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My recent Art o my new goth like OC Erebus: All art belongs to me and only me ;p (Issues with this one is that the head is too big. ) (Issue with this one...is I don't actually know) ( Alot of issues with this...I might recontact Shadow howlers and ask them can I do this over :p. Commission for Shadow Howler.)
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Is there something wrong I need to fix( I already know my legs and paws are like the devil itself. I'm mostly trying to fix my headshot.)
Stating: I'm not trying to be more realistic...I'm leaning more of a cute style and things. Again I don't want to draw like Leonardo da Vinci. I'm trying to be myself ;p Keep this noted...lol |
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You need to sit down and focus on anatomy before you even think about stylizing. Learn the rules before you break them. It's one thing to have a style, and it's another to have poor anatomy. Your proportions with their heads are all off. Use references as you draw, too. They will help you with learning anatomy. |
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I love the art style! But....perhaps the muzzle could be slightly thinner? |
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Could you be more detailed :). I mean " Not the best" isn't really helping me, and I'm in the Art help section.
Is there something wrong I need to fix( I already know my legs and paws are like the devil itself. I'm mostly trying to fix my headshot.) |
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I can do really good bust side views if your wanting help. |
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Whoa...I usually draw on paper. I would contact you if I need help on Bust.
Also...I...never did a Bust..unless I did and I went brain dumb not knowing o.o( Still new at drawing) |
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https://i.postimg.cc/NG85Bttc/7-A641-D6-C-1-FC1-4-EC8-9163-0-CB4551-F0-E5-B.png
Well I did a redline here (hope you don't mind)
I know you don't want to draw realistic but bear with me here, The muzzle is too... thick? Try making it a bit thinner. And the forehead isn't that large. But ignore the head for now, let's move on to the legs. (The pose in the picture is a bit hard for me to do but I tried :'D) your legs are out of proportion with the rest of the body, try thickening them out a bit or make the body smaller. Now, the belly isn't a straight line, it's more of a slightly curved and fluffy line. Hope this helped!
You may use this redline however you want, you may trace over it, or use it as a reference. Also feel free to PM me whenever you'd like for help :) |
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Whoa...I never really looked at how different my art could be. This opens a whole new world...not really but thanks! I'll try my best, and I don't like tracing over...but may I use it for practice( I'm not gonna steal your art style)
I do thin out my muzzle...but I overly thin it...is that still good? |
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Bilx said:
Whoa...I never really looked at how different my art could be. This opens a whole new world...not really but thanks! I'll try my best, and I don't like tracing over...but may I use it for practice( I'm not gonna steal your art style)
I do thin out my muzzle...but I overly thin it...is that still good?
What do you mean by overly thin? |
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