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Feral, Anthro, and humanoid are all up on my can draw table

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Anyone have any good gorey/creepy valentines day YCH Ideas I could steal?

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-WP Click- look at her :) she is the second oldest Wolf in the game

06:26:51 katy | beetle

forest,
thanks!
i need to redraw the bottle of light accessory though ^^' it looks a little wonky

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@katy

Ooo I love it!

06:19:14 katy | beetle

thank you <3

06:18:27 Pack of Sharp Snap

distant
Pretty

06:17:28 katy | beetle

-Click-
love how this custom turned out *^*

05:57:54 Don't call me BJ.

Ey "You have 4005 character points to assign to your wolves."
Only 905 cp left

05:32:37 Graves | Chaos

Jake
I actually don't have anything I can make right now, I need to go grocery shopping :(

05:19:03 Don't call me BJ.

@Night Shade
Go make a whole meal for yourself

05:16:28 Graves | Chaos

I shouldn't be up it's 3am and I'm hungry

05:09:32 Amy/Anpmygdala

P'sky
That can be scarry at first...drive slowly and be carefull around turns. Always breake before you turn not while you are turning

05:07:12 P'Sky

Amy
I've just never driven in snow

05:06:20 Amy/Anpmygdala

Night
No problem

05:05:01 Night

Amy
Okay thanks :)

05:04:29 Amy/Anpmygdala

Night
Well it applys it by 10 difference but it applys it to your wolves randomly...like alpha might not be your alpha anymore

05:03:12 Night

Amy
So it just applies dominance CP to all wolves randomly?

05:01:08 Amy/Anpmygdala

Night
It staggers dominance randomly for your den (basicly free dominance CP)

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07:07:10 Don't call me BJ.

Feral, Anthro, and humanoid are all up on my can draw table

07:06:49 Don't call me BJ.

Anyone have any good gorey/creepy valentines day YCH Ideas I could steal?

Desire of The Hills

07:05:58 Hills / Desire

Waking up and signing on to mail is always such a serotonin rush ugh I love it

06:38:17 Yukon

-WP Click- look at her :) she is the second oldest Wolf in the game

06:26:51 katy | beetle

forest,
thanks!
i need to redraw the bottle of light accessory though ^^' it looks a little wonky

Forest Dwelling

06:21:01 I am on Wolflocke ok

@katy

Ooo I love it!

06:19:14 katy | beetle

thank you <3

06:18:27 Pack of Sharp Snap

distant
Pretty

06:17:28 katy | beetle

-Click-
love how this custom turned out *^*

05:57:54 Don't call me BJ.

Ey "You have 4005 character points to assign to your wolves."
Only 905 cp left

05:32:37 Graves | Chaos

Jake
I actually don't have anything I can make right now, I need to go grocery shopping :(

05:19:03 Don't call me BJ.

@Night Shade
Go make a whole meal for yourself

05:16:28 Graves | Chaos

I shouldn't be up it's 3am and I'm hungry

05:09:32 Amy/Anpmygdala

P'sky
That can be scarry at first...drive slowly and be carefull around turns. Always breake before you turn not while you are turning

05:07:12 P'Sky

Amy
I've just never driven in snow

05:06:20 Amy/Anpmygdala

Night
No problem

05:05:01 Night

Amy
Okay thanks :)

05:04:29 Amy/Anpmygdala

Night
Well it applys it by 10 difference but it applys it to your wolves randomly...like alpha might not be your alpha anymore

05:03:12 Night

Amy
So it just applies dominance CP to all wolves randomly?

05:01:08 Amy/Anpmygdala

Night
It staggers dominance randomly for your den (basicly free dominance CP)

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July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

Or

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

July 30, 2018 06:33 PM

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Sorry if I sound rude but... I can't see the horse lol! The dogs paws could use some work, but other than that it looks super cute! Great Job!

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