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 TheFlyingKitten
04:49:26 Petri Dish/Oh Naauur
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Ah... what do I do with this real bozo dingdong? He's pretty, but serves no real purpose to my cause.
Then again, neither does Arin, but there's more of an attachment there. XD
 BJake
04:49:24 Don't call me BJ.
@TheFlyinfKitten
It's the fact I have to clean 3 giant kennels, feed and water them all, I have 10 litterboxes to clean ;-;
 TheFlyingKitten
04:47:38 Petri Dish/Oh Naauur
@Chatot

If you hover over the quick view of the wolf you want to use the potion on, there should be a drop down menu where you can select items to use on said wolf. Select the potion, then select use item. You'll be asked if you really want to use item, and you'll press yes, which will apply the potion to your desired wolf.
 Destiny
04:44:19 Reverse | Until Now
Hi chat!
 Avatar Of Lust
04:43:57 Asmodeus (he/they)
first my phone must charge its at 4% :(
 Avatar Of Lust
04:43:34 Asmodeus (he/they)
I can only plat 15 minutes of genshin because I had to get the cloud version :(
 Chatot Pack
04:43:23 Chatot
how do i use my potions? i am lost
 TheFlyingKitten
04:43:16 Petri Dish/Oh Naauur
@BJake

Ah, litter boxes. I understand that internal dilemma. I have my own box user and sometimes find it difficult to clean up after her. Sometimes you just have to say "fuck it" and do it no matter how unmotivated you are.
 Avatar Of Lust
04:43:07 Asmodeus (he/they)
Bjake

XD I have Obey me NB cause that's the only one that would download but ok I will play it :)
 Embershed
04:42:47 The Minor Nuisance
Vex,
I would love to do that, but then dad would call the police and I'll get put under arrest even though mum started it, as no one ever listens to me.

BJake,
...Maye I'll let her do it at the end of the holidays, so then I won't have to go to school...
 BJake
04:42:23 Don't call me BJ.
@Asmodeus
AHA, I knew you played Obey me.
Obey me, play that one.
 Avatar Of Lust
04:41:42 Asmodeus (he/they)
I'm trying to decide between playing 15 minutes of Genshin or Pokemon or Obey Me, such difficult choice
 BJake
04:41:32 Don't call me BJ.
@TheFlyingKitten
I wish I could, but as I said, have to motivate myself quickly. I don't know when my parents will be back and they will take all my devices away or something if I haven't cleaned the litter boxes
 BJake
04:40:13 Don't call me BJ.
@Embershed
Let her cut your feet off
@Hells Bella
Hm, I may be unable to have a snack but I could take a nap if I do it 👁👁
I may take this advice and try
 Hells Bells
04:39:07 Ven/Vex
Ember
Cut off her hands so she can't cut off your feet
 TheFlyingKitten
04:39:02 Petri Dish/Oh Naauur
@BJake

Huh. I'd just take a nap, then. When I wake up from naps that my body naturally wakes up from I'm usually ready and willing to do what I planned to originally do. I don't know your situation or how your mind/body works, though.
 Avatar Of Lust
04:38:57 Asmodeus (he/they)
Bjake

maybe take a 2 to 3 hour nap with an alarm set that usually works for me
 Hells Bells
04:38:42 Ven/Vex
Bjake
Tell yourself that after you do it, youcc bc an go have your favorite snack. (I can't motivate myself but I am very good motivated lol, hope it helps)
 Embershed
04:38:33 The Minor Nuisance
My mother just threatened to cut off my feet. What am I supposed to do in this situation, chat?
 BJake
04:37:37 Don't call me BJ.
@TheFlyingKitten
I already have, I just physically can't bring myself to do it, I lack the motivation

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Criticism?January 3, 2018 11:40 PM


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http://preview.ibb.co/gavXBb/image.jpg

I need a little help editing this guy. This is my first hyena drawing~

I'm decent with anatomy, and I've studied up on most things about hyenas, but I haven't got my hands on anything about their faces at the moment. So I'm looking for criticism on the facial structure, how it looks, etc. since I'm not sure on it yet, especially the mouth, jawline, and ears. The flower crown could be commented on as well, although I like it the way it is. It's probably sucky as well >>

So comment any judging below. Keep in mind that there's a border between constructive criticism and being rude, but don't worry, I don't often take offense personally~

Edited at January 3, 2018 11:41 PM by Taboo
Criticism?January 4, 2018 12:21 AM


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I personally think it could use a bit more shading on the sides of the nose.
Criticism?January 29, 2018 07:06 PM


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I'm not sure about the jawline, ears, and fur texture... all seem slightly abnormal. But overall, it's nice. :3
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:16 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/8po2knqfz/6_EC7223_B-3695-479_C-9903-764_DCDCBF117.jpg?dl=1

I think the only thing throwing me off is the nose. It could use more shading, and be more 3-dimensional. I sketched a little example on my iPad for you.

I agree with Seaward about the mouth/jaw being a bit weird, but not overly.

I think it looks awesome.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:18 PM by Deer
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:41 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/58m0hfjld/AF6002_C1-6436-43_C1-_AF8_D-99_E26_C324792.jpg
Here I was just scrolling through google images of hyenas and jotting down/sketching my observations. Hope this helps. :)

I know nothing about hyenas, this is simply what I noticed while scrolling through images.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:44 PM by Deer

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