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 Hades
10:45:11 
Spookybeast, ugh. But isn't that how they all start?

I worked at a burger restaurant, so nothing super glamorous, but when I first started everyone was so tight knit - then it just kind of went to crap as my hiring group and several of my favorite coworkers quit. I stuck it out for 7 months after that but it was such hell. Gossip, man. <|3

That is super super nice though!
 Rosie
10:41:37 
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 Rogue Turkey
10:41:19 Rogue is a Ghost
lol
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 Akio
10:40:20 
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 Evelyn
10:38:43 
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 The Funtimes
10:37:00 
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 Spookybeast
10:36:10 Will
@Hades

Trust me, it really was *such* a good place the first three years. Things took a turn for the worst last year after the head chef left :(

I'm not sad for leaving it now, as it is, but more so for the fact that it's not the same place it was when I started?
And I'll miss the regulars, but thankfully it's such a neighborhood area I can easily go pop into another restaurant on the street to see them
 Spookybeast
10:34:35 Will
Oh lord
It has been sent 💀🤞
 Hades
10:34:02 
Spookybeast, oh no! Don't take it as a value judgement. I'm sure there's *something* at that job that potentially would have got me but I just didn't stick around long enough to find out.

Keeping a job that sounds... frankly, pretty chaotic for that long is super admirable though.

Are you a bit sad about leaving?
 Spookybeast
10:31:51 Will
@Hades

LMAO
In my defense
That was my first time crying in that position since I started, as a highschooler

Otherwise I would've chewed out every coworker I had about who was supposed to be taking care of the book when I'm not there X'D
 Spookybeast
10:30:44 Will
@Hades

Coolio perfect!
It's always odd looking with weekend shifts >>

 Hades
10:30:24 
Spookybeast, see? That was my issue. All of the other hosts were *really* sensitive and would cry so people were a lot less harsh with them.

I couldn't cry about that sort of stuff even if I wanted to so people were always emboldened to be so much worse to me, HAHA. Like I assure you sir, if I could muster up some feels about this, I'd feel them just for you. <|3
 Hades
10:29:15 
Spookybeast, yep, think so. Threw me for a loop for a second too.
 Rogue Turkey
10:29:09 Rogue is a Ghost
-WP Click-
 Spookybeast
10:28:22 Will
@Hades

Omg I had a six top walk in for a reservation that wasn't in the book

I straight up cried and they felt so bad they went across the street💀
 Hades
10:27:28 
Spookybeast, I'm the same, unfortunately. I always talk big game about jobs but I kind of pride myself on being able to stick out what others can't and customers at my job always *loved* me.

But uh, yeah. Feel you there. Or when people wouldn't write down reservations for significant parties (like 20+) and then they'd show up asking for their table and I had to tell them it would be a 2 hour wait because no one took them down. .-.

Send it! I'm sure it'll feel like a massive weight off your back as soon as it's done.
 Spookybeast
10:27:18 Will
Someone help me do a quick math check >>

If I'm working Friday + Saturday
And two weeks from today is Thursday, the 21st,
That means my last day would be the 16th?
 MLadySkylar
10:27:05 P'Sky
My dad sent me a picture of the grave he dug for my cat,
I can't keep the tears away ;-;
 The Tea Drinkers
10:26:52 Tea, Tea Queen
-WP Click- name suggestions? Preferably song names :D
 Spookybeast
10:24:49 Will
@Hades

I stuck around because we have some regulars and they made it slightly bearable
But yeah this past week was ... God
ToT
People were writing 7:00 reservations before 5:00???
Like I don't even know how you mess up that bad
It screwed up the whole night

Sending my message to the boss man now X"D

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Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 29, 2019 04:45 AM


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Thank you :D

I kind amesses up on the legs because its my first time trying to do a defensive pose sort of lol

8 should really study actually pictures on poses haha

Again thank you for your advice ^^

Coyote said:
Your background is amazing, I am horrible at backgrounds myself and appreciate the effort that goes into a good one.

I've drawn a draft for the two figures, and it would perfectly fit over that image, if you wanted to copy it as a layer and use it for reference.

Your legs are a bit boneless, but that's perfectly alright, and a commen mistake. The joints don't bend quite right, and are a bit over-extended. Your noses are a little droopy, and the heads, for the size of the animals, could be a bit too big, but that is more a choice of style than anything else.

Your tail is beautiful, even in draft form. It has a very natural position.

Wings never have to be accurate, unless they are on a bird, but I personally like to make the joints a bit more visible, to show the weight of a wing that size.

https://i.postimg.cc/6phHwty3/yjomh.png

I am far from great at anatomy myself, so feel free to dismiss my draft.



Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 29, 2019 04:49 AM


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https://postimg.cc/hhN8Q1pX

I have this little guy.
I am quite proud of him but I know I need to work on wings.
I know the eye is huge but I think it gives him more expression.
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 29, 2019 09:45 AM


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I'm not really able to help on the bird itself but I cam help witbthewinge

Your style is more like an my little pony pegaeus, I understand if you want cartoonybutmaybe include the feathers and add a shop

Maybe study some anatomy etc ^^

Ticci Toby said:
https://postimg.cc/hhN8Q1pX

I have this little guy.
I am quite proud of him but I know I need to work on wings.
I know the eye is huge but I think it gives him more expression.




Maybe look at this image ^^
https://www.google.com/search?q=folded+bird+wings+sketch&safe=strict&client=ms-android-huawei-rev1&prmd=isvn&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwiumqHVqpPgAhW5TBUIHco-A5QQ_AUoAXoECA0QAQ&biw=424&bih=713#imgrc=qx3UPHeh69viWM
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!February 2, 2019 11:45 PM


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https://i.postimg.cc/k7qkGJMF/draft.png

What do you all think of this fellow? I'm doing a sort of art project with my friend where we design an animal/anthro on a month and auction them together.
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!February 3, 2019 09:45 AM


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@Coyote
That looks incredible! You have everything spot on in my opinion. I especially love how fluid the pose is. Beautiful job!
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!February 3, 2019 09:46 AM


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https://i.postimg.cc/mgCGB3cP/Curiousdissi.png

Can I get some Critique on this?
It's supposed to be some sort of Fox Hybrid.
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!February 3, 2019 10:00 AM


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Dragon
It's really well done and the only thing I could really see under close inspection is that the eyes of the animal seem to be looking up and idk if you meant for that but to me I thought the iris needed to be more in the corner to have it looking at the butterfly, again I dont know if that's what you meant to do. Otherwise it looks really good and nothing seems off to me like heck I had to really zoom in XD
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!February 3, 2019 10:27 AM


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B R A V E said:
Dragon
It's really well done and the only thing I could really see under close inspection is that the eyes of the animal seem to be looking up and idk if you meant for that but to me I thought the iris needed to be more in the corner to have it looking at the butterfly, again I dont know if that's what you meant to do. Otherwise it looks really good and nothing seems off to me like heck I had to really zoom in XD


Lol, thank you.
Yea, it was on purpose, the character is blind :,)
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!February 3, 2019 12:13 PM


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Thank you, Dragon's Fire. And your picture is beautiful. My only critique would be the hooves. The hooves seem to connect directly to the bone with little join between it and the legs, but that's a small thing on a wonderful image.
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!February 3, 2019 01:23 PM


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Coyote said:
Thank you, Dragon's Fire. And your picture is beautiful. My only critique would be the hooves. The hooves seem to connect directly to the bone with little join between it and the legs, but that's a small thing on a wonderful image.

Thank you!

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