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 Enigma
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I definitely cried while writing it :') So many memories... I wish I had said goodbye to so many others whose accounts no longer exist on here
 TheFlyingKitten
07:01:00 Petri Dish/Sorceress
Man, it's kinda goofy that we can't regrow enamel. Do you know how powerful humans would be if we could just... keep that layer intact?
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You're welcome! I'm glad you like it!
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@Lavender

Ooh! I like that! Thank you!
 technoblade
06:59:02 Lil Techy | Techno
enigma

your bio is gonna make me cry
 Archived Stars
06:58:23 Archive
Oh, well. Hope they don't get good pups then, and have to deal with them.
 Archived Stars
06:57:56 Archive
Sobbing. Wasted mush and a breeding with a male that's a matron's blessing and a defect in hopes to get good pups
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Heya Vox
 Magnus Bane
06:56:53 Mag/Maggy
And there's nothing a mod or anyone can do
 Voxtexy
06:56:49 Vox
That's why I'd ask /before/ paying to breed to a wolf.
 Magnus Bane
06:56:33 Mag/Maggy
You usually discuss that before breeding
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 Archived Stars
06:56:14 Archive
I asked them about it, and they told me I get none. I'm trying to be nice, but it feels like I was scammed
 Lavender Moon
06:55:59 
TheFlyingKitten,

Maybe Aven? It means radiance
 technoblade
06:55:35 Lil Techy | Techno
that is why you always make a contract about pick of litter and stuff
 Voxtexy
06:55:25 Vox
Archived Stars,
That's the risk you take. That's why I typically only breed to studs, unless a friend of mine lets me breed to a female of theirs.
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06:55:15 Willow / Tibby
ello Skies
 Archived Stars
06:54:48 Archive
Vox...
I'm sobbing. I paid someone 30-50 mush for a breeding and they told me I don't get the pups
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06:54:36 vi, devi
Eni
Good to chat with you too!
Stay safe there, friend. <3
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06:54:31 Wander
Thanks guys! He is perfectly healthy! I was there for every single doctor's appointment. But I'm watching her son right now and I will take him to visit in the hospital tomorrow!

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Critique?July 6, 2018 02:35 AM


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Just trying out some semi-realistic fur practice

Critiques on lighting, blending, etc. are greatly appreciated. If you have suggestions on how to make it look more realistic, that's also greatly appreciated

https://s33.postimg.cc/6dgalc133/Fur_Practice.png
Critique?July 7, 2018 05:36 PM


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So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!
Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows
I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a greater realistic look

2. Color
Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!
Critique?July 7, 2018 05:51 PM


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Dragon's Fire said:
So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!
Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows
I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a greater realistic look

2. Color
Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!



I agree with both! For fur, I personally think that the most important thing is edge variation. Have very stark contrast as well, as right now, you have a lot of softer edges.

For color, instead of shading with black and white, try changing your hue variation! For wolves with white fur, try blue-tinted gray, cream, anything. For wolves with cream fur, try shading with a reddish-brown. Of course, these are only like two in a billion examples lol

Another thing I think is important with fur is fur direction. Look at real wolves and see how their fur grows in like ten different directions.

These are only my personal observations on drawing fur. I like what you have going so far, you can do it!
Critique?July 7, 2018 08:12 PM


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Honestly I have no critique but this is awesome.On a real animal I think the color would be a little more varied though but I under stand you might have not added it because of it being practice.
Critique?July 7, 2018 10:18 PM


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x3 I haven't tried putting colored edges on a practice, I might just do that. Thanks guys >^<

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