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...

Hang on, I might've just gotten an idea--
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Your wolves played: willow protests against alpha rules.

She is the alpha????
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Yikes, they both look great, fair warning Circus can and will be an ass and...we dont like Circus-
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Grim

... yeah. It is.

I like both versions a lot and I made it harder for myself. >.>
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Depends on if we want tons of testosterone in the RP or not XD I'm assuming this is for the circus
 Zeraphia
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I was dorking around, okay? Spun a wheel and it said; "new oc" so yeah.

Well, I decided to be dumb and put the same character in two lines.
And now... well...
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I have a problem on *which* do I pick?
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Grim

Only slightly? Screw up? If it'll LOAD--good gravy

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 Zeraphia
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Emmet

Right behind you at 412 XD
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-WP Click-

paws for my first chim?
 Foreverdragons23
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@Continental
Damn !!!
 Forest whisp
12:06:40 She /her/ daughter/
XD
 SpiritGuardian
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My eyes are gonna be melting soon.
 Forest whisp
12:05:32 She /her/ daughter/
Check it out

-WP Click-
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Days

You have logged in 444 days in a row.
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I'm a custom palette addict >.> Ohhh god I'm hyped
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Grim

XDD

...

Hang on, I might've just gotten an idea--
 The Reaper
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Cap
...Yes
 SpiritGuardian
11:55:56 Mr Palette Guy
Bleh I can't wait till people start opening up custom palettes. I seriously need one.
 Zeraphia
11:55:42 Space Pirate Captain
Grim

Would you believe me if I said that's how I ended up in this situation to begin with?
 The Reaper
11:55:04 Reaper / Grim
Cap
Spin a wheel?
 Forest whisp
11:54:34 She /her/ daughter/
Your wolves played: willow protests against alpha rules.

She is the alpha????
 Zeraphia
11:53:36 Space Pirate Captain
Grim

I knoww that's the issue. >.>
 The Reaper
11:52:16 Reaper / Grim
Cap
Yikes, they both look great, fair warning Circus can and will be an ass and...we dont like Circus-
 Zeraphia
11:49:23 Space Pirate Captain
Grim

... yeah. It is.

I like both versions a lot and I made it harder for myself. >.>
 The Reaper
11:49:00 Reaper / Grim
Cap
Depends on if we want tons of testosterone in the RP or not XD I'm assuming this is for the circus
 Zeraphia
11:46:55 Space Pirate Captain
I was dorking around, okay? Spun a wheel and it said; "new oc" so yeah.

Well, I decided to be dumb and put the same character in two lines.
And now... well...
-Click-

-Click-

I have a problem on *which* do I pick?
 Zeraphia
11:45:23 Space Pirate Captain
Grim

Only slightly? Screw up? If it'll LOAD--good gravy




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Thoughts/light criticism ?January 7, 2021 05:54 AM


starwolfs

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Could I get some thoughts on this, first thing though I know the one wing is horrible xD so please look over the detail as best as you can since I know that's wrong and didn't realize that until I was done lol. I was trying to figure out how to use drawing app and this what came out of it , also I've added 2 others that could use some light criticism as well
done on January 7
done on January 26


done on January 25

^ this one I actually really like the concept of and will probably do redraws of to see if I've in proved on my skills ^
( credits belong to me )

Edited at January 28, 2021 07:50 PM by starwolfs
Thoughts/light criticism ?January 13, 2021 12:48 AM


Wisp

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It looks like for the shading you did smudge, but I would recommend using a blending tool. Also, try to have the light coming from the same direction (the horns have shadows going to the left, but the wings have shadows going to the right, and the spikes have the shadows going up).
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I would recommend a deep blue for shading, and a very light yellow for lighting (that's what personally use).
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Since you included lighting in the eyes I'd recommend lighting the rest of the piece
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If the dragon has arms then I would attach the wings to the arms
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I would make the nostrils a little smaller.
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I hope nothing came across as mean, I always feel like I'm being bad when giving constructive criticism.
Thoughts/light criticism ?January 13, 2021 05:47 AM


starwolfs

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Thanks for the constructive criticism all the stuff that you mentioned I didn't realize until you said it, I just knew something didn't look right about it .
Thanks also for the tips on the shading and lighting those are very helpful , first time actually doing digital and I really didn't have a clue how to use anything
don't worry you don't sound mean at all :)
Thoughts/light criticism ?January 28, 2021 07:29 PM


Former Pack

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sorry if any of this seems rude at all XD
I would personally recommend something showing some part of the mouth, because in the current picture, you can't see any of it, and it looks a bit odd.
that is actually my only suggestion, you did an amazing job, all in all!
Thoughts/light criticism ?January 28, 2021 07:42 PM


starwolfs

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Yeah I seam to be struggling with mouths on everything and this was early on ( I think the first thing I actually did was this piece ) so I wasn't even going to try a mouth at the time. I am working on them now but they still need work for me to be comfortable with them
thanks for your input ^^

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