Wolf Play : I tried to draw and need some feedback

02:33:35 Reaper / Grim

Daze
Damn those look great!

02:33:16 Mr Palette Guy

reaper,
shit I love the second one too pfft

Lackadaisy

02:33:02 Stray, LT | H/H

So I had a lot of free time today since it's the end of the semester and the guys are taking tests

-Click-

02:33:01 Cae, Blue

-WP Click-
oh??? amy, i think the power of complaining heard me wish for halving 8g curse??? :D

02:32:18 Reaper / Grim

Spirit
Haha same, the first ones & last ones are from my early teenage years so classic 2000s/2010s hits

02:31:10 Mr Palette Guy

reaper,
Hah how funny- first song I love. I used to sing it for hours like four years ago

02:28:34 Reaper / Grim

Spirit
Try this, I threw a bit of my favorites in there while still trying to keep an upbeat, energetic tone (as well as a couple silly songs ;3)
-YT Click-

Drunken seas

02:27:02 Pera

-WP Click- Looking for some help <3

02:23:56 Cae, Blue

amy, yeah.... got my hopes up and all </3

02:23:37 Cae, Blue

-WP Click-
how does this even get in sanctuary? werent there supposed to be rarity and talent restrictions?

STS

02:22:20 TS, Speckles

Lucky i got my palette fixed, Makes life a lot easier

02:21:20 Amy/Anpmygdala

Oh lol...i just saw the legendary nose lol
My bad

MLadySkylar

02:21:01 P'Sky

Wow
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02:20:53 Amy/Anpmygdala

Yay sorry i love you did good for once XD

02:20:40 Space Pirate Captain

Holly

It got a UI update! You have a mobile friendly version and an updated desktop version.

*Hollystar*

02:20:10 Holly

What the heck happened to the site layout o.O

02:19:17 Cae, Blue

-WP Click-
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02:19:06 Space Pirate Captain

My first thoughts are Riot and Alive by the Scarlet Opera...

I love Be Mine by the covasettes

Old one but solid is Could have been me by the struts

Oooh drama by Spencer Sutherland too--

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02:33:51 TS, Speckles

Cres. Nice, cute girl <3

02:33:35 Reaper / Grim

Daze
Damn those look great!

02:33:16 Mr Palette Guy

reaper,
shit I love the second one too pfft

Lackadaisy

02:33:02 Stray, LT | H/H

So I had a lot of free time today since it's the end of the semester and the guys are taking tests

-Click-

02:33:01 Cae, Blue

-WP Click-
oh??? amy, i think the power of complaining heard me wish for halving 8g curse??? :D

02:32:18 Reaper / Grim

Spirit
Haha same, the first ones & last ones are from my early teenage years so classic 2000s/2010s hits

02:31:10 Mr Palette Guy

reaper,
Hah how funny- first song I love. I used to sing it for hours like four years ago

02:28:34 Reaper / Grim

Spirit
Try this, I threw a bit of my favorites in there while still trying to keep an upbeat, energetic tone (as well as a couple silly songs ;3)
-YT Click-

Drunken seas

02:27:02 Pera

-WP Click- Looking for some help <3

02:23:56 Cae, Blue

amy, yeah.... got my hopes up and all </3

02:23:37 Cae, Blue

-WP Click-
how does this even get in sanctuary? werent there supposed to be rarity and talent restrictions?

STS

02:22:20 TS, Speckles

Lucky i got my palette fixed, Makes life a lot easier

02:21:20 Amy/Anpmygdala

Oh lol...i just saw the legendary nose lol
My bad

MLadySkylar

02:21:01 P'Sky

Wow
-WP Click-

02:20:53 Amy/Anpmygdala

Yay sorry i love you did good for once XD

02:20:40 Space Pirate Captain

Holly

It got a UI update! You have a mobile friendly version and an updated desktop version.

*Hollystar*

02:20:10 Holly

What the heck happened to the site layout o.O

02:19:17 Cae, Blue

-WP Click-
-Click-

02:19:06 Space Pirate Captain

My first thoughts are Riot and Alive by the Scarlet Opera...

I love Be Mine by the covasettes

Old one but solid is Could have been me by the struts

Oooh drama by Spencer Sutherland too--

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August 4, 2020 05:50 PM

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Hello, i was bored and decided to try my best at art. I believe i was trying to draw a bear XD. Please comment any tips or advice anyone has so i can try to improve.

Heres the wanna be bear XD:

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Any advice would be greatly appreciated

Edit: heres some new stuff that i just made that i really enjoyed making. Same rules apply give me some feedback please :)

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second attempt at an animal this is a puppy :)

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at least it should be XD

Edited at August 8, 2020 09:51 PM by Akugitsune328

August 4, 2020 05:53 PM

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I really like what you have here, maybe try looking at references of bears to assist in a more realistic approach. If you're going for a more cartoonish one, then more aesthetic style perhaps? Very good though.

August 4, 2020 06:11 PM

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Aww its adorable <3

I would do as Frigid suggested and use a reference photo. It will give you an idea of which direction the fur lays, there the eyes are in proportion to the nose, mouth, etc. I would also reccomend learning how to shade and highlight based on reference photos. You can make a white blob look 3d and realistic if you shade it right ^^

Another tip is to upload your reference photo into whatever art program you are using, preferably in a different tab so that you can use the color picker tool (The eyedropper thing) to use the exact colors from the image. It will save you time trying to get the colors to match and will also be most accurate.

You can also use this reference photo to sketch out your image by creating layers and lowering the opacity of the photo, then drawing on the layer above it, But obviously make sure to either credit the reference photo or change your sketch enough to prevent any accidental theft.

Hope this helps! I would post links to a few helpful videos but I don't know if that goes against the hotlinking rules, so if you want them I can PM them to you!

Edit: One other thing, Wolf Play requires you to put your pack # on your artwork so that you are easily identifiable, for theft protection. They do not accept artist signitures because they can't possibly memorize them all. Don't be suprized if your photo gets mod-edit removed for lack of proper crediting. You can fix this by simply adding on your pack # under your signiture or somewhere it is visable ^^

Art Crediting Guide ~

Edited at August 4, 2020 06:17 PM by Viviren

August 5, 2020 12:18 AM

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I think you should blend your colors more. Im talking about the oragne and white lines on the nose and fur. Blend those together, otherwise im not rlly an artist so everything else is up to you.

August 5, 2020 10:27 AM