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 The Night Walker
11:46:56 Anemoia/Aedra PS4Usr
Eli
Yeah sure, pull up to the next window.

Crawl back to pms you little critter-
 Nevermore.
11:46:26 Never/Nev
Vah

I would be fuming. He'd been sacrificed in my pack. Thrown into a volcano.
 Feiella
11:46:05 Fei The Sleepy Ghost
Sleepy shark
 NotTheRealWassip
11:45:40 
Can I get a whopper with some fries please? That'll be all
 Zeraphia
11:44:46 Vah is Vah
Never

400+ kids and not a single GB.

I'm not saying I'm mad... but I definitely am.
 Nevermore.
11:43:57 Never/Nev
Vah

Not a single GB from him? :o Naughty boy..
 Zeraphia
11:43:18 Vah is Vah
Never

Oh man, if I get more, I'll send them your way.

I currently have the random garbage that Kalen threw at me after he died.

The big jerk.
 Feiella
11:42:36 Fei The Sleepy Ghost
Has chat become McDonalds?
 Nevermore.
11:42:14 Never/Nev
Vah

I would be so happy if my girls consistently gave me DHs like they used to.. 😔 The only boost I'll keep.
 NotTheRealWassip
11:41:51 
Bob's burgers
 Feiella
11:41:38 Fei The Sleepy Ghost
Vah
I'm planning to train the pups
 Zeraphia
11:39:46 Vah is Vah
Fei

Oh man, yeah. I would too honestly.

Maybe not the DH because I don't use them. But the other two for sure.
 The Night Walker
11:37:48 Anemoia/Aedra PS4Usr
Salty icecream
 Feiella
11:37:46 Fei The Sleepy Ghost
Vah
Lucky maybe but I froze when I found out
 Zeraphia
11:36:40 Vah is Vah
;-;

Lucky
 Feiella
11:36:13 Fei The Sleepy Ghost
a viti, a dark fallow and a divine health were born into my pack. My wolves like to scare me
 Broken Archangel
11:34:10 Samael, Fallen, Arch
Ugh I need to explore but I can't be bothered XD
 BellJake
11:34:09 Don't call me BJ.
Fighting on, doing art with the wet floor >:)
 Feiella
11:28:07 Fei The Sleepy Ghost
Serpents
At this point I'd like to see your wolves in explore and without them hiding behind six moose
 Buddha
11:26:04 
why serpents?

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Criticism NeededNovember 9, 2017 10:25 PM


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https://s2.postimg.org/cm6tysat5/Screen_Shot_2017-11-09_at_11.21.15_PM.png

Thought? Post below.

Edited at November 9, 2017 10:28 PM by Aphmau clan
Criticism NeededNovember 9, 2017 10:28 PM


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Not bad (\^-^/)
Criticism NeededNovember 9, 2017 10:29 PM


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It's not really that bad in all honesty.
The tail and maybe the front leg on the side we're viewing could use a little work maybe, though the tail could actually depend on the breed of cat the drawing is of.
But overall it's pretty good

Edited at November 9, 2017 10:30 PM by Destinations End
Criticism NeededNovember 10, 2017 01:28 AM


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The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:
https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:
Criticism NeededJanuary 1, 2018 09:11 PM


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Siarczek said:
The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:
https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:


This helps me out! Thank you
Criticism NeededJanuary 3, 2018 03:49 AM


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Aww so cool!

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