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 Amygdala
04:31:19 Amy/Anpmygdala
Ky
I hope you can save up fast
 kycantina
04:29:59 ky but it's spooky
Amy, oop best of luck to ya! The second Halloween's over the saving for custom #3 begins
 Amygdala
04:28:07 Amy/Anpmygdala
Damg it...raven feather again...i have 25+ of those already 🥲

Ky
I need 32 more apples for my custom lol...i hope i can get some during FMC
 kycantina
04:26:33 ky but it's spooky
Amy, I wouldn't say no to a HW DH either hehe, will honestly just keep anything good I get, can only afford to customize one though
 Amygdala
04:25:16 Amy/Anpmygdala
Ky
My goal is HW DH stud lol...the new boost wolf would just be a bonus for me...but still i am excited to see what the boost will do
 kycantina
04:24:12 ky but it's spooky
Amy, I'm really hoping we get more details on the event soon, I'm starting to get nervous lol
 kycantina
04:23:09 ky but it's spooky
Honestly my only goal for tomorrow is buying 3k worth of figs to finish building the current batch of idiots
 Amygdala
04:22:19 Amy/Anpmygdala
Ky
That's a lot of tokens...good luck
 kycantina
04:21:50 ky but it's spooky
Amy, according to WP I have 49 tokens ready for Halloween, plus 25k in mush to use, exciting :))
 Amygdala
04:21:02 Amy/Anpmygdala
Ky
Not bad at all XD

Hopefully...i need something to fuel my wolf party addiction because i can't use mush XD
 kycantina
04:19:53 ky but it's spooky
Amy, I'm sure you'll have plenty once FMC starts and you shift into a hardcore gamer lol
 kycantina
04:19:05 ky but it's spooky
-WP Click-
Not bad
 Amygdala
04:18:40 Amy/Anpmygdala
Ky
I can't get any...no fair XD
 kycantina
04:18:03 ky but it's spooky
another CB >:) I love gambling let's go
 Mount Lambda
04:10:43 Lambda
I keep switching between two pups when exploring, and interesting things only happen when Vesta is going, I swear! She keeps getting points. When Lyra goes she doesn't get any points... barely any
 Amygdala
04:09:26 Amy/Anpmygdala
Arctic
Sure set it up
 Arctic Moon
04:09:08 NY, Malo, Arctic
Anyone want to pvp? I'm bored as heck
 Amygdala
04:08:44 Amy/Anpmygdala
Arctic
I have the same problem lol
 Old Money
04:08:42 elegance❀
-WP Click-
 Arctic Moon
04:07:43 NY, Malo, Arctic
My Gwyn Ap Nudds just can't give me a charon's blessing

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Criticism?January 3, 2018 11:40 PM


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http://preview.ibb.co/gavXBb/image.jpg

I need a little help editing this guy. This is my first hyena drawing~

I'm decent with anatomy, and I've studied up on most things about hyenas, but I haven't got my hands on anything about their faces at the moment. So I'm looking for criticism on the facial structure, how it looks, etc. since I'm not sure on it yet, especially the mouth, jawline, and ears. The flower crown could be commented on as well, although I like it the way it is. It's probably sucky as well >>

So comment any judging below. Keep in mind that there's a border between constructive criticism and being rude, but don't worry, I don't often take offense personally~

Edited at January 3, 2018 11:41 PM by Taboo
Criticism?January 4, 2018 12:21 AM


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I personally think it could use a bit more shading on the sides of the nose.
Criticism?January 29, 2018 07:06 PM


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I'm not sure about the jawline, ears, and fur texture... all seem slightly abnormal. But overall, it's nice. :3
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:16 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/8po2knqfz/6_EC7223_B-3695-479_C-9903-764_DCDCBF117.jpg?dl=1

I think the only thing throwing me off is the nose. It could use more shading, and be more 3-dimensional. I sketched a little example on my iPad for you.

I agree with Seaward about the mouth/jaw being a bit weird, but not overly.

I think it looks awesome.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:18 PM by Deer
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:41 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/58m0hfjld/AF6002_C1-6436-43_C1-_AF8_D-99_E26_C324792.jpg
Here I was just scrolling through google images of hyenas and jotting down/sketching my observations. Hope this helps. :)

I know nothing about hyenas, this is simply what I noticed while scrolling through images.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:44 PM by Deer

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