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07:48:48 Tea, Tea Queen
Vah
lmao thats valid
I'm starting to get a couple that I like. Beauregard is really close to Beaudan which is a name I adore, but I also like Rhodes, or the super creative rip-off of Jay
 Zeraphia
07:47:19 Space Pirate Captain
Tea

Pffft XDD

I dunno what else. That's the end of my list.
 The Tea Drinkers
07:46:30 Tea, Tea Queen
Vah
ohhh not Vinnie >.> it's giving short Italian mafia gangster
 Zeraphia
07:45:50 Space Pirate Captain
For short.

That sounded wrong but my brain has missed what it is supposed to be.
 Zeraphia
07:45:28 Space Pirate Captain
Tea

Vincent works--he could go by Vinnie for short.
 The Tea Drinkers
07:45:11 Tea, Tea Queen
Vah
hmm maybe Vincent? sounds a little Italian aha T_T

Callahan. Carraway. Nothing sounds right :,)
 Zeraphia
07:44:21 Space Pirate Captain
Silver

You got an Ery!
 Silver Shadows
07:44:00 Silver/Shadow/Night
Pup check?
-WP Click-
 Zeraphia
07:43:34 Space Pirate Captain
Tea

XD hmm. One of these maybe?

Julian
Vincent
Roland
Vernon
 The Tea Drinkers
07:41:35 Tea, Tea Queen
Vah
I don't know it doesn't feel right. like calling a horse a honse, funny but not right
 Zeraphia
07:40:45 Space Pirate Captain
Tea

Hmm Seymour has a nice old-money ring to it.
 The Tea Drinkers
07:39:28 Tea, Tea Queen
Vah
perhaps I should. Berlin? Seymour?
 Zeraphia
07:37:08 Space Pirate Captain
Tea

XDD maybe RP post just to get your mind off of it for a moment or two and then go back with fresh eyes?
 The Tea Drinkers
07:35:43 Tea, Tea Queen
Vah
mmm maybe >:P technically im supposed to be writing an RP post but this is more pressing
 Zeraphia
07:34:15 Space Pirate Captain
Tea

You could try figuring out personality and stuff first and then looking toward a name?
 The Tea Drinkers
07:33:47 Tea, Tea Queen
Vah
it truly would be heartbreaking T_T I need to calm down
 Zeraphia
07:32:56 Space Pirate Captain
Tea

XDD that would be so sad--
 Kháos
07:32:47 
Thank you chat.
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07:32:12 
Welcome back khaos
 The Tea Drinkers
07:32:01 Tea, Tea Queen
this child is stumping me and Im about to rage name him something heinous like bongwater

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 The Tea Drinkers
07:48:48 Tea, Tea Queen
Vah
lmao thats valid
I'm starting to get a couple that I like. Beauregard is really close to Beaudan which is a name I adore, but I also like Rhodes, or the super creative rip-off of Jay
 Zeraphia
07:47:19 Space Pirate Captain
Tea

Pffft XDD

I dunno what else. That's the end of my list.
 The Tea Drinkers
07:46:30 Tea, Tea Queen
Vah
ohhh not Vinnie >.> it's giving short Italian mafia gangster
 Zeraphia
07:45:50 Space Pirate Captain
For short.

That sounded wrong but my brain has missed what it is supposed to be.
 Zeraphia
07:45:28 Space Pirate Captain
Tea

Vincent works--he could go by Vinnie for short.
 The Tea Drinkers
07:45:11 Tea, Tea Queen
Vah
hmm maybe Vincent? sounds a little Italian aha T_T

Callahan. Carraway. Nothing sounds right :,)
 Zeraphia
07:44:21 Space Pirate Captain
Silver

You got an Ery!
 Silver Shadows
07:44:00 Silver/Shadow/Night
Pup check?
-WP Click-
 Zeraphia
07:43:34 Space Pirate Captain
Tea

XD hmm. One of these maybe?

Julian
Vincent
Roland
Vernon
 The Tea Drinkers
07:41:35 Tea, Tea Queen
Vah
I don't know it doesn't feel right. like calling a horse a honse, funny but not right
 Zeraphia
07:40:45 Space Pirate Captain
Tea

Hmm Seymour has a nice old-money ring to it.
 The Tea Drinkers
07:39:28 Tea, Tea Queen
Vah
perhaps I should. Berlin? Seymour?
 Zeraphia
07:37:08 Space Pirate Captain
Tea

XDD maybe RP post just to get your mind off of it for a moment or two and then go back with fresh eyes?
 The Tea Drinkers
07:35:43 Tea, Tea Queen
Vah
mmm maybe >:P technically im supposed to be writing an RP post but this is more pressing
 Zeraphia
07:34:15 Space Pirate Captain
Tea

You could try figuring out personality and stuff first and then looking toward a name?
 The Tea Drinkers
07:33:47 Tea, Tea Queen
Vah
it truly would be heartbreaking T_T I need to calm down
 Zeraphia
07:32:56 Space Pirate Captain
Tea

XDD that would be so sad--
 Kháos
07:32:47 
Thank you chat.
 Chat
07:32:12 
Welcome back khaos
 The Tea Drinkers
07:32:01 Tea, Tea Queen
this child is stumping me and Im about to rage name him something heinous like bongwater




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Thoughts/light criticism ?January 7, 2021 05:54 AM


starwolfs

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Could I get some thoughts on this, first thing though I know the one wing is horrible xD so please look over the detail as best as you can since I know that's wrong and didn't realize that until I was done lol. I was trying to figure out how to use drawing app and this what came out of it , also I've added 2 others that could use some light criticism as well
done on January 7
done on January 26


done on January 25

^ this one I actually really like the concept of and will probably do redraws of to see if I've in proved on my skills ^
( credits belong to me )

Edited at January 28, 2021 07:50 PM by starwolfs
Thoughts/light criticism ?January 13, 2021 12:48 AM


Wisp

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It looks like for the shading you did smudge, but I would recommend using a blending tool. Also, try to have the light coming from the same direction (the horns have shadows going to the left, but the wings have shadows going to the right, and the spikes have the shadows going up).
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I would recommend a deep blue for shading, and a very light yellow for lighting (that's what personally use).
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Since you included lighting in the eyes I'd recommend lighting the rest of the piece
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If the dragon has arms then I would attach the wings to the arms
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I would make the nostrils a little smaller.
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I hope nothing came across as mean, I always feel like I'm being bad when giving constructive criticism.
Thoughts/light criticism ?January 13, 2021 05:47 AM


starwolfs

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Thanks for the constructive criticism all the stuff that you mentioned I didn't realize until you said it, I just knew something didn't look right about it .
Thanks also for the tips on the shading and lighting those are very helpful , first time actually doing digital and I really didn't have a clue how to use anything
don't worry you don't sound mean at all :)
Thoughts/light criticism ?January 28, 2021 07:29 PM


Former Pack

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sorry if any of this seems rude at all XD
I would personally recommend something showing some part of the mouth, because in the current picture, you can't see any of it, and it looks a bit odd.
that is actually my only suggestion, you did an amazing job, all in all!
Thoughts/light criticism ?January 28, 2021 07:42 PM


starwolfs

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Yeah I seam to be struggling with mouths on everything and this was early on ( I think the first thing I actually did was this piece ) so I wasn't even going to try a mouth at the time. I am working on them now but they still need work for me to be comfortable with them
thanks for your input ^^

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