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 Hades
10:30:24 
Spookybeast, see? That was my issue. All of the other hosts were *really* sensitive and would cry so people were a lot less harsh with them.

I couldn't cry about that sort of stuff even if I wanted to so people were always emboldened to be so much worse to me, HAHA. Like I assure you sir, if I could muster up some feels about this, I'd feel them just for you. <|3
 Hades
10:29:15 
Spookybeast, yep, think so. Threw me for a loop for a second too.
 Rogue Turkey
10:29:09 Rogue is a Ghost
-WP Click-
 Spookybeast
10:28:22 Will
@Hades

Omg I had a six top walk in for a reservation that wasn't in the book

I straight up cried and they felt so bad they went across the street💀
 Hades
10:27:28 
Spookybeast, I'm the same, unfortunately. I always talk big game about jobs but I kind of pride myself on being able to stick out what others can't and customers at my job always *loved* me.

But uh, yeah. Feel you there. Or when people wouldn't write down reservations for significant parties (like 20+) and then they'd show up asking for their table and I had to tell them it would be a 2 hour wait because no one took them down. .-.

Send it! I'm sure it'll feel like a massive weight off your back as soon as it's done.
 Spookybeast
10:27:18 Will
Someone help me do a quick math check >>

If I'm working Friday + Saturday
And two weeks from today is Thursday, the 21st,
That means my last day would be the 16th?
 MLadySkylar
10:27:05 P'Sky
My dad sent me a picture of the grave he dug for my cat,
I can't keep the tears away ;-;
 The Tea Drinkers
10:26:52 Tea, Tea Queen
-WP Click- name suggestions? Preferably song names :D
 Spookybeast
10:24:49 Will
@Hades

I stuck around because we have some regulars and they made it slightly bearable
But yeah this past week was ... God
ToT
People were writing 7:00 reservations before 5:00???
Like I don't even know how you mess up that bad
It screwed up the whole night

Sending my message to the boss man now X"D
 Hades
10:22:33 
Spookybeast, I would give a 5 seconds notice at that rate.

Ohhh... yeah, as soon as you said host, I knew. My most recent job was a hostess job, HELL. Complete hell. But I still stuck it out for a year and some change.

... I quit because my job was deplorable and I still never had to do that. Step-by-step instructions, are you for real?

What was the final straw if that wasn't? xD
 Spookybeast
10:22:23 Will
Omg also we don't get tips at the end of the night anymore
They're put into our paychecks
 Fritz
10:21:45 Corny Joke Maker
He was ready to roast.
 Spookybeast
10:20:57 Will
@Hades

Honestly considering like... Maybe a one weeks notice because I've put up with so much

I'm the hostess

I had to buy reservation book paper myself and write step by step instructions for how to, you know, use the reservation book :')
I was so close to walking out one night


Oof that's awful though T-T
 Fritz
10:20:34 Corny Joke Maker
Why did the turkey bring a microphone?
 MLadySkylar
10:19:46 P'Sky
ExH (50 rated) howls at the moon!
57 wolves hear them, and 37 wolves howled back!
What a Howl! You have earned 3 Moon Flowers!
 Hades
10:18:50 
Spookybeast, I think the worst I've got is they just kinda went, "Okay? And?" when I tested positive for COVID so I still had to come into week sick as a dog. COVID was well-known at this point too but just... manual labor job things. lol

What happened? I don't know, restaurants have always been my worst jobs. 4 hour shifts there are 10x worse than 14 hour shifts digging holes.
 Spookybeast
10:17:12 Will
@Hades

Yeah
We were going to go on summer break
And then nada

I only returned to kind of test the waters
Plus I had stuff come up where I needed a second job ;;
But dear lord the past two weeks have been hell
 Rogue Turkey
10:17:00 Rogue is a Ghost
I need a new theme for my pack..
Any ideas?
 Moo Cow
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 Fritz
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Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 19, 2019 01:22 PM


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Welcome artists of Wolfplay!


If you're looking for Critiques on your art, or to critique others, here's the place!

Artists of every style and medium, weather you're a Newbie to art or have been drawing for years, all art is welcome here!

