Wolf Play : Critique?

11:29:36 Space Pirate Captain

Emmet

Yeah, unfortunately.

>.>

I hope that's the extent of the eventful... stuff.

11:29:05 Mr Palette Guy

Reaper,
Lmao. Im gonna hit the hay soon
Goodnight man

11:28:51 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Vah
We have ring doorbells and cameras so we got videos/pictures but without anything actually happening the cops left pretty quickly after being called

11:28:44 Space Pirate Captain

Mmmh sleep

11:28:20 Reaper / Grim

sbleeb...shhh

11:27:52 Mr Palette Guy

Reaper,
You probably don't even know how to type out sleep

11:27:18 Reaper / Grim

Spirit
Shhhh, nobody needs to know...

11:26:56 Space Pirate Captain

I didn't even notice the typo--XDD

11:26:50 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Jiggled*
I should probably catch up on sleep before I start misspelling everything

11:26:15

The doorknob was giggled??? Please don't make me laugh in an ER. That's so bad.

11:26:11 Space Pirate Captain

Emmet

That sounds like a bad sort of eventful and I ... was not expecting that.

That's absolutely rough--holy cow.

11:25:28

What's sleep?

11:25:24 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Vah
Someone unsuccessfully tried to break into the house last night (around 1am), I didnt think much of it at first because im used to hearing the neighbors dog barkings but our cameras went off and my sister and her boyfriend got woken up to their doorknob being giggled (they live in a small building not attached to the main house) and the intruder ran off

11:25:11 Mr Palette Guy

Reaper,
More like ✨Doesnt know how to sleep apparently✨

11:24:55

Dude, I want an energy drink and pizza. :c They have some for their staff.

11:24:08 Reaper / Grim

Spirit
✨Insomnia✨

11:23:04

I'm too fucking unserious for this ER. Please send help. LMAO

11:21:05 Mr Palette Guy

Reaper,
Everytime I'm on you're on- even at like 4 am
Why?

11:20:40 Space Pirate Captain

Emmet

Pretty solid. Went to work, did work, a lot of work, came back and it wasn't too bad.

Eventful... sounds fun. Was it at least good eventful?

11:18:38 Reaper / Grim

Spirit
Boo bitch XD

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11:29:36 Space Pirate Captain

Emmet

Yeah, unfortunately.

>.>

I hope that's the extent of the eventful... stuff.

11:29:05 Mr Palette Guy

Reaper,
Lmao. Im gonna hit the hay soon
Goodnight man

11:28:51 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Vah
We have ring doorbells and cameras so we got videos/pictures but without anything actually happening the cops left pretty quickly after being called

11:28:44 Space Pirate Captain

Mmmh sleep

11:28:20 Reaper / Grim

sbleeb...shhh

11:27:52 Mr Palette Guy

Reaper,
You probably don't even know how to type out sleep

11:27:18 Reaper / Grim

Spirit
Shhhh, nobody needs to know...

11:26:56 Space Pirate Captain

I didn't even notice the typo--XDD

11:26:50 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Jiggled*
I should probably catch up on sleep before I start misspelling everything

11:26:15

The doorknob was giggled??? Please don't make me laugh in an ER. That's so bad.

11:26:11 Space Pirate Captain

Emmet

That sounds like a bad sort of eventful and I ... was not expecting that.

That's absolutely rough--holy cow.

11:25:28

What's sleep?

11:25:24 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

11:25:11 Mr Palette Guy

Reaper,
More like ✨Doesnt know how to sleep apparently✨

11:24:55

Dude, I want an energy drink and pizza. :c They have some for their staff.

11:24:08 Reaper / Grim

Spirit
✨Insomnia✨

11:23:04

I'm too fucking unserious for this ER. Please send help. LMAO

11:21:05 Mr Palette Guy

Reaper,
Everytime I'm on you're on- even at like 4 am
Why?

11:20:40 Space Pirate Captain

Emmet

Pretty solid. Went to work, did work, a lot of work, came back and it wasn't too bad.

Eventful... sounds fun. Was it at least good eventful?

11:18:38 Reaper / Grim

Spirit
Boo bitch XD

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July 6, 2018 02:35 AM

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Just trying out some semi-realistic fur practice

Critiques on lighting, blending, etc. are greatly appreciated. If you have suggestions on how to make it look more realistic, that's also greatly appreciated

https://s33.postimg.cc/6dgalc133/Fur_Practice.png

July 7, 2018 05:36 PM

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So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!

Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows

I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a greater realistic look

2. Color

Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!

July 7, 2018 05:51 PM

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Dragon's Fire said:
So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!
Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows
I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a greater realistic look

2. Color
Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!

I agree with both! For fur, I personally think that the most important thing is edge variation. Have very stark contrast as well, as right now, you have a lot of softer edges.

For color, instead of shading with black and white, try changing your hue variation! For wolves with white fur, try blue-tinted gray, cream, anything. For wolves with cream fur, try shading with a reddish-brown. Of course, these are only like two in a billion examples lol

Another thing I think is important with fur is fur direction. Look at real wolves and see how their fur grows in like ten different directions.

These are only my personal observations on drawing fur. I like what you have going so far, you can do it!

July 7, 2018 08:12 PM

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Honestly I have no critique but this is awesome.On a real animal I think the color would be a little more varied though but I under stand you might have not added it because of it being practice.

July 7, 2018 10:18 PM