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There's a little note next to the injury message if you click the wolf's page. hover over it and it'll tell you, i think
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Injured Paw is green.
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Criticism NeededNovember 9, 2017 10:25 PM


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https://s2.postimg.org/cm6tysat5/Screen_Shot_2017-11-09_at_11.21.15_PM.png

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Edited at November 9, 2017 10:28 PM by Aphmau clan
Criticism NeededNovember 9, 2017 10:28 PM


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Not bad (\^-^/)
Criticism NeededNovember 9, 2017 10:29 PM


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It's not really that bad in all honesty.
The tail and maybe the front leg on the side we're viewing could use a little work maybe, though the tail could actually depend on the breed of cat the drawing is of.
But overall it's pretty good

Edited at November 9, 2017 10:30 PM by Destinations End
Criticism NeededNovember 10, 2017 01:28 AM


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The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:
https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:
Criticism NeededJanuary 1, 2018 09:11 PM


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Siarczek said:
The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:
https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:


This helps me out! Thank you
Criticism NeededJanuary 3, 2018 03:49 AM


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Aww so cool!

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