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Nes-
That's Mister Khakis to you. LOL The fence needs fixed, my dad wants to get a fence like at one of our other houses but has to ask my mom's dad for permission and until then, the dogs love to dig right at the fence when they hear each other. :( So better to just take them outside when no other dogs are outside.

11:42:32 Don't call me BJ.

Ya'll give me a theme

11:40:45

Ty khaos! Also, can you tell me the cause of some of your wolves deaths

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*khaos*

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Khans
What's wrong with the neighbors dogs

11:40:02 Mr Palette Guy

Obsessed with this piece of art
-Click-

11:39:41

Archen-
Wolverines drop them, player market dens, or people gifting.

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Aw man, never mind. The neighbors dogs are out.

11:37:02

Yall, how do you get red roses

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I'll be back chat. <3 Gotta take puppies outside again.

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LMAO I just woke up. How do y'all still click on links?? If you want to see a wolf, just use Trading Post 🤣

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PvP anyone?

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Hey chat

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anyone up for an rp pm me

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June 11, 2018 10:34 PM

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Hello! I was working on a semi realistic piece, and I wanted some critique of it! If you have any hints on where it could be improved to look more realistic , I would be so thankful!! Thanks!!

https://image.ibb.co/cC7q7o/33845_CD1_1_BE6_4586_86_C7_26_AF68_A26_C54.png

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June 11, 2018 10:37 PM

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Maybe expand the car side of dogs head up. ^^

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June 11, 2018 10:37 PM

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I loves the fur (its much better than I can do) but double check your anatomy. Also, the dog is way to skinny. But it's really cute! I can tell you have a lot of potential.

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June 11, 2018 10:38 PM

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I love it!

Id suggest making the body a bit thicker and getting rid of the tongue(or repositioning it). Also, add some life to the dog's eyes if possible.

Unless it is a really small dog, that bunny isn't gonna be that big. Unless it is a giant bunny. I love it, but it isn't realistic ^^

That's all, really :D

Edited at June 11, 2018 10:39 PM by Astrophel

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June 11, 2018 10:39 PM

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I'm not great with canines, but I'm great with rabbits. The rabbit's nose is a V like shape, quite different from that of a dog's. And the nose isn't very pink, just a slight blush.

Here is my bunny

https://s15.postimg.cc/sqla5gf1n/3_F5_AE822-_E4_AD-43_BA-94_F0-3_C92_A48_CB008.jpg

(C) me

Edited at June 11, 2018 10:40 PM by Damian Wayne

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June 11, 2018 10:39 PM

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Thanks everyone! I'll post some updates once I'm done

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June 11, 2018 10:47 PM

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Also little note, it's supposed to be a puppy :D

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June 11, 2018 10:53 PM

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https://image.ibb.co/mAxnL8/D42_FD071_0750_47_F5_8_AF0_3_F6_BC1_EA99_FB.png

Updated! I think it's better, but the eyes...

Anyone know how to add life?

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June 11, 2018 10:55 PM

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Maybe make the eyes a lighter, and slightly brighter brown?

At least maybe a bit brighter.

That could give it some life to the eyes

Edited at June 11, 2018 10:56 PM by Destinations End

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June 11, 2018 10:56 PM

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Destinations End said:
Maybe make the eyes a lighter, and slightly brighter brown?
At least maybe a bit brighter.
That could give it some life to the eyes

Thanks! Adding

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