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11:49:57 Cuore

It does. ^^ neat

11:46:35 Ecifircas

Schei, awh, that's so sad. :'(

Happy birthday! The little 'Happy Birthday' gif WolfPlay puts on your page for the day matches your page theme, at least. =)

Schei

11:45:53 Cuore

Cae
Thank you:D
You guys really made my day

Emmet
I like DH or Mela

Kháos

11:44:53

DUDE How am I supposed to NOT be chaotic in this ER?! The staff have energy drinks and pizza, and just watched a fucking 9/11 meme reel with a patient. Reel guy has an accent and goes "hello! :D Welcome to American Airlines. This might be your last flight. Next 9/11... or 12 percent chance of..." 😭 I'm trying my best to be serious here- this is impossible. And they're all making jokes with everyone and just told my mom that she has Covid just on her jeans now because she sat on the floor. And they have accents making it so much worse for me to be serious.

Caeruleum

11:43:24 Cae, Blue

Happy birthday ^^

Continental Wolves

11:42:28 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Schei
Do you have a favorite boost or defect?

Schei

11:41:45 Cuore

Thank you guys, it means a lot really <3

The Reaper

11:41:42 Reaper / Grim

Schei
Happy birthday!!

Continental Wolves

11:41:25 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Schei
Happy birthdayyy

Kháos

11:40:44

Schei-
Happy birthday!! :0

Zeraphia

11:40:40 Space Pirate Captain

Never

XDD honestly though. My sister confused as to why and I'm just like ... dying.

Emmet

Oh my goodness. I... couldn't.

Schei

11:40:08 Cuore

wpg is the only one to remember my birthday :')

Spirit Wolves

11:39:59 Spirit (Her/She)

Nux

Looks like she likes bad kidneys.

Kháos

11:39:48

e.e They swabbed my nose. My nose has been tickled just like that doorknob has been giggled.

Continental Wolves

11:38:47 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Nux
Thats criminal level of bad pups with the kind of bloodlines she has

~♥Nux♥~

11:37:11 You're just yellow

Oh yeah, that reminds me.

-WP Click-

Check out her latest litter, Spoops. I'm suing her for false hope.

~♥Nux♥~

11:35:38 You're just yellow

>:)

Continental Wolves

11:35:28 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

I see my favorite kneecap in chat

Continental Wolves

11:35:03 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Vah
I only stayed up until 5am.. Only about an hour before my dad left for work

Nevermore.

11:34:48 Never/Nev

Vah

Thats so true >.> I remember having such a hard time falling asleep at my parent's house but now it hits 9 and I'm done lmao Doesn't take much for me to sleep these days...

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Schei

11:49:57 Cuore

It does. ^^ neat

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11:46:35 Ecifircas

Schei, awh, that's so sad. :'(

Happy birthday! The little 'Happy Birthday' gif WolfPlay puts on your page for the day matches your page theme, at least. =)

Schei

11:45:53 Cuore

Cae
Thank you:D
You guys really made my day

Emmet
I like DH or Mela

Kháos

11:44:53

Caeruleum

11:43:24 Cae, Blue

Happy birthday ^^

Continental Wolves

11:42:28 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Schei
Do you have a favorite boost or defect?

Schei

11:41:45 Cuore

Thank you guys, it means a lot really <3

The Reaper

11:41:42 Reaper / Grim

Schei
Happy birthday!!

Continental Wolves

11:41:25 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Schei
Happy birthdayyy

Kháos

11:40:44

Schei-
Happy birthday!! :0

Zeraphia

11:40:40 Space Pirate Captain

Never

XDD honestly though. My sister confused as to why and I'm just like ... dying.

Emmet

Oh my goodness. I... couldn't.

Schei

11:40:08 Cuore

wpg is the only one to remember my birthday :')

Spirit Wolves

11:39:59 Spirit (Her/She)

Nux

Looks like she likes bad kidneys.

Kháos

11:39:48

e.e They swabbed my nose. My nose has been tickled just like that doorknob has been giggled.

Continental Wolves

11:38:47 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Nux
Thats criminal level of bad pups with the kind of bloodlines she has

~♥Nux♥~

11:37:11 You're just yellow

Oh yeah, that reminds me.

-WP Click-

Check out her latest litter, Spoops. I'm suing her for false hope.

~♥Nux♥~

11:35:38 You're just yellow

>:)

Continental Wolves

11:35:28 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

I see my favorite kneecap in chat

Continental Wolves

11:35:03 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Vah
I only stayed up until 5am.. Only about an hour before my dad left for work

Nevermore.

11:34:48 Never/Nev

Vah

Thats so true >.> I remember having such a hard time falling asleep at my parent's house but now it hits 9 and I'm done lmao Doesn't take much for me to sleep these days...

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July 6, 2018 02:35 AM

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Just trying out some semi-realistic fur practice

Critiques on lighting, blending, etc. are greatly appreciated. If you have suggestions on how to make it look more realistic, that's also greatly appreciated

https://s33.postimg.cc/6dgalc133/Fur_Practice.png

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July 7, 2018 05:36 PM

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So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!

Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows

I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a greater realistic look

2. Color

Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!

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July 7, 2018 05:51 PM

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Dragon's Fire said:
So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!
Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows
I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a greater realistic look

2. Color
Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!

I agree with both! For fur, I personally think that the most important thing is edge variation. Have very stark contrast as well, as right now, you have a lot of softer edges.

For color, instead of shading with black and white, try changing your hue variation! For wolves with white fur, try blue-tinted gray, cream, anything. For wolves with cream fur, try shading with a reddish-brown. Of course, these are only like two in a billion examples lol

Another thing I think is important with fur is fur direction. Look at real wolves and see how their fur grows in like ten different directions.

These are only my personal observations on drawing fur. I like what you have going so far, you can do it!

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July 7, 2018 08:12 PM

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Honestly I have no critique but this is awesome.On a real animal I think the color would be a little more varied though but I under stand you might have not added it because of it being practice.

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July 7, 2018 10:18 PM

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x3 I haven't tried putting colored edges on a practice, I might just do that. Thanks guys >^<

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