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 Evelyn
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 Spookybeast
10:36:10 Will
@Hades

Trust me, it really was *such* a good place the first three years. Things took a turn for the worst last year after the head chef left :(

I'm not sad for leaving it now, as it is, but more so for the fact that it's not the same place it was when I started?
And I'll miss the regulars, but thankfully it's such a neighborhood area I can easily go pop into another restaurant on the street to see them
 Spookybeast
10:34:35 Will
Oh lord
It has been sent 💀🤞
 Hades
10:34:02 
Spookybeast, oh no! Don't take it as a value judgement. I'm sure there's *something* at that job that potentially would have got me but I just didn't stick around long enough to find out.

Keeping a job that sounds... frankly, pretty chaotic for that long is super admirable though.

Are you a bit sad about leaving?
 Spookybeast
10:31:51 Will
@Hades

LMAO
In my defense
That was my first time crying in that position since I started, as a highschooler

Otherwise I would've chewed out every coworker I had about who was supposed to be taking care of the book when I'm not there X'D
 Spookybeast
10:30:44 Will
@Hades

Coolio perfect!
It's always odd looking with weekend shifts >>

 Hades
10:30:24 
Spookybeast, see? That was my issue. All of the other hosts were *really* sensitive and would cry so people were a lot less harsh with them.

I couldn't cry about that sort of stuff even if I wanted to so people were always emboldened to be so much worse to me, HAHA. Like I assure you sir, if I could muster up some feels about this, I'd feel them just for you. <|3
 Hades
10:29:15 
Spookybeast, yep, think so. Threw me for a loop for a second too.
 Rogue Turkey
10:29:09 Rogue is a Ghost
-WP Click-
 Spookybeast
10:28:22 Will
@Hades

Omg I had a six top walk in for a reservation that wasn't in the book

I straight up cried and they felt so bad they went across the street💀
 Hades
10:27:28 
Spookybeast, I'm the same, unfortunately. I always talk big game about jobs but I kind of pride myself on being able to stick out what others can't and customers at my job always *loved* me.

But uh, yeah. Feel you there. Or when people wouldn't write down reservations for significant parties (like 20+) and then they'd show up asking for their table and I had to tell them it would be a 2 hour wait because no one took them down. .-.

Send it! I'm sure it'll feel like a massive weight off your back as soon as it's done.
 Spookybeast
10:27:18 Will
Someone help me do a quick math check >>

If I'm working Friday + Saturday
And two weeks from today is Thursday, the 21st,
That means my last day would be the 16th?
 MLadySkylar
10:27:05 P'Sky
My dad sent me a picture of the grave he dug for my cat,
I can't keep the tears away ;-;
 The Tea Drinkers
10:26:52 Tea, Tea Queen
-WP Click- name suggestions? Preferably song names :D
 Spookybeast
10:24:49 Will
@Hades

I stuck around because we have some regulars and they made it slightly bearable
But yeah this past week was ... God
ToT
People were writing 7:00 reservations before 5:00???
Like I don't even know how you mess up that bad
It screwed up the whole night

Sending my message to the boss man now X"D
 Hades
10:22:33 
Spookybeast, I would give a 5 seconds notice at that rate.

Ohhh... yeah, as soon as you said host, I knew. My most recent job was a hostess job, HELL. Complete hell. But I still stuck it out for a year and some change.

... I quit because my job was deplorable and I still never had to do that. Step-by-step instructions, are you for real?

What was the final straw if that wasn't? xD
 Spookybeast
10:22:23 Will
Omg also we don't get tips at the end of the night anymore
They're put into our paychecks
 Fritz
10:21:45 Corny Joke Maker
He was ready to roast.
 Spookybeast
10:20:57 Will
@Hades

Honestly considering like... Maybe a one weeks notice because I've put up with so much

I'm the hostess

I had to buy reservation book paper myself and write step by step instructions for how to, you know, use the reservation book :')
I was so close to walking out one night


Oof that's awful though T-T

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Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 27, 2019 02:29 PM


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https://i.postimg.cc/43BvHBPL/Determination.png

Can I get some critiques on the BG mostly? Something about it bothers me, just don't know what
And, yea, I realize there are no craters in the moon.
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 27, 2019 02:48 PM


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The mountains look a bit odd, since mountains have different shapes, not only a /\ as top ^^

The light seems like it's like seems to spill out, or it's the detail of the mountains, and you already mentioned the moon crates missing.
In my opinion the moon is a tad large but if ya liked it better this way, than it's fine!
But damn the details in this piece is insane, well done ;w;

Edited at January 27, 2019 02:51 PM by Neytrix
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 27, 2019 06:31 PM


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Thank you so much Dragon! I see what you mean by all your suggestions :) and I think I might need to lower the other eyebrow :3
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 27, 2019 07:05 PM


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Thank you Trixy!
Oof, considering I practically live in the mountains you'd think I know better :,)


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No problem. Yea, that would help too ^^

Edited at January 27, 2019 07:07 PM by Dragon's Fire
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 27, 2019 10:04 PM


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Better?
https://i.postimg.cc/rFGTnyHd/Noodle5.png
https://i.postimg.cc/MGzRgGtv/Noodle4.png

Edited at January 27, 2019 10:05 PM by B R A V E
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 27, 2019 10:50 PM


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Oof, those are so cute *.*
I literally can't see a single thing wrong with them!
Great job!

(Shoot, now I'm dying for some of your art XD)

Edited at January 27, 2019 10:51 PM by Dragon's Fire
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 27, 2019 11:04 PM


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Lol thank you so much! It means a lot coming from artists I look up to I just wish I could be more detailed in my fur. But I did open up a shop...that just got full but I do have a shop XD
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 28, 2019 02:04 PM


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Thank you, midnight demons, and thanks, Dragon's Fire, I know what you mean.
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 28, 2019 04:29 PM


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https://i.postimg.cc/DZ6XRXRB/Untitled41.jpg
Looking for some tips on this peice ^^
Wip for a contest

Also if you could try and physically show anatomy errors that would be Awsome!
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 28, 2019 06:48 PM


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Your background is amazing, I am horrible at backgrounds myself and appreciate the effort that goes into a good one.

I've drawn a draft for the two figures, and it would perfectly fit over that image, if you wanted to copy it as a layer and use it for reference.

Your legs are a bit boneless, but that's perfectly alright, and a commen mistake. The joints don't bend quite right, and are a bit over-extended. Your noses are a little droopy, and the heads, for the size of the animals, could be a bit too big, but that is more a choice of style than anything else.

Your tail is beautiful, even in draft form. It has a very natural position.

Wings never have to be accurate, unless they are on a bird, but I personally like to make the joints a bit more visible, to show the weight of a wing that size.

https://i.postimg.cc/6phHwty3/yjomh.png

I am far from great at anatomy myself, so feel free to dismiss my draft.

Edited at January 28, 2019 06:49 PM by Coyote

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