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Isnt he pretty?

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ET this is his link isnt he -WP Click-

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No way, congrats! That's my favourite defect after axanthic! :0

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ET I have a Viti 4 Wolf!!!!

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how do i make it so that i can see the palettes?

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I'm assuming it's correct. I switched it from Times New Roman. :,) They look so similar. (New is Book Antiqua)

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I never use my alt account but still, it's cool

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Thank you!!

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XD Yeah it's pretty handy

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Waiiit, the switch accounts thing is SO neat omg

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Khaos, i'll send you a screenshot

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Blazing Dawn rakes their claws along the ground, lighting them on fire. Then they slash Badger 1 inflicting 20 points of searing burning damage.

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Can someone send me a screenshot of my palette on desktop version please? I'm messing with fonts, the headline specifically right now to test.

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Yea! Let me switch to my phone so I can take pictures lol

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Ooo! May I see them? If that's fine with you lol

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I'm good, just working on a few sketches :)

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Mirko,
I'm pretty good :D
you?

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Hey Doodle, how are you?

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02:42:37 tern / gaze

ET
thank you!

02:42:01 Leaf She/Her

Isnt he pretty?

02:41:45 Leaf She/Her

ET this is his link isnt he -WP Click-

02:41:01 ET

Eternity's Gaze
Pack > Pack Activities > Manage Palette > scroll down a lil

LeafClan
No way, congrats! That's my favourite defect after axanthic! :0

02:40:51 Leaf She/Her

Blazing Dawn lays on their back with their paws towards the sky.

02:39:21 Leaf She/Her

ET I have a Viti 4 Wolf!!!!

02:39:19 tern / gaze

how do i make it so that i can see the palettes?

02:31:03

I'm assuming it's correct. I switched it from Times New Roman. :,) They look so similar. (New is Book Antiqua)

02:30:52 ET

I never use my alt account but still, it's cool

02:30:23

Thank you!!

02:30:06 Reaper / Grim

ET
XD Yeah it's pretty handy

02:29:27 ET

Waiiit, the switch accounts thing is SO neat omg

02:27:44 Mr Palette Guy

Khaos, i'll send you a screenshot

02:26:04 Leaf She/Her

Blazing Dawn rakes their claws along the ground, lighting them on fire. Then they slash Badger 1 inflicting 20 points of searing burning damage.

02:24:55

Can someone send me a screenshot of my palette on desktop version please? I'm messing with fonts, the headline specifically right now to test.

02:23:41 Mir

Doodle
Yea! Let me switch to my phone so I can take pictures lol

02:22:15 Irish Gay Rat

Mirko,
Ooo! May I see them? If that's fine with you lol

02:19:43 Mir

Doodle
I'm good, just working on a few sketches :)

02:18:37 Irish Gay Rat

Mirko,
I'm pretty good :D
you?

02:18:13 Mir

Hey Doodle, how are you?

Leaf
Very nice :)

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Not sure whats wrong

November 23, 2018 01:49 AM

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I made this piece today
https://i.postimg.cc/fyDhLtMB/2392-C118-DF13-4597-9-BF2-6-E23-A916-B115.png

And I cant tell whats wrong. I think it has something to do with the back legs and maybe the ears or the rib cage. It's a species I made and I can post a reference sheet of one if it helps but I really want to fix this. Ps. The tuff on the shoulder is actually where a wing used to be. It was cut off by hunters.

Thanks!

Edited at November 23, 2018 05:00 PM by Path of Stars

Not sure whats wrong

November 23, 2018 03:49 AM

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I suggest studying wolf and canine anatomy, it can go a long way.

The ears need to respond properly to the floor, so if drawing a straight line on the ground part helps to position the ears to be affected by the ground, then do it :D

The shoulder juts out, but it shouldn't. Just a tiny tuft of fur will suffice.

The closest back legs rump (the large part that connects the leg to the body) looks a bit too thin.

But other than that, its looking great so far.

Not sure whats wrong

November 23, 2018 04:49 PM

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Wood Carve said:
I suggest studying wolf and canine anatomy, it can go a long way.
The ears need to respond properly to the floor, so if drawing a straight line on the ground part helps to position the ears to be affected by the ground, then do it :D
The shoulder juts out, but it shouldn't. Just a tiny tuft of fur will suffice.
The closest back legs rump (the large part that connects the leg to the body) looks a bit too thin.

But other than that, its looking great so far.

Thanks! That makes sense.

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