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 Spookybeast
10:31:51 Will
@Hades

LMAO
In my defense
That was my first time crying in that position since I started, as a highschooler

Otherwise I would've chewed out every coworker I had about who was supposed to be taking care of the book when I'm not there X'D
 Spookybeast
10:30:44 Will
@Hades

Coolio perfect!
It's always odd looking with weekend shifts >>

 Hades
10:30:24 
Spookybeast, see? That was my issue. All of the other hosts were *really* sensitive and would cry so people were a lot less harsh with them.

I couldn't cry about that sort of stuff even if I wanted to so people were always emboldened to be so much worse to me, HAHA. Like I assure you sir, if I could muster up some feels about this, I'd feel them just for you. <|3
 Hades
10:29:15 
Spookybeast, yep, think so. Threw me for a loop for a second too.
 Rogue Turkey
10:29:09 Rogue is a Ghost
-WP Click-
 Spookybeast
10:28:22 Will
@Hades

Omg I had a six top walk in for a reservation that wasn't in the book

I straight up cried and they felt so bad they went across the street💀
 Hades
10:27:28 
Spookybeast, I'm the same, unfortunately. I always talk big game about jobs but I kind of pride myself on being able to stick out what others can't and customers at my job always *loved* me.

But uh, yeah. Feel you there. Or when people wouldn't write down reservations for significant parties (like 20+) and then they'd show up asking for their table and I had to tell them it would be a 2 hour wait because no one took them down. .-.

Send it! I'm sure it'll feel like a massive weight off your back as soon as it's done.
 Spookybeast
10:27:18 Will
Someone help me do a quick math check >>

If I'm working Friday + Saturday
And two weeks from today is Thursday, the 21st,
That means my last day would be the 16th?
 MLadySkylar
10:27:05 P'Sky
My dad sent me a picture of the grave he dug for my cat,
I can't keep the tears away ;-;
 The Tea Drinkers
10:26:52 Tea, Tea Queen
-WP Click- name suggestions? Preferably song names :D
 Spookybeast
10:24:49 Will
@Hades

I stuck around because we have some regulars and they made it slightly bearable
But yeah this past week was ... God
ToT
People were writing 7:00 reservations before 5:00???
Like I don't even know how you mess up that bad
It screwed up the whole night

Sending my message to the boss man now X"D
 Hades
10:22:33 
Spookybeast, I would give a 5 seconds notice at that rate.

Ohhh... yeah, as soon as you said host, I knew. My most recent job was a hostess job, HELL. Complete hell. But I still stuck it out for a year and some change.

... I quit because my job was deplorable and I still never had to do that. Step-by-step instructions, are you for real?

What was the final straw if that wasn't? xD
 Spookybeast
10:22:23 Will
Omg also we don't get tips at the end of the night anymore
They're put into our paychecks
 Fritz
10:21:45 Corny Joke Maker
He was ready to roast.
 Spookybeast
10:20:57 Will
@Hades

Honestly considering like... Maybe a one weeks notice because I've put up with so much

I'm the hostess

I had to buy reservation book paper myself and write step by step instructions for how to, you know, use the reservation book :')
I was so close to walking out one night


Oof that's awful though T-T
 Fritz
10:20:34 Corny Joke Maker
Why did the turkey bring a microphone?
 MLadySkylar
10:19:46 P'Sky
ExH (50 rated) howls at the moon!
57 wolves hear them, and 37 wolves howled back!
What a Howl! You have earned 3 Moon Flowers!
 Hades
10:18:50 
Spookybeast, I think the worst I've got is they just kinda went, "Okay? And?" when I tested positive for COVID so I still had to come into week sick as a dog. COVID was well-known at this point too but just... manual labor job things. lol

What happened? I don't know, restaurants have always been my worst jobs. 4 hour shifts there are 10x worse than 14 hour shifts digging holes.
 Spookybeast
10:17:12 Will
@Hades

Yeah
We were going to go on summer break
And then nada

I only returned to kind of test the waters
Plus I had stuff come up where I needed a second job ;;
But dear lord the past two weeks have been hell
 Rogue Turkey
10:17:00 Rogue is a Ghost
I need a new theme for my pack..
Any ideas?

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Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 22, 2019 06:41 PM


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thanks I'll try that ^^
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 22, 2019 06:52 PM


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Thank you! That is very helpful. ^^
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 22, 2019 07:13 PM


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You're both welcome, I can't wait to see your progress. :3
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 22, 2019 07:18 PM


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https://i.postimg.cc/hG3xTj7D/fb8adbb3-5fff-474a-abae-fcd7559cf627.png

Help me it's a sketch ok.

For midnight and thunder

I use two layers at least and you gotta know were the light is coming from, and for thunder you could add some more shading under the ears on the first one, and add some under the chin, and you could use more shading becuase it took me a bit to find the shading, other ways it's good, coloring is good.

Edited at January 22, 2019 07:22 PM by Snow spark
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 22, 2019 07:26 PM


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Thanks snow spark. Yours looks pretty good. It's pretty solid looking but messy. I know that's the ruff draft. For shading I suggest a bit under the neck fur. Maybe add some spots where you can see the fur sprout out. Can't wait to see how it turns out.
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 22, 2019 07:37 PM


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Thanks thunder, I'll do that.
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 27, 2019 01:01 PM


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https://i.postimg.cc/tJY2Z23n/Vah.png

Can I get some critiques on this, please? I made it for a friend based on their design and creature, and I don't plan on shading it (so the colour is more accurate for a reference).
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 27, 2019 01:02 PM


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Coyote said:
https://i.postimg.cc/tJY2Z23n/Vah.png

Can I get some critiques on this, please? I made it for a friend based on their design and creature, and I don't plan on shading it (so the colour is more accurate for a reference).


i have no words it is beautiful

Edited at January 27, 2019 01:02 PM by midnight demons
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 27, 2019 02:04 PM


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Credit : 205427
https://i.postimg.cc/fR32Zr8Q/Noodle2.png

Paws are a big oof for me and so are muzzles but does anyone have any advice with that or anything else on how to improve my drawings?
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 27, 2019 02:25 PM


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Coyote said:
https://i.postimg.cc/tJY2Z23n/Vah.png

Can I get some critiques on this, please? I made it for a friend based on their design and creature, and I don't plan on shading it (so the colour is more accurate for a reference).


This looks excellent!
I dont have much to say on this, but I will say the neck posing looks off to me, it doesnt seem to flow with the way the rest of the body is twisted.
I think instead of a sharp turn right behind the shoulders, with how long the neck its it would probably have been better to let it curve continue down with the flow of the back and then about half way down or something have it curve back up for the head.
If that makes any sense.
Again, great job!



B R A V E said:
Credit : 205427
https://i.postimg.cc/fR32Zr8Q/Noodle2.png

Paws are a big oof for me and so are muzzles but does anyone have any advice with that or anything else on how to improve my drawings?


This is too adorable *^*

I think the best thing to help with the paw would be A) Make it larger, it looks a bit too tiny. and B) You should probably make the line on the top of the first toe (The one farthest back) match the lines on the tops of the other two toe (Or vice versa). It doesn't match the other two because, while it's straight and flat on the top, the other two hold a curve.
For the muzzle, I love it! The only think is the nose and mouth seem too tilted for the face. Id say bring the right side (Right side of the drawing, as in the side the eye can be seen) down a bit and straighten the nose out some
The only other thing that would need to be touched would be the ear thats perked up seems to need to be widened a bit to match the ear thats laying over.

Hope this helps!
Such a cute drawing! ^^

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