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Yay!

05:44:27 Snowflake, Queen

gonna take 20 min for food to bake lol so.. im back till then.. kinda

05:42:50

Stay safe!!

05:38:46 Reaper / Grim

:3*

05:38:37 Reaper / Grim

I'll be back, gotta walk home ;3

05:38:31

Ooh, enjoy Snowball!!

05:38:15 Snowflake, Queen

be back soon... dinner time

05:37:53

But my feet...

05:37:39 Snowflake, Queen

let them have their fun

05:37:01

I woke up and five minutes later, my puppy decided to attack my feet. >:(

05:36:21 Snowflake, Queen

awwwww Jack <3

05:35:38

Snowball-
Worse, I was tired. I watched a movie while on call with one of my friends and we both fell asleep. Apparently I "crashed hard" for 40 minutes. </3 Now I'm just sleepy and feeling social with nobody to talk to

Leo

05:35:03 Leo | Bear say rawr

Cat
I live off excuses

05:34:38 Snowflake, Queen

aww were you sad?

05:34:27 Snowflake, Queen

Jack!!!

Catori

05:33:33 Cat

@leo
Nice excuse xD

05:33:12

And my happiness is back, how are you? <3

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Snowball!!

05:32:32 Snowflake, Queen

heyo chat

Whispering Snow

05:31:54 It's me Rain!! :D

Khaos
Oh your right. I mostly focus on having as much dominance as I can while still keeping my wolves in the right order

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05:45:36

Yay!

05:44:27 Snowflake, Queen

gonna take 20 min for food to bake lol so.. im back till then.. kinda

05:42:50

Stay safe!!

05:38:46 Reaper / Grim

:3*

05:38:37 Reaper / Grim

I'll be back, gotta walk home ;3

05:38:31

Ooh, enjoy Snowball!!

05:38:15 Snowflake, Queen

be back soon... dinner time

05:37:53

But my feet...

05:37:39 Snowflake, Queen

let them have their fun

05:37:01

I woke up and five minutes later, my puppy decided to attack my feet. >:(

05:36:21 Snowflake, Queen

awwwww Jack <3

05:35:38

Leo

05:35:03 Leo | Bear say rawr

Cat
I live off excuses

05:34:38 Snowflake, Queen

aww were you sad?

05:34:27 Snowflake, Queen

Jack!!!

Catori

05:33:33 Cat

@leo
Nice excuse xD

05:33:12

And my happiness is back, how are you? <3

05:32:57

Snowball!!

05:32:32 Snowflake, Queen

heyo chat

Whispering Snow

05:31:54 It's me Rain!! :D

Khaos
Oh your right. I mostly focus on having as much dominance as I can while still keeping my wolves in the right order

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Forums > Artwork > Art Help

April 16, 2018 09:07 PM

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Here's the image

https://s14.postimg.cc/4h7dmgk29/Random_Galaxy.png

For some reason, something's been really bothering me about this picture and I can't seem to figure out what.

All critiques are appreciated, or just tell me what you wish was changed

Edited at April 16, 2018 09:43 PM by Embers.

April 16, 2018 09:12 PM

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Maybe more stars? We don't really see them

Except for that, I don't see what could be wrong ^^

April 16, 2018 09:37 PM

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DarkCloudClan said:
Maybe more stars? We don't really see them
Except for that, I don't see what could be wrong ^^

Alright, lemme spam the stars and update the picture XD

Edit: UPDATED

Edited at April 16, 2018 09:43 PM by Embers.

April 16, 2018 11:31 PM

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Honestly, I really like it XD Maybe you need some subtle hue shifts in there? For example, since this art seems to be getting warmer the lighter it is, you should make the highlights a bit more red where the purple is brightest, if that makes any sense?

Or maybe it's because of the front? If you look at it some more, it seems to be more like a cloud in front than part of the galaxy because the stars are brighter around the purple. So maybe you can try to make the stars brighter there? I like it a lot (:

April 16, 2018 11:53 PM

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a m b e r said:
Honestly, I really like it XD Maybe you need some subtle hue shifts in there? For example, since this art seems to be getting warmer the lighter it is, you should make the highlights a bit more red where the purple is brightest, if that makes any sense?

Or maybe it's because of the front? If you look at it some more, it seems to be more like a cloud in front than part of the galaxy because the stars are brighter around the purple. So maybe you can try to make the stars brighter there? I like it a lot (:

XD Thanks, let me update it again