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 Anatolian Shepherd
05:50:28 Zombified Breyer
@Mag
They are good! My daughter turns a year old next month and it makes me sad. How's your kiddo?
 The Pumpkin King
05:50:10 Ecifircas
rai. <3
No, I have nothing to say. I am just saying hai. :3

 Magnus Bane
05:49:29 Mag/Maggy
Zombie
How are the kiddos?
 Anatolian Shepherd
05:49:25 Zombified Breyer
My* not may
 Anatolian Shepherd
05:49:12 Zombified Breyer
@Mag
Not too bad. I'm impatiently waiting for my boyfriend to get home so we can get a new tire for may car lol.
 Silver via
05:48:18 Silv, Via
Ecifircas
Thank you for that,

I guess I will go back to exploring now, bye chat!
 Magnus Bane
05:47:22 Mag/Maggy
Zombie
I'm good! How are you!
 technoblade
05:47:11 Lil Techy | Techno
tai!
 Anatolian Shepherd
05:46:53 Zombified Breyer
@Mag
Hey, how are you?
 Obscurity
05:46:52 Tai
Moonnightshade
Watch the caps, please.
 Magnus Bane
05:44:57 Mag/Maggy
Damn I forget how easy premium makes things
 technoblade
05:44:37 Lil Techy | Techno
ah shit I got the PvP quest again
 The Pumpkin King
05:43:01 Ecifircas
SIlver via, you've got this. I believe in you.
 Avatar Of Lust
05:42:49 Asmodeus (he/they)
3 brains and now I have no explore moves time to buy some Chinese pottery
 Avatar Of Lust
05:42:07 Asmodeus (he/they)
some reason it copied the arrows too XD
 technoblade
05:41:52 Lil Techy | Techno
moon night

yes and?
 Avatar Of Lust
05:41:34 Asmodeus (he/they)

North South West East
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Bloody Apparition howls at the Banshee with all their might. It cowers, then silently disappears. This was a difficult task. There are 3 brains hidden in a tuft of grass nearby.

first brains of this event for me XD
 Moonnightshade
05:41:34 
BRO I FOUND APPLES IN BARTER FOR ONLY 900 MUSH
 Silver via
05:41:30 Silv, Via
Ecifircas
I'm probably going to hide in the desert for a bit since getting 5 levels there is my third quest- but thanks, this will be so fun :')
 The Pumpkin King
05:40:37 Ecifircas
Polargeist, I'm happily one of your paws. I try to give my support. lol

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Need critics!November 4, 2017 10:49 PM


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So lately I've been trying to get out of drawing cartoony cats. I've been trying to add more detail (which i need work on ;;) But can someone give my picture some tips?

https://kyothered.deviantart.com/art/Eden-713461234?ga_submit_new=10%3A1509853258

Art is by me, AKA
kyothered on DA ^^
Need critics!November 19, 2017 06:19 PM


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I love the style and colouring! I just think you need to work on the head shape as it looks a tad bit more canine than feline. Otherwise, amazing work!
Need critics!December 18, 2017 08:16 PM


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Needs whiskers and the snout thingy looks too canine-ish
Need critics!December 29, 2017 04:10 PM


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The snout needs to be a little less narrow and much smaller. The ears might have to be a little bit bigger. Other than that it's pretty awesome! ^-^
Need critics!December 29, 2017 05:53 PM


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The way the fur goes on the neck - there's a part where it parts a little unnaturally, like somebody's parted it with a comb. Unless they're a housecat, I suggest that you fix that. I assume that you mean for the eyes to be shaped that way, since it's a cartoon-style drawing, but still, maybe they should be rotated more south-westward. As others have said, the snout is not a feline's; it lacks the whisker points, jowls, and softer/fatter jawline of a feline. Perhaps the ears should be a little more pointy. But all in all, it's pretty good! The coloring and background flatter the shape nicely, and said colors don't contrast overall, so it finishes cleanly. Just work on the anatomy a little more, and it would overall be pretty perfect.

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