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Ghost
you're in the same timezone as me so I won't accidentally miss it I'm pretty sure xD
I'll wish you one tomorrow lol
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Ss thanks and ok I might get it then
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dh hero for sure
happy early birthday
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Boe yea XD the 9th XD
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Thanks Tony 😊
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Actually never mind I might Actually nit need another wolf for my team
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08:54:09 
My area too Castiel. We've had our bags packed since yesterday. It got close enough that it could have reached our house in under an hour with yesterday's high wind, but no evacuation notice. Today the winds shifted so it' currently blowing the other way, but we'll stay ready. Smoke is awful.
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Happy early birthday dude!
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it's your birthday tomorrow? O.o
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Tony deffently and it's my birthday tomorrow so XD
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desti

they worst that's happened so far is that the smoke from the fires is making people sick myself included

I have had a on going headache for days now
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Whew! Mean as then. Enjoy the time off while ya can :>
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just realized how damned hard tundra is to explore in the winter
white on white, I cannot see where the path is lol
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just learned there are multiple brush fires in my area
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Amor,

Im sorry :(
That sounds really hard
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Critique?July 6, 2018 02:35 AM


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Just trying out some semi-realistic fur practice

Critiques on lighting, blending, etc. are greatly appreciated. If you have suggestions on how to make it look more realistic, that's also greatly appreciated

https://s33.postimg.cc/6dgalc133/Fur_Practice.png
Critique?July 7, 2018 05:36 PM


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So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!
Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows
I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a greater realistic look

2. Color
Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!
Critique?July 7, 2018 05:51 PM


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Dragon's Fire said:
So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!
Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows
I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a greater realistic look

2. Color
Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!



I agree with both! For fur, I personally think that the most important thing is edge variation. Have very stark contrast as well, as right now, you have a lot of softer edges.

For color, instead of shading with black and white, try changing your hue variation! For wolves with white fur, try blue-tinted gray, cream, anything. For wolves with cream fur, try shading with a reddish-brown. Of course, these are only like two in a billion examples lol

Another thing I think is important with fur is fur direction. Look at real wolves and see how their fur grows in like ten different directions.

These are only my personal observations on drawing fur. I like what you have going so far, you can do it!
Critique?July 7, 2018 08:12 PM


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Honestly I have no critique but this is awesome.On a real animal I think the color would be a little more varied though but I under stand you might have not added it because of it being practice.
Critique?July 7, 2018 10:18 PM


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x3 I haven't tried putting colored edges on a practice, I might just do that. Thanks guys >^<

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