Wolf Play : Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!
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 Evelyn
10:38:43 
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 The Funtimes
10:37:00 
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 Spookybeast
10:36:10 Will
@Hades

Trust me, it really was *such* a good place the first three years. Things took a turn for the worst last year after the head chef left :(

I'm not sad for leaving it now, as it is, but more so for the fact that it's not the same place it was when I started?
And I'll miss the regulars, but thankfully it's such a neighborhood area I can easily go pop into another restaurant on the street to see them
 Spookybeast
10:34:35 Will
Oh lord
It has been sent 💀🤞
 Hades
10:34:02 
Spookybeast, oh no! Don't take it as a value judgement. I'm sure there's *something* at that job that potentially would have got me but I just didn't stick around long enough to find out.

Keeping a job that sounds... frankly, pretty chaotic for that long is super admirable though.

Are you a bit sad about leaving?
 Spookybeast
10:31:51 Will
@Hades

LMAO
In my defense
That was my first time crying in that position since I started, as a highschooler

Otherwise I would've chewed out every coworker I had about who was supposed to be taking care of the book when I'm not there X'D
 Spookybeast
10:30:44 Will
@Hades

Coolio perfect!
It's always odd looking with weekend shifts >>

 Hades
10:30:24 
Spookybeast, see? That was my issue. All of the other hosts were *really* sensitive and would cry so people were a lot less harsh with them.

I couldn't cry about that sort of stuff even if I wanted to so people were always emboldened to be so much worse to me, HAHA. Like I assure you sir, if I could muster up some feels about this, I'd feel them just for you. <|3
 Hades
10:29:15 
Spookybeast, yep, think so. Threw me for a loop for a second too.
 Rogue Turkey
10:29:09 Rogue is a Ghost
-WP Click-
 Spookybeast
10:28:22 Will
@Hades

Omg I had a six top walk in for a reservation that wasn't in the book

I straight up cried and they felt so bad they went across the street💀
 Hades
10:27:28 
Spookybeast, I'm the same, unfortunately. I always talk big game about jobs but I kind of pride myself on being able to stick out what others can't and customers at my job always *loved* me.

But uh, yeah. Feel you there. Or when people wouldn't write down reservations for significant parties (like 20+) and then they'd show up asking for their table and I had to tell them it would be a 2 hour wait because no one took them down. .-.

Send it! I'm sure it'll feel like a massive weight off your back as soon as it's done.
 Spookybeast
10:27:18 Will
Someone help me do a quick math check >>

If I'm working Friday + Saturday
And two weeks from today is Thursday, the 21st,
That means my last day would be the 16th?
 MLadySkylar
10:27:05 P'Sky
My dad sent me a picture of the grave he dug for my cat,
I can't keep the tears away ;-;
 The Tea Drinkers
10:26:52 Tea, Tea Queen
-WP Click- name suggestions? Preferably song names :D
 Spookybeast
10:24:49 Will
@Hades

I stuck around because we have some regulars and they made it slightly bearable
But yeah this past week was ... God
ToT
People were writing 7:00 reservations before 5:00???
Like I don't even know how you mess up that bad
It screwed up the whole night

Sending my message to the boss man now X"D
 Hades
10:22:33 
Spookybeast, I would give a 5 seconds notice at that rate.

Ohhh... yeah, as soon as you said host, I knew. My most recent job was a hostess job, HELL. Complete hell. But I still stuck it out for a year and some change.

... I quit because my job was deplorable and I still never had to do that. Step-by-step instructions, are you for real?

What was the final straw if that wasn't? xD
 Spookybeast
10:22:23 Will
Omg also we don't get tips at the end of the night anymore
They're put into our paychecks
 Fritz
10:21:45 Corny Joke Maker
He was ready to roast.
 Spookybeast
10:20:57 Will
@Hades

Honestly considering like... Maybe a one weeks notice because I've put up with so much

I'm the hostess

I had to buy reservation book paper myself and write step by step instructions for how to, you know, use the reservation book :')
I was so close to walking out one night


Oof that's awful though T-T

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Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!February 23, 2019 04:04 PM


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@Coyote

I think you should add some crease lines on the back of the neck to show the extreme position looking more natural. Otherwaise, beautiful!

