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 technoblade
12:49:51 Lil Techy | Techno
Regal

How much you make today?
 High Hills Pack
12:48:11 Frozen Opal; Regal
@techno
XD
Hopefully I can get enough wishbones ta do just that tomorrow. ;)
 SilverShadow
12:47:31 Running Dog
Well fellow WP. I'm signing off as I have work tomorrow. Good night and sleep well when you get there.

Praying for time to pass quickly and safely, Vox.
 The BloodRose
12:46:52 Mr.colt
Why I keep get log out
 technoblade
12:44:12 Lil Techy | Techno
Regal

God you are going to finish my wish at this rate XD
 Voxtexy
12:44:05 Vox, Corey
Just 4ish hours left, then I gotta clean for 1 hour, soo the earliest I'll be able to log on is in 5 hours!
 SilverShadow
12:43:43 Running Dog
Vox

Oh, I am so sorry... I can empathize with that.
 Voxtexy
12:43:12 Vox, Corey
I didn't even notice the second "still" until now lmao

Anyways! I gotta disappear, I'll hopefully log on after my shift ends
 SilverShadow
12:42:28 Running Dog
Emmet

Nah, we can handle a few accidents, lol, we aren't petulant children, besides, we appreciate you as a member of WP ♡
 Voxtexy
12:42:27 Vox, Corey
Emmet,
I'll thankfully be able to be with my gal when she starts getting old.

I already feel bad because she was 2 when I left and I've missed out on 3 years of her life (except for the few times I've been back home on leave).

She'll be 7 when my active duty is done 😭
 Continental Wolves
12:40:59 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf
Forgot that second still >.> I may just shut up if I can't type properly
 Continental Wolves
12:40:05 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf
Vox
Mine is 16 so I spend as much time with her as I can while I still am still able to
 The BloodRose
12:39:51 Mr.colt
I created blog on here about life of The wolf pack BloodRose
 Voxtexy
12:39:44 Vox, Corey
SilverShadow,
Thank you! After 270 days we're finally heading home, just gotta last 5 more days!
 Voxtexy
12:38:46 Vox, Corey
Emmet,
It's a struggle, but makes me all the more thankful to have her when I do get to see her 😌
 SilverShadow
12:38:15 Running Dog
Vox

Thank you for the service, I really appreciate it. I will be praying for you and the crew.
 JacobsDynasty
12:38:05 ~Jacob
Oh never got a natural wolverine
-WP Click-
 Continental Wolves
12:37:38 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf
Vox
I couldn't be away from my dog for that long *^* think the longest I've been away from her is 5 days (besides when I was hospitalized a lot as a child)
 Voxtexy
12:32:42 Vox, Corey
Emmet,
Nah. I'm attached to this ship until 2026. I'll just come to the ship on weekdays to work like 6-8 hours, mainly doing paperwork.

It'll be like going to the office.. if the office was an aircraft carrier.

It won't deploy again until my active duty is over. By then I'll be in the reserves, hopefully back home if possible. At that point I'll only work a few days each month
 The BloodRose
12:31:34 Mr.colt
Since I busy with my wolf anyone got questions ask me you can

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Criticism?January 3, 2018 11:40 PM


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http://preview.ibb.co/gavXBb/image.jpg

I need a little help editing this guy. This is my first hyena drawing~

I'm decent with anatomy, and I've studied up on most things about hyenas, but I haven't got my hands on anything about their faces at the moment. So I'm looking for criticism on the facial structure, how it looks, etc. since I'm not sure on it yet, especially the mouth, jawline, and ears. The flower crown could be commented on as well, although I like it the way it is. It's probably sucky as well >>

So comment any judging below. Keep in mind that there's a border between constructive criticism and being rude, but don't worry, I don't often take offense personally~

Edited at January 3, 2018 11:41 PM by Taboo
Criticism?January 4, 2018 12:21 AM


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I personally think it could use a bit more shading on the sides of the nose.
Criticism?January 29, 2018 07:06 PM


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I'm not sure about the jawline, ears, and fur texture... all seem slightly abnormal. But overall, it's nice. :3
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:16 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/8po2knqfz/6_EC7223_B-3695-479_C-9903-764_DCDCBF117.jpg?dl=1

I think the only thing throwing me off is the nose. It could use more shading, and be more 3-dimensional. I sketched a little example on my iPad for you.

I agree with Seaward about the mouth/jaw being a bit weird, but not overly.

I think it looks awesome.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:18 PM by Deer
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:41 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/58m0hfjld/AF6002_C1-6436-43_C1-_AF8_D-99_E26_C324792.jpg
Here I was just scrolling through google images of hyenas and jotting down/sketching my observations. Hope this helps. :)

I know nothing about hyenas, this is simply what I noticed while scrolling through images.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:44 PM by Deer

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