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03:35:04 Is a dinosaur rawr

Crook nah its okay I knew who I was choosing XD

03:33:29 Crook, She/her

VioletEcho
XD

03:33:16 Crook, She/her

VioletEcho
Yeah lol
It's okay, it wasnt a fair battle.

03:30:55 Is a dinosaur rawr

Totally have not been neglecting bax too XD

03:30:22 Is a dinosaur rawr

Crook Lol glad its not just me XD
Aw man

03:29:45 Crook, She/her

Oop just ffound out that my premium ran out 0.o Time to start saving up again lmao

03:27:44 Crook, She/her

VioletEcho
Lol its okay, I do the same.

03:21:33 Is a dinosaur rawr

I really need to stop neglecting my non boost wolves ;-;

03:20:03 Is a dinosaur rawr

Crook lmao XD

03:19:13 Crook, She/her

VioletEcho
Maybe... but StarEyes is an awful PvPer haha. Even her mother, a hip dysplasia wolf, could do better then her, lol

03:16:33 Is a dinosaur rawr

Crook I think you would've won if I had put in the other one XD

03:14:08 Crook, She/her

VioletEcho
Yeah, usually the wolf I used is good a Pvp but i guess not today lol

03:12:54 Is a dinosaur rawr

Crook good game ^^
I feel bad though like that was just brutal XD

03:12:49 Crook, She/her

VioletEcho
Lol StarEyes got smoked by Tor XD

03:09:31 Is a dinosaur rawr

Cool okay we can but I don't mind either! ^^

03:07:30 Crook, She/her

VioletEcho
You too! I can do a 200 BE divine health battle next to make it more even if you want to battle again!

03:05:07 Is a dinosaur rawr

Crook
Yayy ^^
Good game

03:03:14 Crook, She/her

VioletEcho
Yes :)

02:09:27 Is a dinosaur rawr

Pvp anyone?

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03:35:04 Is a dinosaur rawr

Crook nah its okay I knew who I was choosing XD

03:33:29 Crook, She/her

VioletEcho
XD

03:33:16 Crook, She/her

VioletEcho
Yeah lol
It's okay, it wasnt a fair battle.

03:30:55 Is a dinosaur rawr

Totally have not been neglecting bax too XD

03:30:22 Is a dinosaur rawr

Crook Lol glad its not just me XD
Aw man

03:29:45 Crook, She/her

Oop just ffound out that my premium ran out 0.o Time to start saving up again lmao

03:27:44 Crook, She/her

VioletEcho
Lol its okay, I do the same.

03:21:33 Is a dinosaur rawr

I really need to stop neglecting my non boost wolves ;-;

03:20:03 Is a dinosaur rawr

Crook lmao XD

03:19:13 Crook, She/her

VioletEcho
Maybe... but StarEyes is an awful PvPer haha. Even her mother, a hip dysplasia wolf, could do better then her, lol

03:16:33 Is a dinosaur rawr

Crook I think you would've won if I had put in the other one XD

03:14:08 Crook, She/her

VioletEcho
Yeah, usually the wolf I used is good a Pvp but i guess not today lol

03:12:54 Is a dinosaur rawr

Crook good game ^^
I feel bad though like that was just brutal XD

03:12:49 Crook, She/her

VioletEcho
Lol StarEyes got smoked by Tor XD

03:09:31 Is a dinosaur rawr

Cool okay we can but I don't mind either! ^^

03:07:30 Crook, She/her

VioletEcho
You too! I can do a 200 BE divine health battle next to make it more even if you want to battle again!

03:05:07 Is a dinosaur rawr

Crook
Yayy ^^
Good game

03:03:14 Crook, She/her

VioletEcho
Yes :)

02:09:27 Is a dinosaur rawr

Pvp anyone?

The Day Crawler

02:05:02 Day, Crawl, Runnr

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I dont wanna be a broke college student :)

December 31, 2022 08:36 PM

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AHHH

This sentence is kinda confusing:

Before long, I began to think of all the good I could do for those in situations that I could have been in, had I not been so fortunate.

What do you mean by you were fortunate? When? It was never explained in your essay. I SUGGEST(It's your essay, so you can decide whatever you'd like :D)you fix it

I dont wanna be a broke college student :)

December 31, 2022 08:39 PM

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Hmm, my problem is I wanna explain but not make it a sob story. Lemme try something real quick

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December 31, 2022 08:51 PM

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Before long, I began to think of all the good I could do for those in less fortunate situations, similar to ones I have been in. Situations that if I had not been lucky enough to be taken in by my adoptive mother, I could have easily fallen victim to.

Does that sound better or shorten?

I dont wanna be a broke college student :)

December 31, 2022 09:03 PM

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AHHH

This sentence is kinda confusing:

Before long, I began to think of all the good I could do for those in situations that I could have been in, had I not been so fortunate.

What do you mean by you were fortunate? When? It was never explained in your essay. I SUGGEST(It's your essay, so you can decide whatever you'd like :D)you fix it

I dont wanna be a broke college student :)

December 31, 2022 09:03 PM

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sorry for the double

I dont wanna be a broke college student :)

December 31, 2022 09:04 PM

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It sounds AMAZING

Just try to shorten it as much as you can :)

I dont wanna be a broke college student :)

December 31, 2022 11:20 PM

Sir Froggington

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Something that could help is if you have a short anecdote where you put into practice what you are saying in this essay. It'll bring the point home stronger.

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