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12:30:34

Ew, that reminds me that I need to break my daily streak again. I just hit 24 days. I'm not trying to get 500 again :(

12:28:05 Vilk

45 days in a row already, wowza

12:24:08

Yeah, she'll live at least for the night. Might get killed tomorrow when I feel like murdering again though.

12:20:13

I'm thinking about it. She might. I gave her a name, so she's getting me attached now.

12:17:47 Spirit (Her/She)

Khaos
Will Ms. Pissy live?

12:16:54 Spirit (Her/She)

Khaos

The so-called, piss wolf, has the best vitals out of all three looks like.

12:16:16

Her new name is Pissy. The piss version of Missy.

12:15:07

Ew, I just looked. Is that a piss wolf??? The defect is cute though

12:15:05 Spirit (Her/She)

Khaos
Not terrible. Let me check vitals,

12:14:36

Lovely. :(

Continental Wolves

12:14:28 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Khaos
Duds

12:13:41

And because people have been skeptical, no, it's not a rickroll. I'm too lazy right now to go grab the link.

12:13:14

How is my luck decent enough to get a toucan feather when I need one?? Pup check? I don't want to check. :( -WP Click-

Continental Wolves

12:12:49 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Enigma
Yup, a little under 2 months away from 500 days in a row

12:11:33 Spirit (Her/She)

I completed a level in explore. Yay me. I haven't explored in a LONG time.

12:11:30

@Spoopy
Getting close to 500! Very impressive

12:04:03 📦

goodnight!

12:03:07 Cae, Blue

Ok, back to sleep i go. Good night~

Continental Wolves

12:02:44 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

You have logged in 447 days in a row.

12:02:22 Cae, Blue

There we go, it is winter

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12:30:34

Ew, that reminds me that I need to break my daily streak again. I just hit 24 days. I'm not trying to get 500 again :(

12:28:05 Vilk

45 days in a row already, wowza

12:24:08

Yeah, she'll live at least for the night. Might get killed tomorrow when I feel like murdering again though.

12:20:13

I'm thinking about it. She might. I gave her a name, so she's getting me attached now.

12:17:47 Spirit (Her/She)

Khaos
Will Ms. Pissy live?

12:16:54 Spirit (Her/She)

Khaos

The so-called, piss wolf, has the best vitals out of all three looks like.

12:16:16

Her new name is Pissy. The piss version of Missy.

12:15:07

Ew, I just looked. Is that a piss wolf??? The defect is cute though

12:15:05 Spirit (Her/She)

Khaos
Not terrible. Let me check vitals,

12:14:36

Lovely. :(

Continental Wolves

12:14:28 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Khaos
Duds

12:13:41

And because people have been skeptical, no, it's not a rickroll. I'm too lazy right now to go grab the link.

12:13:14

How is my luck decent enough to get a toucan feather when I need one?? Pup check? I don't want to check. :( -WP Click-

Continental Wolves

12:12:49 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Enigma
Yup, a little under 2 months away from 500 days in a row

12:11:33 Spirit (Her/She)

I completed a level in explore. Yay me. I haven't explored in a LONG time.

12:11:30

@Spoopy
Getting close to 500! Very impressive

12:04:03 📦

goodnight!

12:03:07 Cae, Blue

Ok, back to sleep i go. Good night~

Continental Wolves

12:02:44 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

You have logged in 447 days in a row.

12:02:22 Cae, Blue

There we go, it is winter

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June 17, 2018 01:25 PM

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Heya, I was hoping for some critique on this!
https://image.ibb.co/my78pd/04_B80_E15_8317_4_AFD_A3_CC_39_B9_AB3_ACB6_C.png

June 17, 2018 01:30 PM

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It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

June 17, 2018 01:31 PM

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ThunderousSymphonies said:
It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

Thanks! I'm fixing now!

June 17, 2018 01:39 PM

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https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

June 17, 2018 01:54 PM

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It is gorgeous, but to make it more eye catching, I would recommend more shadow and more light.

The shading is very dull, but that can be easily fixed!!!

Other than that, it is a stunning piece of artwork!

June 21, 2018 05:37 PM

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I would make the eyes larger and with a slightly more defined shape, along with the nose, and make the muzzle and ears a little sharper and the chin a little bigger.

https://image.ibb.co/nq4oVT/advice.png

https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

By the way, I love your colouring! I can't colour for anything!

June 22, 2018 11:30 PM

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I would just say work a little with the direction the fur flows in, and the lighting on the snout is a little askew (I would suggest a slightly sharper angle]

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