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01:26:08

😭 Being smart part two- I just asked myself why a wolf can't breed whenever it's a new year. She's already pregnant and about to give birth any time now. Good, because I expect her to die on Monday. If DS doesn't take her, I'll make sure she gets on the boat.

01:22:37

Oi that is lucky Khaos

01:22:29 Do I need one?

Explore strugglin

01:19:40

💀 Dude- I had a jasmine and I just stared at it yesterday and forgot to bury it. Somehow, I still have it.

01:19:04

Good.

01:17:24 Reaper / Grim

Khaos
Obviously

01:16:29

You're sharing, right?

01:16:15 Demon/Death

Does anyone have tips on how to find Harley in the forest. I have it as a bounty but haven't even ran into her.

01:16:03 Reaper / Grim

Soft pretzels :3

01:15:26

You all spoke about the same time 😭 hi!! Thanks Vox.

Pretzels?? What kind? :0

01:14:49

120 default moves is crazy I kinda want that lol

01:14:45 Reaper / Grim

I'm still here, making pretzels :3

01:14:15

I'm still alive just exploring. I hope your moves get fixed eventually :o

01:14:13 tern / gaze

I'm alive, not sure if that's any good though

SammytheRaccoon

01:14:02 Sam/Samuel/Racc

I'm here

01:13:58 The Scary Mod

Barely alive, crawling really

01:10:59

Is anyone else alive right now or did chat die? :(

01:10:08

Sorry, felt weird saying I used to have 85.

01:09:44

Oh, correction. I had 120 default explore moves. I had to look back at the link. -WP Click-

01:08:01

xD Not sure how ya missed it

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01:26:08

😭 Being smart part two- I just asked myself why a wolf can't breed whenever it's a new year. She's already pregnant and about to give birth any time now. Good, because I expect her to die on Monday. If DS doesn't take her, I'll make sure she gets on the boat.

01:22:37

Oi that is lucky Khaos

01:22:29 Do I need one?

Explore strugglin

01:19:40

💀 Dude- I had a jasmine and I just stared at it yesterday and forgot to bury it. Somehow, I still have it.

01:19:04

Good.

01:17:24 Reaper / Grim

Khaos
Obviously

01:16:29

You're sharing, right?

01:16:15 Demon/Death

Does anyone have tips on how to find Harley in the forest. I have it as a bounty but haven't even ran into her.

01:16:03 Reaper / Grim

Soft pretzels :3

01:15:26

You all spoke about the same time 😭 hi!! Thanks Vox.

Pretzels?? What kind? :0

01:14:49

120 default moves is crazy I kinda want that lol

01:14:45 Reaper / Grim

I'm still here, making pretzels :3

01:14:15

I'm still alive just exploring. I hope your moves get fixed eventually :o

01:14:13 tern / gaze

I'm alive, not sure if that's any good though

SammytheRaccoon

01:14:02 Sam/Samuel/Racc

I'm here

01:13:58 The Scary Mod

Barely alive, crawling really

01:10:59

Is anyone else alive right now or did chat die? :(

01:10:08

Sorry, felt weird saying I used to have 85.

01:09:44

Oh, correction. I had 120 default explore moves. I had to look back at the link. -WP Click-

01:08:01

xD Not sure how ya missed it

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July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

Or

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

July 30, 2018 06:33 PM

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Sorry if I sound rude but... I can't see the horse lol! The dogs paws could use some work, but other than that it looks super cute! Great Job!

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