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critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:00 AM


Vennenum

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stole my sister's drawing tablet.

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Feel like there's something off about this but I can't put my finger on what...?

*Edit to add: this was based off a lineart.


Edited at June 28, 2020 10:31 PM by Vennenum
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:05 AM


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That's awesome! I'd say the neck maybe arches back a bit too much, the eyes are a little small, has a bit of an underbite and the fur's very line-y but those are such small things i don't think it would really affect the piece- it's really good!
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:17 AM


Hallbjorns

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Hmm I see what you mean. Would red lining be alright? I'd love to play around a bit to see what might be giving the off feeling <3
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:29 AM


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Considering I was coloring off a lineart, the only thing I changed were the nose and the eyes.
You're welcome to do a redline, but I'm not confident on my lineart-fixing skills. :')
critique neededJune 28, 2020 02:06 PM


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It does look off, but I can't help you on what looks off. It looks great though.
critique neededJune 28, 2020 02:06 PM


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The eye's a tad small, but other than that I think it looks lovely Venn.
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:23 PM


Blizzard's Star

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Smol eyes
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:24 PM


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The ear looks a little twisted out about halfway up it
The base is facing forwards, but then the tip is facing to the side
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:24 PM


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Sorry if I seem rude but uh
I think it is that it looks like it's tongue is brown, though it it the lips. But it is an AMAZING DRAWING!
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:25 PM


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And the eyes are a little small

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