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06:09:28 Cae, Blue

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the explore grind is calling very, very loudly 😔

05:53:37 Cat

Always the way though... don't worry we weren't counting :P

05:52:26 Cae, Blue

me: imma say 15 min even tho its gonna take less than that
also me: ... its been 35 min

05:19:32 Is a dinosaur rawr

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05:14:57 Cat

See you soon <3

05:14:01 Cae, Blue

Also, im gonna dip for a bit to make food :3 catch you in like 15 min lol

05:13:19 Cae, Blue

May another girl of yours see that and spite you with an even better pup *^*

05:11:38 Cae, Blue

I love sanctuary wolves arriving with 200 dom XD

05:11:18 Cat

She is very interesting lol, probably the best thing I will get all night tbh xD

05:08:56 Cae, Blue

Oh, shes messy :O looks covered in blood, i love it XD

05:07:35 Cat

05:07:05 Cae, Blue

Noobking, but... Sv...

Cat, oh? Do show? :o

05:06:03 Cat

Cae
Ooo good plan xD hopefully that works!

I just had a 52AC pup just born... she isn't bad :P

05:04:28 Sith Happens

He falls below my 48 r requirements though

05:03:33 Cae, Blue

Noobking, still, 45r ac sv is a great pup ^^

05:02:49 Cae, Blue

Cat, i shall try mass breeding once every season for now, and see how that goes XD

05:01:50 Cae, Blue

and SV??? congrats omg!

05:01:34 Sith Happens

Ah fuck. No I'm blind

05:01:33 Cat

Aww no D: atleast you got some bones but you will have to try them again :)

05:01:11 Sith Happens

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O.o 55 R AC pup?!?!

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06:09:28 Cae, Blue

Mushrooms: 259
Mushrooms Saved: 0

the explore grind is calling very, very loudly 😔

05:53:37 Cat

Always the way though... don't worry we weren't counting :P

05:52:26 Cae, Blue

me: imma say 15 min even tho its gonna take less than that
also me: ... its been 35 min

05:19:32 Is a dinosaur rawr

Pvp?

05:14:57 Cat

See you soon <3

05:14:01 Cae, Blue

Also, im gonna dip for a bit to make food :3 catch you in like 15 min lol

05:13:19 Cae, Blue

May another girl of yours see that and spite you with an even better pup *^*

05:11:38 Cae, Blue

I love sanctuary wolves arriving with 200 dom XD

05:11:18 Cat

She is very interesting lol, probably the best thing I will get all night tbh xD

05:08:56 Cae, Blue

Oh, shes messy :O looks covered in blood, i love it XD

05:07:35 Cat

05:07:05 Cae, Blue

Noobking, but... Sv...

Cat, oh? Do show? :o

05:06:03 Cat

Cae
Ooo good plan xD hopefully that works!

I just had a 52AC pup just born... she isn't bad :P

05:04:28 Sith Happens

He falls below my 48 r requirements though

05:03:33 Cae, Blue

Noobking, still, 45r ac sv is a great pup ^^

05:02:49 Cae, Blue

Cat, i shall try mass breeding once every season for now, and see how that goes XD

05:01:50 Cae, Blue

and SV??? congrats omg!

05:01:34 Sith Happens

Ah fuck. No I'm blind

05:01:33 Cat

Aww no D: atleast you got some bones but you will have to try them again :)

05:01:11 Sith Happens

-WP Click-

O.o 55 R AC pup?!?!

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I dont wanna be a broke college student :)

December 31, 2022 08:36 PM

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AHHH

This sentence is kinda confusing:

Before long, I began to think of all the good I could do for those in situations that I could have been in, had I not been so fortunate.

What do you mean by you were fortunate? When? It was never explained in your essay. I SUGGEST(It's your essay, so you can decide whatever you'd like :D)you fix it

I dont wanna be a broke college student :)

December 31, 2022 08:39 PM

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Hmm, my problem is I wanna explain but not make it a sob story. Lemme try something real quick

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December 31, 2022 08:51 PM

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Before long, I began to think of all the good I could do for those in less fortunate situations, similar to ones I have been in. Situations that if I had not been lucky enough to be taken in by my adoptive mother, I could have easily fallen victim to.

Does that sound better or shorten?

I dont wanna be a broke college student :)

December 31, 2022 09:03 PM

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AHHH

This sentence is kinda confusing:

Before long, I began to think of all the good I could do for those in situations that I could have been in, had I not been so fortunate.

What do you mean by you were fortunate? When? It was never explained in your essay. I SUGGEST(It's your essay, so you can decide whatever you'd like :D)you fix it

I dont wanna be a broke college student :)

December 31, 2022 09:03 PM

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sorry for the double

I dont wanna be a broke college student :)

December 31, 2022 09:04 PM

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It sounds AMAZING

Just try to shorten it as much as you can :)

I dont wanna be a broke college student :)

December 31, 2022 11:20 PM

Sir Froggington

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Something that could help is if you have a short anecdote where you put into practice what you are saying in this essay. It'll bring the point home stronger.

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