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 distant-screams
12:34:16 katy | beetle
just found out that my state /does/ in fact have a large spider species. second largest in north america :')

luckily it's a fishing spider and i don't go in many bodies of water lol.
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12:33:56 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf
Vapor
You should make a sign for the roaches that says beware of bob
 Jack-A-Boo
12:32:56 Boo, Vapor (he/Him)
I'm gonna make signs and hang them around my room that says "if you see a wolf spider in here, don't kill him, his name is Bob, he eats the ants and roaches"
 distant-screams
12:31:56 katy | beetle
i'm so glad i live in a cold place. no huge spiders here, thank god.
 Continental Wolves
12:31:34 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf
Ive also been attacked by a huge wolf spider before so I do have a bit of a grudge
 Hugs4Bugs
12:30:55 Bugs || Ed
Rest in peace window spider </3
 Frostyhills24
12:30:24 Frosty, (She/Her)
would anyone be interested in a 1x1 wolf roleplay?

I would like to use my new character Blood Quartz
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PM me if interested1
 distant-screams
12:30:00 katy | beetle
oh, nevermind. window spider either relocated or my cat ate him.
 Continental Wolves
12:29:53 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf
I had one living in the crack in the wall above my door, was creepy as shit just seeing legs slowly moving in a crack above me door >·>
 Hugs4Bugs
12:29:20 Bugs || Ed
I'm the only one that actually captures them and relocates them instead of squishing them :'')
 Jack-A-Boo
12:29:01 Boo, Vapor (he/Him)
I have celler spiders and now this wolf spider in my room along with disgusting roaches and ants
 Hugs4Bugs
12:28:50 Bugs || Ed
most of my family is very afraid of (all) bugs, so we are an anti-spider household T-T
 Jack-A-Boo
12:28:30 Boo, Vapor (he/Him)
bro turned himself around and is now facing my laptop I see that as a good sign
 distant-screams
12:28:04 katy | beetle
i have a spider living on my windowsill. he pays rent by killing all the pesky gnats and mosquitos.
 Hugs4Bugs
12:27:32 Bugs || Ed
spiders tend to be pretty hearty, so I'd personally just wait him out
if he's otherwise healthy, he should be okay <3
 Pain Meds
12:27:03 Dagon/Sheo/Moor
I leave spiders alone as long as they don't climb on me (I'm allergic and don't like the swelling from bites)
 Jack-A-Boo
12:26:04 Boo, Vapor (he/Him)
transcendence

I love spiders they are helpful creatures
 Continental Wolves
12:26:01 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf
Wolf spiders get smushed in my house if they get too close to me 😒
 Pain Meds
12:25:30 Dagon/Sheo/Moor
-WP Click-

Every pup had higher Talents then her XD
 Transcendence
12:25:01 anti gen ai
Its the fact you want a wolf spider to live so it can continue its natural pest control job

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Critique please!April 21, 2020 04:23 PM


Zora

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I'm rather new to drawing so I'm clearly not going to be that good. But I'd like to improve! Be warned this is not digital art so the pictures won't be that good.

All credits go to me so please no stealy!
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I mainly want help with anatomy because, well just look at those legs! Help with faces would be nice too. I'm taking all critique though! Be as harsh as you see fit!
Critique please!April 21, 2020 05:14 PM


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I don't think I am in much of a position to give criticism, lol. But I can tell you that one artist, Remarin (on youtube and deviantart) has had a huge influence on my style and has helped improve my wolf anatomy a lot. They do a lot of headshots so it will be a great help with canine faces/facial proportions, expressions and teeth as well as colors and lighting and whatnot. Look them up some time, you won't regret it. ^_^
Critique please!April 21, 2020 05:17 PM


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Well, you sure are really good at bodies! But you might need to bring the front legs down more to make it line up with the back legs. Other than that, it looks great. I'm not really the best at drawing bodies, so I am still learning also. I hope I helped.3.
Critique please!April 21, 2020 05:20 PM


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@Blue Citrus
Alright, I'll take a look at them! Thank you for the suggestion!

@ITSYEMUM
Yea I'm not the best with lining up. I think for my next drawing I'll draw a line to help with paw placement. Thank you so much!
Critique please!April 21, 2020 05:33 PM


Reathmuaz

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I think these are actually quite cute..! In terms of anatomy, if you want to keep a more cartoon-ish style, I suggest looking up wolf reference poses. There's usually some interesting positions to draw characters in, but it also really helps with the structure of your character. Maybe just look up canine anatomy in general, even if it sucks to study stuff like that, in the end (if you take the studying to heart), your pieces could really turn out great! I'm sure you'd get profit from it as well. ^^

Edited at April 21, 2020 06:37 PM by Thranduil
Critique please!April 21, 2020 05:34 PM


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Your welcome, keep up the good art!

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