@Carpe

These are looking good!
My only suggestion is to keep working on your anatomy, and you'll be great!

@Snow
Your horses barrel is too long and skinny and the head is a bit blocky. Otherwise, it's looking pretty good! Try using some photo references to help get your anatomy closer ^^


@Brave

It's awesome! My only thing is the eyes are offset a bit. ^^
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!February 23, 2019 04:48 PM


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https://i.postimg.cc/8CZW8qY9/HARPG_Art_Auction.png

Can I get critiques on this? Especially the background, I feel like it could be much better.
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!February 23, 2019 04:54 PM


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Let me compliment it first before the criticssss,

The horse anatomy and the shading on his/her chest is made wonderfully, and your backgrounds get better every day man!

The thing that bothers me is the hill in the back, it's like, pretty visible even with all the fog and to me that ruins the "dramatic" of this piece. Also the colors of the horse feel and look warm, but the environment is cold, blue and foggy, so maybe you could do something with that next time?

Overall this piece is amazing ;w;
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!February 23, 2019 04:58 PM


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Neytrix said:
Let me compliment it first before the criticssss,

The horse anatomy and the shading on his/her chest is made wonderfully, and your backgrounds get better every day man!

The thing that bothers me is the hill in the back, it's like, pretty visible even with all the fog and to me that ruins the "dramatic" of this piece. Also the colors of the horse feel and look warm, but the environment is cold, blue and foggy, so maybe you could do something with that next time?

Overall this piece is amazing ;w;


Cool! Thank man!
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!February 23, 2019 05:04 PM


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I love that piece so much Dragon o.O
Something about the braids is bugging me though >.<
I cant quite grasp it but they seem a little off. I think the fourth one down could be a little slimmer and darker/more shaded? Might just be me.
And like Neytrix said, hill in the back, foggy misty hue, that kinda stuff lol.
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!February 23, 2019 08:27 PM


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That piece is amazing, holy shit!

I'm going to agree with the other two about the hill thin, but I also think you could make it a little bit more dramatic by playing with lighting. Try adding a dark vignette and putting some shadows down in that bottom right corner.

Also if you could even just use a 'Gaussian blur' for the hill in the back, it would add more perspective to the piece.

Edited at February 23, 2019 08:28 PM by Xeno
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!February 26, 2019 08:37 PM


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Thank you guys for the critique. I have one more I wanna post real quick

https://i.postimg.cc/nr55nJkz/Drakehest-Mutation-Auction-Entry.png

I'm a bit happier with the background and shading, but I feel like it could be improved. Can I get a critique please?
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!February 26, 2019 09:22 PM


Carpe Noctem

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Dragon's Fire said:
Thank you guys for the critique. I have one more I wanna post real quick

https://i.postimg.cc/nr55nJkz/Drakehest-Mutation-Auction-Entry.png

I'm a bit happier with the background and shading, but I feel like it could be improved. Can I get a critique please?


I love it!
The only thing I see wrong(may just be me) is that the head(the cheek area) looks a little too big for the body, other than that it's looks amazing.

Edited at February 26, 2019 09:24 PM by Carpe Noctem
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!February 26, 2019 09:58 PM


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Dragon
The rocks and mountains look amazing. One thing that I can point out is that the details compared to the mountain to the right compared to the one behind the horse is that it has less detail even though it's closer while the one further away has more detail. It still looks amazing but from the place of the angle the closer rock would seem to have more detail then the other one but it looks amazing!
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!March 2, 2019 09:29 AM


Dash Attacked

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Blegh. So, I really need some opinions/critique on this piece here.

(This is a screenshot, so ignore the dark grey border.)

https://i.postimg.cc/wTt8btRG/image.png

I've only done a handful of lineless painting style pieces with backgrounds, and I don't draw a lot of birds either, so this is waaay out of my comfort zone for me. But, since I'm a glutton for punishment, I challenged myself to attempt this. And I kind of hate it right now.

It's not exactly done (or, at least, I don't want to call it done yet), but I'm out of ideas on how to make this look better. I really don't like it, but I'm not sure what to do right now. So any advice on that, or critique on what I can fix, would be great. Thanks. ^^;


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