Quick Rules:
- All art MUST follow WP Rules and have proper credits
- Only CONSTRUCTIVE Criticism (CC) allowed here! Be kind and courteous to other players, bringing another player down, bullying, and rude remarks will NOT be tolerated!
- Please Give a Critique to receive a Critique. If you constantly post your own art for critiquing but do not offer any other artists critique or helpful comments you will be kindly asked to leave the thread. It's ideal to give a critique for every artwork you post, although not required
- Please try to limit yourself to posting one drawing daily to allow others a chance to get their art noticed. However, there is no limit to the amount of critiques posted daily/at a time.
- Refrain from reposting an artwork. It is acceptable if you did not receive any Critiques after a week.

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- Please make sure your Critiques are constructive. If you comment regarding a mistake in the art, please try to provide a solution of some sort that would actually help the artist.
- Remember: Every artist is different, and nobody is perfect!

Everybody have fun and enjoy yourselves!

Note to Mods: I didn't see any threads for artist to critique each other like this, but if there has been one go ahead and lock this.
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Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 21, 2019 07:23 PM


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I don't draw a lot of anthros or humanoids and would love some critiques. I'm also curious if other artists notice the same things that bother me about this piece.

http://oi68.tinypic.com/25tbytk.jpg

There... aren't any other drawings for me to critique but I will do so when there are.
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 21, 2019 07:45 PM


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It's jus the markings on the leg that bug me, it's switched around from anthro to feral form :,D
But I've never drawn anthros before. It does look very good though.

However, the snout look very stocky in the human form. Maybe make it more smooth and rounded? Other than that, it looks wonderful
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 21, 2019 08:25 PM


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Thanks, Wood Carve, and yeah, the tattoo is the wrong way round, but I'd merged the layers by then and couldn't fix it. '-_-

Dolphin faces are astoundingly hard to draw while keeping human, and I didn't really like the end result either. Well, it's a learning experience, I suppose. I designed the character for a friend and can work on drawing her again some time.
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 22, 2019 04:32 PM


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Coyote;
I would also suggest extending the snout a bit, but other than that, I think it looks fantastic! ^^

https://sta.sh/21q7eninw5f9?edit=1

I'm looking for ways to improve overall, so any constructive critique is helpful! Here are some things I am working on:
- Shading
- Fur markings (suggestions / advice for this is especially desired)
- Paws (+ adding paw pads)
- Fur details (like, suggesting fur in a drawing... not full on painting it)
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 22, 2019 04:39 PM


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Thank you, Pure Ones.

You're colouring is fantastic, to start with. I always have trouble with colouring myself.

For shading, I usually make a new layer, select the outside (usually the blank background), then inverse the selection to highlight only the foreground/character. Then, I put the colour a bit darker than the original colour, usually just enough to be visible without sticking out too much.

http://oi64.tinypic.com/16kypl1.jpg

This is my example for light shading. I blur the edges of the shadow so it blends a little better, but I'm rotten at shading so I don't really know best.



Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 22, 2019 05:36 PM


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I'm making a digital art of this character that i got
https://postimg.cc/LhBk7Ct4
know this i could say is my first digital art so i know it's gonna be bad but i just wanted some tips so if anyone could give me tips for the things I put it red that would help a lot :)
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 22, 2019 05:54 PM


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I'm Auctioning off two designs with light shading.
https://wolfplaygame.com/forums.php?f=4&t=32521

I want to know how to improve my shading for the future and make it more advanced. I also want to know what spots I should be shading since i'm new to it.
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 22, 2019 06:27 PM


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midnight demons, I use lines and shapes, circles mostly, to build a draft before drawing. If you are using a drawing app that lets you do layers, do layers! I use a layer for the draft, a layer for the lines, two or three for colour (depending on the complexity of the markings), and two for shading. Don't blend layers unless you are certain you won't need to edit them anymore.

Thunder clan, I would make the shading cover a bit more area where you've put it already, and blurred to help it blend in well. Where there are lines, such as fur or dips like around the eye, light, blended shading works well.
Critique Thread - All Artists Welcome!January 22, 2019 06:28 PM


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Thanks coyote! I'll give it a try when a do another one.

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