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12:33:34

😭 Maybe?? I'm soaking my finger now. Your teeth look like they would make a satisfying crunchy sound. I'm sorry 🤣😭

12:33:03 Amy/Anpmygdala

Cae
The question is...ho do ypu get rid of it e.e

12:32:38 Cae, Blue

amy, no for real!

12:32:29 Mr Palette Guy

Khaos,
you got issues that need to be unpacked ;-;

12:32:13 Mr Palette Guy

Mirko, oh thanks! :D I'm not at all close to being done, making a creepy cute palette for Bjake?..

12:31:52 Amy/Anpmygdala

Cayou have 8 gen curse it seems

12:31:35

I don't know. Your teeth just look crunchable 😭

12:31:32 Mir

Khaos
Not doing too bad, just cold. How are you?

Spirit
That's a cute palette

12:31:20 Cae, Blue

i swear, its always 8th gens >:(

12:30:59 Cae, Blue

-WP Click-
oop-

12:30:57 Mr Palette Guy

Khaos,
Lmao what? why does your mind immediately think "cruuunch"

12:30:51

I feel like that could have been typed better-

12:30:10

Why do your teeth look crunchy?

12:29:31 Cae, Blue

so buying premium today doesnt give me extra cp for today? thats disappointing

12:29:21 Mr Palette Guy

oop I just made the bottom of the palette teeth

12:29:04

Thank you, while this water heats up. How is everyone today? ^^

12:26:20 Mir

Cae
No problemo, I didn't english that right lol

Khaos
Any tape should work

12:25:38

Scotch tape is fine, right? 😅

12:25:01

Let me go grab my needles. My great-grandma makes sure I'm never without by buying them and forgetting so buying more later 🤣😅

12:24:51 Cae, Blue

ohhh, i didnt realize soak was part of both push and tape scenario ^^" thanks for clarifying

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12:33:34

😭 Maybe?? I'm soaking my finger now. Your teeth look like they would make a satisfying crunchy sound. I'm sorry 🤣😭

12:33:03 Amy/Anpmygdala

Cae
The question is...ho do ypu get rid of it e.e

12:32:38 Cae, Blue

amy, no for real!

12:32:29 Mr Palette Guy

Khaos,
you got issues that need to be unpacked ;-;

12:32:13 Mr Palette Guy

Mirko, oh thanks! :D I'm not at all close to being done, making a creepy cute palette for Bjake?..

12:31:52 Amy/Anpmygdala

Cayou have 8 gen curse it seems

12:31:35

I don't know. Your teeth just look crunchable 😭

12:31:32 Mir

Khaos
Not doing too bad, just cold. How are you?

Spirit
That's a cute palette

12:31:20 Cae, Blue

i swear, its always 8th gens >:(

12:30:59 Cae, Blue

-WP Click-
oop-

12:30:57 Mr Palette Guy

Khaos,
Lmao what? why does your mind immediately think "cruuunch"

12:30:51

I feel like that could have been typed better-

12:30:10

Why do your teeth look crunchy?

12:29:31 Cae, Blue

so buying premium today doesnt give me extra cp for today? thats disappointing

12:29:21 Mr Palette Guy

oop I just made the bottom of the palette teeth

12:29:04

Thank you, while this water heats up. How is everyone today? ^^

12:26:20 Mir

Cae
No problemo, I didn't english that right lol

Khaos
Any tape should work

12:25:38

Scotch tape is fine, right? 😅

12:25:01

Let me go grab my needles. My great-grandma makes sure I'm never without by buying them and forgetting so buying more later 🤣😅

12:24:51 Cae, Blue

ohhh, i didnt realize soak was part of both push and tape scenario ^^" thanks for clarifying

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November 9, 2017 10:25 PM

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https://s2.postimg.org/cm6tysat5/Screen_Shot_2017-11-09_at_11.21.15_PM.png

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Edited at November 9, 2017 10:28 PM by Aphmau clan

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November 9, 2017 10:28 PM

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Not bad (\^-^/)

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November 9, 2017 10:29 PM

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It's not really that bad in all honesty.

The tail and maybe the front leg on the side we're viewing could use a little work maybe, though the tail could actually depend on the breed of cat the drawing is of.

But overall it's pretty good

Edited at November 9, 2017 10:30 PM by Destinations End

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November 10, 2017 01:28 AM

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The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:

https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:

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January 1, 2018 09:11 PM

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Siarczek said:
The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:
https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:

This helps me out! Thank you

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January 3, 2018 03:49 AM

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Aww so cool!

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