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12:30:34

Ew, that reminds me that I need to break my daily streak again. I just hit 24 days. I'm not trying to get 500 again :(

12:28:05 Vilk

45 days in a row already, wowza

12:24:08

Yeah, she'll live at least for the night. Might get killed tomorrow when I feel like murdering again though.

12:20:13

I'm thinking about it. She might. I gave her a name, so she's getting me attached now.

12:17:47 Spirit (Her/She)

Khaos
Will Ms. Pissy live?

12:16:54 Spirit (Her/She)

Khaos

The so-called, piss wolf, has the best vitals out of all three looks like.

12:16:16

Her new name is Pissy. The piss version of Missy.

12:15:07

Ew, I just looked. Is that a piss wolf??? The defect is cute though

12:15:05 Spirit (Her/She)

Khaos
Not terrible. Let me check vitals,

12:14:36

Lovely. :(

Continental Wolves

12:14:28 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Khaos
Duds

12:13:41

And because people have been skeptical, no, it's not a rickroll. I'm too lazy right now to go grab the link.

12:13:14

How is my luck decent enough to get a toucan feather when I need one?? Pup check? I don't want to check. :( -WP Click-

Continental Wolves

12:12:49 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Enigma
Yup, a little under 2 months away from 500 days in a row

12:11:33 Spirit (Her/She)

I completed a level in explore. Yay me. I haven't explored in a LONG time.

12:11:30

@Spoopy
Getting close to 500! Very impressive

12:04:03 📦

goodnight!

12:03:07 Cae, Blue

Ok, back to sleep i go. Good night~

Continental Wolves

12:02:44 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

You have logged in 447 days in a row.

12:02:22 Cae, Blue

There we go, it is winter

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12:30:34

Ew, that reminds me that I need to break my daily streak again. I just hit 24 days. I'm not trying to get 500 again :(

12:28:05 Vilk

45 days in a row already, wowza

12:24:08

Yeah, she'll live at least for the night. Might get killed tomorrow when I feel like murdering again though.

12:20:13

I'm thinking about it. She might. I gave her a name, so she's getting me attached now.

12:17:47 Spirit (Her/She)

Khaos
Will Ms. Pissy live?

12:16:54 Spirit (Her/She)

Khaos

The so-called, piss wolf, has the best vitals out of all three looks like.

12:16:16

Her new name is Pissy. The piss version of Missy.

12:15:07

Ew, I just looked. Is that a piss wolf??? The defect is cute though

12:15:05 Spirit (Her/She)

Khaos
Not terrible. Let me check vitals,

12:14:36

Lovely. :(

Continental Wolves

12:14:28 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Khaos
Duds

12:13:41

And because people have been skeptical, no, it's not a rickroll. I'm too lazy right now to go grab the link.

12:13:14

How is my luck decent enough to get a toucan feather when I need one?? Pup check? I don't want to check. :( -WP Click-

Continental Wolves

12:12:49 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Enigma
Yup, a little under 2 months away from 500 days in a row

12:11:33 Spirit (Her/She)

I completed a level in explore. Yay me. I haven't explored in a LONG time.

12:11:30

@Spoopy
Getting close to 500! Very impressive

12:04:03 📦

goodnight!

12:03:07 Cae, Blue

Ok, back to sleep i go. Good night~

Continental Wolves

12:02:44 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

You have logged in 447 days in a row.

12:02:22 Cae, Blue

There we go, it is winter

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June 11, 2018 10:34 PM

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Hello! I was working on a semi realistic piece, and I wanted some critique of it! If you have any hints on where it could be improved to look more realistic , I would be so thankful!! Thanks!!

https://image.ibb.co/cC7q7o/33845_CD1_1_BE6_4586_86_C7_26_AF68_A26_C54.png

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June 11, 2018 10:37 PM

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Maybe expand the car side of dogs head up. ^^

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June 11, 2018 10:37 PM

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I loves the fur (its much better than I can do) but double check your anatomy. Also, the dog is way to skinny. But it's really cute! I can tell you have a lot of potential.

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June 11, 2018 10:38 PM

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I love it!

Id suggest making the body a bit thicker and getting rid of the tongue(or repositioning it). Also, add some life to the dog's eyes if possible.

Unless it is a really small dog, that bunny isn't gonna be that big. Unless it is a giant bunny. I love it, but it isn't realistic ^^

That's all, really :D

Edited at June 11, 2018 10:39 PM by Astrophel

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June 11, 2018 10:39 PM

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I'm not great with canines, but I'm great with rabbits. The rabbit's nose is a V like shape, quite different from that of a dog's. And the nose isn't very pink, just a slight blush.

Here is my bunny

https://s15.postimg.cc/sqla5gf1n/3_F5_AE822-_E4_AD-43_BA-94_F0-3_C92_A48_CB008.jpg

(C) me

Edited at June 11, 2018 10:40 PM by Damian Wayne

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June 11, 2018 10:39 PM

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Thanks everyone! I'll post some updates once I'm done

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June 11, 2018 10:47 PM

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Also little note, it's supposed to be a puppy :D

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June 11, 2018 10:53 PM

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https://image.ibb.co/mAxnL8/D42_FD071_0750_47_F5_8_AF0_3_F6_BC1_EA99_FB.png

Updated! I think it's better, but the eyes...

Anyone know how to add life?

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June 11, 2018 10:55 PM

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Maybe make the eyes a lighter, and slightly brighter brown?

At least maybe a bit brighter.

That could give it some life to the eyes

Edited at June 11, 2018 10:56 PM by Destinations End

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June 11, 2018 10:56 PM

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Destinations End said:
Maybe make the eyes a lighter, and slightly brighter brown?
At least maybe a bit brighter.
That could give it some life to the eyes

Thanks! Adding

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