet
06:44:23 Tony - Neo - Bug
Bahaha. Its probably not as bad as it sounds since my countries currency is worth less than places overseas
 TheFlyingKitten
06:43:29 Petri Dish/Sorceress
@Tony

Oh, good lord.
 Magnus Bane
06:43:14 Mag/Maggy
950 is highway robbery
 Boeing
06:42:57 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
Tonneo
been busy for the whole morning and I have a recital in the evening, but I'm on now lol
 Tonneoshet
06:42:22 Tony - Neo - Bug
BOE!!! Hello! :D
 Boeing
06:42:00 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
finally not-busy
Hi Tonneo :D
 Tonneoshet
06:41:49 Tony - Neo - Bug
Yeah. We usually do rent weekly here. So in one month I've paid around 940, just for the room. That's not including groceries, petrol to get to work etc
 Archived Stars
06:41:39 Archive
not impresseed... bought out a breeding from someone else's girl and they told me I'm not getting the pups.
 Rogue River Pack
06:40:00 Cosmo, River
Ugh I need another folder
 TheFlyingKitten
06:39:57 Petri Dish/Sorceress
@Tony

A week?! That's insane!
 Tonneoshet
06:39:02 Tony - Neo - Bug
Geez, didn't realize it was bad there too.
I'm paying 235 a week for a room in a house. The cheapest one bedroom, one bathroom I last saw was around 950 a week. Doesn't help where I live is tourists galore so the prices are hiked up
 StarRun
06:37:49 
Oh wow
 Cat Paradise
06:34:15 Anatolian/Cat
@Mag
I agree that it is sad. I've noticed in my state a lot of people are getting help because jobs suck here and everything is too expensive.

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Critique?July 6, 2018 02:35 AM


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Just trying out some semi-realistic fur practice

Critiques on lighting, blending, etc. are greatly appreciated. If you have suggestions on how to make it look more realistic, that's also greatly appreciated

https://s33.postimg.cc/6dgalc133/Fur_Practice.png
Critique?July 7, 2018 05:36 PM


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So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!
Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows
I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a greater realistic look

2. Color
Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!
Critique?July 7, 2018 05:51 PM


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Dragon's Fire said:
So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!
Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows
I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a greater realistic look

2. Color
Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!



I agree with both! For fur, I personally think that the most important thing is edge variation. Have very stark contrast as well, as right now, you have a lot of softer edges.

For color, instead of shading with black and white, try changing your hue variation! For wolves with white fur, try blue-tinted gray, cream, anything. For wolves with cream fur, try shading with a reddish-brown. Of course, these are only like two in a billion examples lol

Another thing I think is important with fur is fur direction. Look at real wolves and see how their fur grows in like ten different directions.

These are only my personal observations on drawing fur. I like what you have going so far, you can do it!
Critique?July 7, 2018 08:12 PM


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Honestly I have no critique but this is awesome.On a real animal I think the color would be a little more varied though but I under stand you might have not added it because of it being practice.
Critique?July 7, 2018 10:18 PM


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x3 I haven't tried putting colored edges on a practice, I might just do that. Thanks guys >^<

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