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 Arctic Moon
11:35:27 NY, Malo, Arctic
Lamb
I fully agree with you. Minority groups should not have rights persecuted in any way shape or form. All i'm saying is that the U.S has survived terrible presidents before and what happened happened.
 Serpents
11:35:00 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
well im off to the snnow also anyone got wintery newsyears pelt iteas pm me ill try and make them
 Baphomet
11:34:43 As Above So Below
Ashmaka nose Boops Drudueva in a meadow.

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 To the Slaughter
11:34:15 Lamb
Wishing everyone in the US luck, at the very least. Stay safe gang. I'll even pay for your flights to the highlands
 Hades
11:33:20 
Feiella, sure.
 Baphomet
11:33:03 As Above So Below
my Pms are still open for political vents
 Feiella
11:32:54 Fei The Sleepy Ghost
Hades
That is enough
 Salem
11:32:34 Very Wisdom ✨
I know someone else said this earlier but if you'd like to vent and chat is clearing up about politics, my pms are open to anyone who wants that :P
 Mysterious Moon Clan
11:32:08 She/Her, Moon
Teddy

Oh cool :)
 teddy
11:32:07 its yellow
serpents
do you mean civil
 Hades
11:32:00 
"Harass." Hah. Okay.
Well, I hope you get everything you want from this presidency and more. God knows millions and millions won't.
 To the Slaughter
11:31:46 Lamb
No one is harassing eachother? what is going on
 icemoons
11:31:36 Hazbinhotelobsessed!
shit guys I'm overheating... POTS sucks...
 teddy
11:31:30 its yellow
myst
cool! my grandparents have a place in gothenburg. i visited tjolöholm slott this summer as well! i'm from stockholm
 Purgatory
11:31:23 Purgatorio/Purge
Delete my post, didn't see that.
 OneFourOne
11:31:16 Johnny, he/him
I'm actually scared to live in my own country nowadays. Only go outside if I have to. Online school to avoid the danger- I hate it here.
 Hades
11:31:09 
CriesInTheNight, it's the fault of the person who turns this mature conversation into "drama", not mine for bringing it up.

Hard topics can be discussed in WolfPlay chat and there's no rules against politics.
 Feiella
11:30:51 Fei The Sleepy Ghost
Hades, Purgatory
Enough
 Serpents
11:30:17 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
it seems silvel to me and I have seen not sevil chats

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critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:00 AM


Vennenum

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stole my sister's drawing tablet.

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Feel like there's something off about this but I can't put my finger on what...?

*Edit to add: this was based off a lineart.


Edited at June 28, 2020 10:31 PM by Vennenum
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:05 AM


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That's awesome! I'd say the neck maybe arches back a bit too much, the eyes are a little small, has a bit of an underbite and the fur's very line-y but those are such small things i don't think it would really affect the piece- it's really good!
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:17 AM


Hallbjorns

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Hmm I see what you mean. Would red lining be alright? I'd love to play around a bit to see what might be giving the off feeling <3
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:29 AM


Vennenum

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Considering I was coloring off a lineart, the only thing I changed were the nose and the eyes.
You're welcome to do a redline, but I'm not confident on my lineart-fixing skills. :')
critique neededJune 28, 2020 02:06 PM


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It does look off, but I can't help you on what looks off. It looks great though.
critique neededJune 28, 2020 02:06 PM


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The eye's a tad small, but other than that I think it looks lovely Venn.
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:23 PM


Blizzard's Star

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Smol eyes
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:24 PM


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The ear looks a little twisted out about halfway up it
The base is facing forwards, but then the tip is facing to the side
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:24 PM


The Legendary Wolf

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Sorry if I seem rude but uh
I think it is that it looks like it's tongue is brown, though it it the lips. But it is an AMAZING DRAWING!
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:25 PM


The Legendary Wolf

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And the eyes are a little small

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