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 SilverMountain
07:32:37 The Naming Empress
Low Key
I want to pet her
SheÂ’s beautiful
 1234567890
07:32:37 01
feathers*
 loki_budgie
07:31:49 skye
kitten
she dosent shut up
 1234567890
07:31:48 01
my grandma cuts the ends off of her chickens wings because they were leaving often I still feel bad for them though TvT
 Ámor
07:31:28 Cloudz, Pumpkin
@Emmet
:O I need to friend it
 loki_budgie
07:31:19 skye
thats her bad side💖
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 Eternity
07:31:17 ET
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Ooooh yes, yes, I like this.
 Eternity
07:31:07 ET
Continental
Why'd you do that LMAO? Don't like your current one?
 TheFlyingKitten
07:30:53 Petri Dish/Oh Naauur
@Loki

She's gorgeous! She looks like she's a talker, too.
 Continental Wolves
07:30:24 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf
ET
I finally made another account :D
 Meliora Wolves
07:30:20 crow (he/they/zae)
petri
damn... when we had my chickens my mom used to clip their feathers. im not entirely sure why she did, its not like they were gonna decide to just fly away one day
 loki_budgie
07:29:20 skye
This is solar!
my one eyed girl XD
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 TheFlyingKitten
07:28:04 Petri Dish/Oh Naauur
@Loki

Oh, that's awful! The poor thing! At least she's in good hands now. :)
 Eternity
07:27:32 ET
My palette stayed remarkably unfucked.
 TheFlyingKitten
07:27:31 Petri Dish/Oh Naauur
@Crow

Yeah, a lot of parrot owners do. And they clip the feathers to make them flightless for extended periods of time as well.
 loki_budgie
07:27:12 skye
kitten

yeah thankfully!
alot of budgies get mistreated all mine are rescues!
one is missing her eye from neglect :(
 Ravensrun
07:26:49 Goblin Queen|Rave
To a default one we go
 TheFlyingKitten
07:26:22 Petri Dish/Oh Naauur
@Loki

It's just so hard to even imagine. I'm glad to hear that there are responsible bird owners who know how cruel such things are.
 Ravensrun
07:26:16 Goblin Queen|Rave
Oh dear lord my pallet got fucked uo
 loki_budgie
07:26:00 skye
kitten

yep, its sad but alot of parrots get mistreated because they are considered a starter pet some how....

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Criticism NeededNovember 9, 2017 10:25 PM


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https://s2.postimg.org/cm6tysat5/Screen_Shot_2017-11-09_at_11.21.15_PM.png

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Edited at November 9, 2017 10:28 PM by Aphmau clan
Criticism NeededNovember 9, 2017 10:28 PM


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Not bad (\^-^/)
Criticism NeededNovember 9, 2017 10:29 PM


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It's not really that bad in all honesty.
The tail and maybe the front leg on the side we're viewing could use a little work maybe, though the tail could actually depend on the breed of cat the drawing is of.
But overall it's pretty good

Edited at November 9, 2017 10:30 PM by Destinations End
Criticism NeededNovember 10, 2017 01:28 AM


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The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:
https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:
Criticism NeededJanuary 1, 2018 09:11 PM


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Siarczek said:
The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:
https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:


This helps me out! Thank you
Criticism NeededJanuary 3, 2018 03:49 AM


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Aww so cool!

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