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No no, you're the bug, I steal you
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Not if I steal you first-
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@BJake
Sounds like a wonderful idea, wish I could've come up with it myself /J xD

You work too hard sometimes I reckon. Gotta take it easy sometimes aye 🫵
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Castiel
My work Neveah I named after an old classmate because I liked her name. I don't think it's weird
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I may just go to sleep :'D
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09:44:56 Cas (He/They)
is it weird that I'm using some my classmates names for my wolves? some my classmates have funky names
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@BJake
Little bit of art was probably 11+ hours with fine detail.
jk 🤣
 Tonneoshet
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@BJake
Yeah man. You might need to take it easy and go have a nap or something TwT
I offer some virtual shoulder pats but that's about all I got right now haha
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@Upstep Pack
Meh not too hard, did a little bit of art and sat in rain
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09:42:26 Cas (He/They)
Upstep

I know right, black will make the other two colors pop XD
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YouÂ’ve been working hard.
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Have to add, I think black would go very well with your flag 🤣
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@Boe
Ah, it seems I have already seen that suggestion before xD already supported.
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Criticism?January 3, 2018 11:40 PM


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http://preview.ibb.co/gavXBb/image.jpg

I need a little help editing this guy. This is my first hyena drawing~

I'm decent with anatomy, and I've studied up on most things about hyenas, but I haven't got my hands on anything about their faces at the moment. So I'm looking for criticism on the facial structure, how it looks, etc. since I'm not sure on it yet, especially the mouth, jawline, and ears. The flower crown could be commented on as well, although I like it the way it is. It's probably sucky as well >>

So comment any judging below. Keep in mind that there's a border between constructive criticism and being rude, but don't worry, I don't often take offense personally~

Edited at January 3, 2018 11:41 PM by Taboo
Criticism?January 4, 2018 12:21 AM


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I personally think it could use a bit more shading on the sides of the nose.
Criticism?January 29, 2018 07:06 PM


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I'm not sure about the jawline, ears, and fur texture... all seem slightly abnormal. But overall, it's nice. :3
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:16 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/8po2knqfz/6_EC7223_B-3695-479_C-9903-764_DCDCBF117.jpg?dl=1

I think the only thing throwing me off is the nose. It could use more shading, and be more 3-dimensional. I sketched a little example on my iPad for you.

I agree with Seaward about the mouth/jaw being a bit weird, but not overly.

I think it looks awesome.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:18 PM by Deer
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:41 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/58m0hfjld/AF6002_C1-6436-43_C1-_AF8_D-99_E26_C324792.jpg
Here I was just scrolling through google images of hyenas and jotting down/sketching my observations. Hope this helps. :)

I know nothing about hyenas, this is simply what I noticed while scrolling through images.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:44 PM by Deer

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