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 ZEFHYR
02:29:47 
come one come all hair for two mushrooms
 ZEFHYR
02:29:11 
yeah one item. an error! i have tons of stuff to put in and it would not let me put in anything
 Anxiety
02:29:01 ancient as hell
lmao just let it finish and set up another one, it'll be okay
 ZEFHYR
02:28:35 
embarrassing
 Anxiety
02:28:27 ancient as hell
I see one item in it?
 ZEFHYR
02:27:29 
it would not let me put anything in it!
 ZEFHYR
02:27:06 
"raffle home>manage raffle" is not showing anything about how to withdraw it?
 Anxiety
02:26:17 ancient as hell
you can't cancel them after a certain time.
 ZEFHYR
02:25:52 
someone please tell me how to cancel a raffle?!
 Arachne
02:17:39 Ara/Kat
because how are you affording like 2000 wolves with still 2000 spaces available
 Arachne
02:16:36 Ara/Kat
imagine if celebrities played this game and theyÂ’re those mysterious people who never talk in chat but have thousands of den spaces and wolves
 Magnus Bane
02:08:47 Mag/Maggy
Goodnight
 ZEFHYR
02:05:55 
the raffle i posted is bunk. it will not let me input items. I dont know how to stopit
 Magnus Bane
02:04:33 Mag/Maggy
Wonder if we could suggest a revamp? New bottles and let people design coats like we do for events
 starmutt
02:03:06 marsh | they/it
yeah i feel like crystalline dyes got released in a big batch and went untouched for a long while
 ZEFHYR
02:02:18 
how can i stop a raffle that will not let me put things in!?
 Magnus Bane
02:01:49 Mag/Maggy
Marsh
I love that!!
 starmutt
02:01:04 marsh | they/it
look at cool crystalline dye bottles i made
-WP Click-
 Magnus Bane
02:00:58 Mag/Maggy
Yes crystalline
 starmutt
02:00:42 marsh | they/it
new crystalline dyes*

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Critique please!April 21, 2020 04:23 PM


Zora

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I'm rather new to drawing so I'm clearly not going to be that good. But I'd like to improve! Be warned this is not digital art so the pictures won't be that good.

All credits go to me so please no stealy!
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I mainly want help with anatomy because, well just look at those legs! Help with faces would be nice too. I'm taking all critique though! Be as harsh as you see fit!
Critique please!April 21, 2020 05:14 PM


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I don't think I am in much of a position to give criticism, lol. But I can tell you that one artist, Remarin (on youtube and deviantart) has had a huge influence on my style and has helped improve my wolf anatomy a lot. They do a lot of headshots so it will be a great help with canine faces/facial proportions, expressions and teeth as well as colors and lighting and whatnot. Look them up some time, you won't regret it. ^_^
Critique please!April 21, 2020 05:17 PM


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Well, you sure are really good at bodies! But you might need to bring the front legs down more to make it line up with the back legs. Other than that, it looks great. I'm not really the best at drawing bodies, so I am still learning also. I hope I helped.3.
Critique please!April 21, 2020 05:20 PM


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@Blue Citrus
Alright, I'll take a look at them! Thank you for the suggestion!

@ITSYEMUM
Yea I'm not the best with lining up. I think for my next drawing I'll draw a line to help with paw placement. Thank you so much!
Critique please!April 21, 2020 05:33 PM


Reathmuaz

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I think these are actually quite cute..! In terms of anatomy, if you want to keep a more cartoon-ish style, I suggest looking up wolf reference poses. There's usually some interesting positions to draw characters in, but it also really helps with the structure of your character. Maybe just look up canine anatomy in general, even if it sucks to study stuff like that, in the end (if you take the studying to heart), your pieces could really turn out great! I'm sure you'd get profit from it as well. ^^

Edited at April 21, 2020 06:37 PM by Thranduil
Critique please!April 21, 2020 05:34 PM


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Your welcome, keep up the good art!

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