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 Zeraphia
09:24:26 Spooky Vah
Qyu

That looks so good!
 technoblade
09:24:08 Lil Techy | Techno
Qyu

God I love your art so much!
 Lazy Kingdom
09:22:07 Lazy, Crazy Cat Lady
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I thought he was 18 or 17 nope only 15 lmao
 Qyusen
09:21:51 Qyu - all pronouns
-Click-
Cleaning up lines is so much faster/easier than lining :D
 Azrael
09:21:02 Ash, Grim, Kaos
That sounds like me too. I want to get a ton of currency before the end of the month but I have no motivation. 🥲
 Disturbing Mushroom
09:20:58 Froggy|Key|Keevy
hi chat
 The Amethyst
09:20:26 Dart
Ash

Good!
 TheFlyingKitten
09:20:22 Petri Dish/Sorceress
I'm kinda compelled to try and play Zoochosis at some point. It looks interesting.
 Lazy Kingdom
09:19:37 Lazy, Crazy Cat Lady
Note to self bandaids can fight back ;-;. I don't want to use bandaids anymore lmao
 The Amethyst
09:18:45 Dart
Ash

Indeed except the fact that I need to get 28k mush but I'm lazy as fuck
 Azrael
09:16:48 Ash, Grim, Kaos
Dart-
That's good!
 Zeraphia
09:16:37 Spooky Vah
Boo

Oh for sure. The silver and chocolate only looks so good in very rare situations.
 The Amethyst
09:16:09 Dart
Ash

Good!
 Boo
09:15:19 Chrissy
vah,
she looks much better now, thank you! the silver and chocolate mix was not it.
 Azrael
09:15:14 Ash, Grim, Kaos
Hey chat. How is everyone doing?
 TheFlyingKitten
09:13:44 Petri Dish/Sorceress
@Amor

Mine loves walking over the keyboard, even tries to do so when I push her back. Obsessive bugger she is.
 Zeraphia
09:13:34 Spooky Vah
Boo

Oooh I agree that looks good on her
 Boo
09:12:41 Chrissy
vah,
i was thinking the shiba inu looks best on her.
 Ámor
09:11:24 On haitus
@Kitten
my cat likes to proceed to eat my phone or pc.
 Zeraphia
09:11:14 Spooky Vah
Boo

Hmm, which dye are you thinking of?

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Criticism NeededNovember 9, 2017 10:25 PM


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https://s2.postimg.org/cm6tysat5/Screen_Shot_2017-11-09_at_11.21.15_PM.png

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Edited at November 9, 2017 10:28 PM by Aphmau clan
Criticism NeededNovember 9, 2017 10:28 PM


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Not bad (\^-^/)
Criticism NeededNovember 9, 2017 10:29 PM


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It's not really that bad in all honesty.
The tail and maybe the front leg on the side we're viewing could use a little work maybe, though the tail could actually depend on the breed of cat the drawing is of.
But overall it's pretty good

Edited at November 9, 2017 10:30 PM by Destinations End
Criticism NeededNovember 10, 2017 01:28 AM


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The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:
https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:
Criticism NeededJanuary 1, 2018 09:11 PM


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Siarczek said:
The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:
https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:


This helps me out! Thank you
Criticism NeededJanuary 3, 2018 03:49 AM


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Aww so cool!

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