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Why is my Affinity only 58? They all like each other.

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My wolves heal so much faster now that my dom is staggered and happiness is at 80 lol

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Ahh ok, think I'll just retire her then

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Terebinth Wolves

05:24:47 Terebinth or Tere

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Come ask my ocs questions!

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Dominance.

Whispering Snow

05:18:30 It's me Rain!! :D

Why is my Affinity only 58? They all like each other.

Desire of The Hills

05:16:41 Hills / Desire

My wolves heal so much faster now that my dom is staggered and happiness is at 80 lol

05:15:28 Boe is a bear, Rawr!

Celestial prosperity is underrated really
The extra health is overlooked too much e.e

05:13:45 Cat

Luck and health

Desire of The Hills

05:13:05 Hills / Desire

@Snow

Ahh ok, think I'll just retire her then

05:12:35 St. Algo's Pack/Mal

What do hell hound hearts do and what are they worth?

Whispering Snow

05:12:29 It's me Rain!! :D

Hill
Luck i think

Desire of The Hills

05:11:14 Hills / Desire

-WP Click-

Just got her from Wolf Party, Anyone know what Celestial Prosperity does?

05:10:27 Cae, Blue

gonna test my luck and leave 8 girls at 82h while having space for jut 4 litters :') good night ~

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Hey

05:06:59 Reaper / Grim

Daze
What did I miss-?

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Kryuk,

cough

05:02:25 Reaper / Grim

I'm*

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Aight aim board, come ask me questions
-WP Click-

04:56:32 Boe is a bear, Rawr!

Night ky :D

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g'night chat :))

Whispering Snow

04:53:49 It's me Rain!! :D

I remember Cypress was like everyone grandmother

04:53:27 ET

Now that I've finished spamming Polar, I also have an ask me thread :]
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Critique this soon to be reference sheet!

April 8, 2018 11:06 PM

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Heyo, so I need some critique on this ref sheet, I’ll be transferring it to a digital one soon. Please give some helpful hints, it’s greatl appreciated! Thanks!

https://image.ibb.co/f23q2H/03_C94_DF5_C542_427_A_A5_F3_164893_C2_C50_B.jpg

Edited at April 8, 2018 11:07 PM by Deja Vu

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April 8, 2018 11:10 PM

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Don't most reference sheets have tongue color? If not, sorry :L

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April 8, 2018 11:11 PM

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Enigma~Of~Fate said:
Don't most reference sheets have tongue color? If not, sorry :L

They do! Thanks, Ill add a mouth section

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April 8, 2018 11:11 PM

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Deja Vu said:

Enigma~Of~Fate said:
Don't most reference sheets have tongue color? If not, sorry :L

They do! Thanks, I’ll add a mouth section

No problem :)

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April 8, 2018 11:13 PM

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not trying to nitpick or anything; but the eyes do seem a bit small and the ears a bit wide.

besides that; i like it

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April 8, 2018 11:14 PM

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hell above said:
not trying to nitpick or anything; but the eyes do seem a bit small and the ears a bit wide.
besides that; i like it

Thanks ! Ill change that ^^

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April 8, 2018 11:14 PM

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you could add to the side the colors that you used.

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April 8, 2018 11:21 PM

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Lunar Moon said:
you could add to the side the colors that you used.

Thanks!

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April 8, 2018 11:33 PM

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The back legs bend a bit weird, but that's the only thing that really stands out to me. :)

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April 9, 2018 12:52 AM

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Deer said:
The back legs bend a bit weird, but that's the only thing that really stands out to me. :)

Oof, I see that now. Thanks!

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