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Fei,
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 Feiella
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I once got a caterpillar but then I fed it to my wolves
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 Honey
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malpha

the other day she gave me a caterpillar :(
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 Kháos
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I love my feed goes from romance to best friends to bad dates straight into french nursery rhymes that are catchy. xD
 Malpha
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Fei,
Must resist the temptation
 Feiella
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I'm not saying a word
 Malpha
07:59:05 Malpha/Mal/Algo
That's it I moved mush into a savings account so I'll stop trying to spend so much T.T
 Serpents
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-WP Click- Vote comment please

-WP Click- ask my oc please
if you happen to see my wolves in explore let me know

im looking to rp if willing pm me after reading my rules
 Feiella
07:57:27 Pack of Sharp Snap
I love Bree lol
 Malpha
07:57:01 Malpha/Mal/Algo
Hopefully my client closes a deal soon so I can get some extra mush 🙏
 Malpha
07:56:35 Malpha/Mal/Algo
Guess I ain't getting apples anytime soon ^^'
 Animus Vox
07:54:52 
if Bree has no haters I'm dead
 Malpha
07:54:06 Malpha/Mal/Algo
Today's Gain: 584 Today's Loss: 991 Today's Profit: -407

Bury me alive please
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Khaos
at least sticks are just toys for the pups while a caterpillar ends up eaten
 Honey
07:53:06 
i shed a tear i won't lie
 Malpha
07:52:59 Malpha/Mal/Algo
Technically a party on coin isn't too bad but it definitely wasn't worth 500 mush
 Kháos
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She loves to give me sticks.
 Feiella
07:52:02 Pack of Sharp Snap
I once got a caterpillar but then I fed it to my wolves
 Malpha
07:51:29 Malpha/Mal/Algo
If I wanted a coin I could've bought it myself what the fuck
 Honey
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malpha

the other day she gave me a caterpillar :(
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Whyyy Bree why
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I swear to god if Bree screws me I'm just so done with life
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animation/timing help/ criticism neededJune 8, 2023 10:41 AM


Krampus

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Working on a mini amv, i'm trying to get it done by (this) friday
Somethings off with the timing, can't tell what it is :/
i don't really like the first frame, so i might get rid of it/change it. It doesn't really hold the feeling of weight/locomotion

Edited at June 8, 2023 10:42 AM by Krampus
animation/timing help/ criticism neededJune 8, 2023 05:29 PM


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Hmm it looks like you might need more in-betweens, unless that's what you were planning to do.

There's also not a lot of anticipation in the first few frames of the action, which may be why it feels so stiff.

I'd reccomend looking at smear/smush frames and trying those out to get a bit more movement going!

Overall it's really good and good luck with the rest of the project!


Edited at June 8, 2023 05:29 PM by Beetle Tea
animation/timing help/ criticism neededJune 8, 2023 06:35 PM


Krampus

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Beetle Tea said:

Hmm it looks like you might need more in-betweens, unless that's what you were planning to do.

There's also not a lot of anticipation in the first few frames of the action, which may be why it feels so stiff.

I'd reccomend looking at smear/smush frames and trying those out to get a bit more movement going!

Overall it's really good and good luck with the rest of the project!



i just realised in the last action, i meant to put a flicking of the head/eyes, (as a secondary action) and completely forgot about it.
Not a lot of smear/smush frames here, i'll look into adding those.
thank you for your advice! ^^

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