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 Zeraphia
11:07:55 Space Pirate Captain
Grim

Literally vibrating because holy catfish that is gorgeous--
 Skilow
11:07:47 Skil, Slick Cow
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Not sure if you know MMC but have you seen her new breed?
 Serpents
11:07:43 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
I'm off got to get ready for bed
 The Reaper
11:06:31 Reaper / Grim
Thoughts?
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11:04:56 
Back from arting
I've got Californians and new Zealand Rabbits
 Skilow
11:01:28 Skil, Slick Cow
Myth
I gave my Flemish and BEW mini Rex program to a friend. Blue Flemish o.o very pretty rabbits
 Skilow
11:00:17 Skil, Slick Cow
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My mini Rex that I am very proud of and debating on selling XD transported his parents from Canada
 Kháos
11:00:13 
Exactly why I'm going to sleep right now... logged on to check mail, looked at chat briefly and swear I read "Fetish rabbits"... it said "Flemish giants". Goodnight chat :,)
 Serpents
10:56:42 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
just inplulse baught a bullfinch from the event shop
 Serpents
10:56:09 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
@Skil any XD I just want all and more of every bird decor wp has I swear I don't have a problem
 Mythology
10:55:30 
Flemish Giants are my favorite breed of rabbit
 Forest whisp
10:55:02 She /her/ daughter/
Hay
 Skilow
10:53:19 Skil, Slick Cow
Zane
What kind of birds?
 Skilow
10:53:03 Skil, Slick Cow
I'm actually getting some red eyed white flemishes this weekend. Super excited because they are hard to find. Also super excited I got Belgian hares as they are also hard to find.
 Skilow
10:51:30 Skil, Slick Cow
In my early days of rabbit breeding we had these Janky hutches that the rabbits would get out of all the time. One was in my yard but someone still decided to come in the yard and try to take it. Didn't even knock on the door or anything. Thank God, the neighbors were on the porch and told the girl that rabbit wasn't hers and that they would take it and bring it back to me. Like I would understand if the rabbit was out by the road or something. But she had to walk a good 10 yards into my backyard to grab it. Girl at least knock and tell me my baby is loose XD
 Serpents
10:50:57 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
I need to get more birds
 Skilow
10:48:14 Skil, Slick Cow
Myth
Also bought holland lops from a girl that keeps her rabbits in absolutely gross condition and they had some weird liver thing going on for a few days. Couldn't walk or hold their heads up. I'm assuming they consumed so much of their own poop it made their liver release toxins. They were still super eager to eat and drink so they are better now. It just made their muscles really weak for a bit. I'm happy that same girl sold me the last of her rabbits because she doesn't wanna do rabbits anymore.
 Mythology
10:47:32 
Ski

it was sad when they passed , the one that survived was later stolen which was just as sad as she was pregnant and I was excited for her babies
 Skilow
10:45:31 Skil, Slick Cow
Myth
I thankfully haven't had to deal with that. I Did have a coccidiosis outbreak last year and had to force feed like 20 rabbits.
 The Reaper
10:45:02 Reaper / Grim
Myth
XD

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 Zeraphia
11:07:55 Space Pirate Captain
Grim

Literally vibrating because holy catfish that is gorgeous--
 Skilow
11:07:47 Skil, Slick Cow
Chat
Not sure if you know MMC but have you seen her new breed?
 Serpents
11:07:43 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
I'm off got to get ready for bed
 The Reaper
11:06:31 Reaper / Grim
Thoughts?
-Click-
 Chat
11:04:56 
Back from arting
I've got Californians and new Zealand Rabbits
 Skilow
11:01:28 Skil, Slick Cow
Myth
I gave my Flemish and BEW mini Rex program to a friend. Blue Flemish o.o very pretty rabbits
 Skilow
11:00:17 Skil, Slick Cow
-Click-
My mini Rex that I am very proud of and debating on selling XD transported his parents from Canada
 Kháos
11:00:13 
Exactly why I'm going to sleep right now... logged on to check mail, looked at chat briefly and swear I read "Fetish rabbits"... it said "Flemish giants". Goodnight chat :,)
 Serpents
10:56:42 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
just inplulse baught a bullfinch from the event shop
 Serpents
10:56:09 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
@Skil any XD I just want all and more of every bird decor wp has I swear I don't have a problem
 Mythology
10:55:30 
Flemish Giants are my favorite breed of rabbit
 Forest whisp
10:55:02 She /her/ daughter/
Hay
 Skilow
10:53:19 Skil, Slick Cow
Zane
What kind of birds?
 Skilow
10:53:03 Skil, Slick Cow
I'm actually getting some red eyed white flemishes this weekend. Super excited because they are hard to find. Also super excited I got Belgian hares as they are also hard to find.
 Skilow
10:51:30 Skil, Slick Cow
In my early days of rabbit breeding we had these Janky hutches that the rabbits would get out of all the time. One was in my yard but someone still decided to come in the yard and try to take it. Didn't even knock on the door or anything. Thank God, the neighbors were on the porch and told the girl that rabbit wasn't hers and that they would take it and bring it back to me. Like I would understand if the rabbit was out by the road or something. But she had to walk a good 10 yards into my backyard to grab it. Girl at least knock and tell me my baby is loose XD
 Serpents
10:50:57 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
I need to get more birds
 Skilow
10:48:14 Skil, Slick Cow
Myth
Also bought holland lops from a girl that keeps her rabbits in absolutely gross condition and they had some weird liver thing going on for a few days. Couldn't walk or hold their heads up. I'm assuming they consumed so much of their own poop it made their liver release toxins. They were still super eager to eat and drink so they are better now. It just made their muscles really weak for a bit. I'm happy that same girl sold me the last of her rabbits because she doesn't wanna do rabbits anymore.
 Mythology
10:47:32 
Ski

it was sad when they passed , the one that survived was later stolen which was just as sad as she was pregnant and I was excited for her babies
 Skilow
10:45:31 Skil, Slick Cow
Myth
I thankfully haven't had to deal with that. I Did have a coccidiosis outbreak last year and had to force feed like 20 rabbits.
 The Reaper
10:45:02 Reaper / Grim
Myth
XD




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Critique?July 30, 2018 05:59 AM


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I was just messing around and I made this:
https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png
And this:
https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png
If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background
I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie
Critique?July 30, 2018 02:36 PM


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Horse
I can't see it
But the D ring for your bit is way too big
And the rest of the bridle is way to small
Critique?July 30, 2018 02:46 PM


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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.
https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

Or
https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png
(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:
Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:
https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.
There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°
Critique?July 30, 2018 03:58 PM


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Thanks Astro and Midnight!
The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black
I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.
I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD
Critique?July 30, 2018 06:33 PM


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Sorry if I sound rude but... I can't see the horse lol! The dogs paws could use some work, but other than that it looks super cute! Great Job!

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