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 Enigma
07:04:15 
I don't, I never found a code to join it. I have plenty of characters I could stash on there
 technoblade
07:03:41 Lil Techy | Techno
Enigma

;-; you can still stalk most of us on TH if you have it
 Enigma
07:01:57 
@techno
I definitely cried while writing it :') So many memories... I wish I had said goodbye to so many others whose accounts no longer exist on here
 TheFlyingKitten
07:01:00 Petri Dish/Sorceress
Man, it's kinda goofy that we can't regrow enamel. Do you know how powerful humans would be if we could just... keep that layer intact?
 Lavender Moon
07:00:14 
You're welcome! I'm glad you like it!
 TheFlyingKitten
06:59:07 Petri Dish/Sorceress
@Lavender

Ooh! I like that! Thank you!
 technoblade
06:59:02 Lil Techy | Techno
enigma

your bio is gonna make me cry
 Archived Stars
06:58:23 Archive
Oh, well. Hope they don't get good pups then, and have to deal with them.
 Archived Stars
06:57:56 Archive
Sobbing. Wasted mush and a breeding with a male that's a matron's blessing and a defect in hopes to get good pups
 Continental Wolves
06:57:39 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf
Heya Vox
 Magnus Bane
06:56:53 Mag/Maggy
And there's nothing a mod or anyone can do
 Voxtexy
06:56:49 Vox
That's why I'd ask /before/ paying to breed to a wolf.
 Magnus Bane
06:56:33 Mag/Maggy
You usually discuss that before breeding
 Enigma
06:56:17 
Hey Eci! Is that a new username, or just for spooptober?
 Archived Stars
06:56:14 Archive
I asked them about it, and they told me I get none. I'm trying to be nice, but it feels like I was scammed
 Lavender Moon
06:55:59 
TheFlyingKitten,

Maybe Aven? It means radiance
 technoblade
06:55:35 Lil Techy | Techno
that is why you always make a contract about pick of litter and stuff
 Voxtexy
06:55:25 Vox
Archived Stars,
That's the risk you take. That's why I typically only breed to studs, unless a friend of mine lets me breed to a female of theirs.
 Willow Tribe
06:55:15 Willow / Tibby
ello Skies
 Archived Stars
06:54:48 Archive
Vox...
I'm sobbing. I paid someone 30-50 mush for a breeding and they told me I don't get the pups

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Help me/CritiqueJune 28, 2018 04:27 PM


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Something isn't settling well with me and this image... Could you guys help?

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Help me/CritiqueJune 29, 2018 08:42 PM


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You did a very good job, but I can see a few things that could be touched up on.

The cat's chest is facing us, but the entirety of it's side is visible. It's back wouldn't be able to twist like this so we should either see only part of the chest, or part of the side and back.

If you chose to keep the back instead of the front-facing chest, I would add a little more exaggeration to the back and maybe lose, or change, some of the fur detail. With cats, the elegant curve of the back is very noticeable.

If you decided to keep the front-facing chest, the back and hind legs would be behind it, though the curve would still be visible, of course.

The legs themselves are a little lumpy, compared to the graceful lines a cat has. The heels should be lower, and at a less extreme angle, while the knees would have a slightly shallower curve that blends gracefully into the body. The hindquarters could be rounder, and shorter to show where the hip bones are.

I've never been great with front-facing legs, but cats have slightly thicker, short forearms, usually. There might not be as deep a dip from shoulder to neck, and the most noticeable joint from the front of the leg would be the wrist curving slightly sloping outwards, thickening before becoming the paw.

The ears could be less rounded, though of course it depends on the breed or OC you were drawing. Cat ears are most often triangular, and I would set them a little higher up on the head while lengthening the cheeks. Cats have slightly round heads.

I would make the tail tuft thick and blend it into the tail more, rather than a separate piece of fur, but that one is more a personal preference.

I would love to draw little bits to visually represent my advice, but my tablet's too scratched up to pick up my pen, apparently. '-_- If I get it working again soon, I'll add some pics.

Edited at June 29, 2018 08:43 PM by The Watch

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