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 technoblade
07:32:41 Lil Techy | Techno
Leon

Nah I'm on the hunt for stolen art again if it even is
 Narran Park
07:31:00 Sting

Forest is my emotional Support Biome...
 The Sigma
07:30:10 Leon, Sigma
Techno

Real, my brain has been all over the place right now. Just like those in explore lmao
 Narran Park
07:29:43 Sting
Kisses to Chat
 The Amethyst
07:29:05 Dart
Leon

I. Wonder who
 technoblade
07:28:57 Lil Techy | Techno
Leon

Slow going, I'm distracted with exploring and something else right now :D
 Willow Tribe
07:28:55 Willow / Tibby
Leon,

How are you?
 The Sigma
07:28:49 Leon, Sigma
Dart

Yeah lol
4 people!
 Listless
07:28:28 List
Mag
at level 5 of wolf party, you can get the wolf for free instead of paying
 The Amethyst
07:28:09 Dart
Wait somebody actually bought some?? :D
 Magnus Bane
07:27:40 Mag/Maggy
Uh, what do I do with this Charon blessing coin lol
 The Amethyst
07:27:24 Dart
Leon

What do you mean?
 The Sigma
07:27:07 Leon, Sigma
Dart

But 4 people already purchased tickets?
 The Amethyst
07:25:29 Dart
Leon

Thank god since I raffle a apple for a apple and I was worried I wouldn't get it back since no one bought a ticket
 The Sigma
07:23:40 Leon, Sigma
Dart

Yup!
 The Sigma
07:23:24 Leon, Sigma
Hi Willow!

Techno, howÂ’s the werm coming along? :)
 The Amethyst
07:23:17 Dart
Question if yiu raffle a item and nobody buys a ticket do you get it back?
 Stygian Forest
07:23:06 
Leon
Have fun.
 The Amethyst
07:22:26 Dart
11apples whoo! (it was quick)
 Willow Tribe
07:22:17 Willow / Tibby
Heya Leon

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Need critics!November 4, 2017 10:49 PM


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So lately I've been trying to get out of drawing cartoony cats. I've been trying to add more detail (which i need work on ;;) But can someone give my picture some tips?

https://kyothered.deviantart.com/art/Eden-713461234?ga_submit_new=10%3A1509853258

Art is by me, AKA
kyothered on DA ^^
Need critics!November 19, 2017 06:19 PM


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I love the style and colouring! I just think you need to work on the head shape as it looks a tad bit more canine than feline. Otherwise, amazing work!
Need critics!December 18, 2017 08:16 PM


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Needs whiskers and the snout thingy looks too canine-ish
Need critics!December 29, 2017 04:10 PM


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The snout needs to be a little less narrow and much smaller. The ears might have to be a little bit bigger. Other than that it's pretty awesome! ^-^
Need critics!December 29, 2017 05:53 PM


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The way the fur goes on the neck - there's a part where it parts a little unnaturally, like somebody's parted it with a comb. Unless they're a housecat, I suggest that you fix that. I assume that you mean for the eyes to be shaped that way, since it's a cartoon-style drawing, but still, maybe they should be rotated more south-westward. As others have said, the snout is not a feline's; it lacks the whisker points, jowls, and softer/fatter jawline of a feline. Perhaps the ears should be a little more pointy. But all in all, it's pretty good! The coloring and background flatter the shape nicely, and said colors don't contrast overall, so it finishes cleanly. Just work on the anatomy a little more, and it would overall be pretty perfect.

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