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 MLadySkylar
07:43:29 P'Sky
Petry!
 Hades
07:41:41 The OG Ecifircas
That meme that's like, "Don't drink water after your eat fish, otherwise the fish will go glu glu gluh gluh in your stomach" has actually fucked me irreparably.

I can't eat fish anymore, I feel like I can feel it twisting around in my stomach and I won't drink water for like a whole day. I hate it here. </3
 TheFlyingKitten
07:41:31 Petri Dish/Sorceress
I'm permanently afraid of being behind trucks carrying large cargo because of that movie. Damn scene messed me up good.
 Moo Cow
07:40:51 
Wanna Rp? Pm me!
 Voxtexy
07:40:01 Vox
I had already watched it a couple of times, decided to throw it on when he was sitting in the lounge with me. I had the intention of making him get interested in it and my plan worked xD
 Voxtexy
07:39:03 Vox
I absolutely love Arcane. It's such a good show.

I got a friend of mine hooked during the last week of deployment and he got mad because we had to wait until November for season two lmaoo
 TheFlyingKitten
07:38:26 Petri Dish/Sorceress
Don't mind me, just terrifying myself with the Final Destination franchise.
 Hades
07:38:17 The OG Ecifircas
I've never watched Arcane, just thought about it. >.< Just binge the edits of it instead.

Should I watch it?
 Boeing
07:37:45 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
Reaper
sounds about right XD
 Dont Fear The Reaper
07:37:13 Reaper / Grim
Boe
I've been stalking for the past 15 minutes, just now decided to pop in and think, "The hell is that-?"
 Voxtexy
07:37:07 Vox
omg omg wait. I'll be distracted on the 9th. Arcane Season 2 drops.
 TheFlyingKitten
07:36:39 Petri Dish/Sorceress
@Vox

I genuinely thought I just read "I was deleted" and was about to lose my few brain cells.
 Boeing
07:36:36 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
what a great time to tune into chat >.>
 Dont Fear The Reaper
07:35:53 Reaper / Grim
Tony
I'm glad you clarified those, I thought it was like sharted. But I wasn't what words combined XD
 Boo
07:35:34 Chrissy
i never got an answer previously. 😖
 Voxtexy
07:35:17 Vox
Tonneoshet,
To be fair, it was deleted days ago. I got so frustrated and then work distracted me lmaoo

Thankfully I do have no work until Tuesday, Soo I'll be able to be on way more often :>
 Hades
07:34:56 The OG Ecifircas
I think snurted is my favorite.
 Tonneoshet
07:34:24 Tony - Neo - Bug
@Vox
Oh gods. Love when music gives that motivation to keep going but sucks it deleted-

@Tag
Mhm!
Gasped=Goosped
Screamed=Scrumpt
Snorted=Snurted
 Creepy Currency
07:33:07 Tag (he/they)
tony, goosped?
 Voxtexy
07:33:04 Vox
I was about to put off this roleplay response for a little bit, but music has been put on. I feel like I can get over my accidental deletion and restart the post now lmao

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Critique on thisMay 15, 2018 02:12 PM


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https://s9.postimg.cc/u0o0j78j3/Untitled412.png
Any improvements I can make? :/

Edited at May 15, 2018 02:13 PM by Cún.
Critique on thisMay 16, 2018 12:44 AM


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The tail and back leg are extremely strange and I can't quite figure out what's going on there. XD

Also, instead of two sitting poses, I'd add one that clearly shows a side view.

Edited at May 16, 2018 12:45 AM by Lykotia
Critique on thisMay 16, 2018 01:57 AM


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Lykotia said:
The tail and back leg are extremely strange and I can't quite figure out what's going on there. XD

Also, instead of two sitting poses, I'd add one that clearly shows a side view.


I haven't a clue what I did either. It's so cringy for other players to notice :')

Thanks for the help. :D
Critique on thisMay 20, 2018 12:26 PM


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Um... maybe make the lower jaw line up a bit more with the upper jaw. Otherwise it kinda looks like an overbite. Hope that helps a bit.
Critique on thisMay 20, 2018 12:27 PM


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Hunters said:
Um... maybe make the lower jaw line up a bit more with the upper jaw. Otherwise it kinda looks like an overbite. Hope that helps a bit.

Thanks, anything is helpful x'D
Critique on thisMay 20, 2018 08:40 PM


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I think it looks really good, but the head looks a tad big for the body, and didnÂ’t quite flow well into it. Other than that, awesome job!
Critique on thisMay 21, 2018 01:52 AM


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Cutting Edge said:
I think it looks really good, but the head looks a tad big for the body, and didn't quite flow well into it. Other than that, awesome job!

>.< Thanks!
Critique on thisMay 21, 2018 02:28 AM


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The back legs are a bit too stretched out to be a natural position, and it looks like the tail is coming off of the back leg. A line there to separate the tail from the leg would help it look less off. ^^

Edited at May 21, 2018 02:29 AM by Evee4ever228
Critique on thisMay 21, 2018 09:53 AM


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Evee4ever228 said:
The back legs are a bit too stretched out to be a natural position, and it looks like the tail is coming off of the back leg. A line there to separate the tail from the leg would help it look less off. ^^

Thanks a lot ^-^

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