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Does anyone know if animals have a level cap on map levels that they can appear?
I have been searching for a green stag for days.
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IK ;D
 Eternity
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Oh my god, Sigma 😭
 Forest whisp
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I was in the play sleeping beauty today
:( :'(
IDK if I liked it or not
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Just said geez louise in front of my grandma while I went to fetch a jacket (dog was jumping at me so I could harness her up for the car) and my grandma laughed at me :'(
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not broken, but it did give me a jumpscare when my entire message looked like an ancient evil chant ToT
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don't look in the sales chat then... ^^"
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Venn,
If you ever do make more palettes I'll probably be the first one at your forum haha
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The broken emojis are killing me
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Still cant think of a theme for a new palette, so i guess you cma ha e the reins for now. 😅
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Dad

By the way, I like your palette ; )
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Lol. Ok.
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Venn,
Ahah, I knew a palette artists gut would pick the easiest palette for me to do.
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Venn, pick one :0
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 The Veil
01:09:41 
Does anyone know if animals have a level cap on map levels that they can appear?
I have been searching for a green stag for days.
 Forest whisp
12:58:34 She /her/ daughter/
IK ;D
 Eternity
12:57:12 ET
Oh my god, Sigma 😭
 Forest whisp
12:56:49 She /her/ daughter/
I was in the play sleeping beauty today
:( :'(
IDK if I liked it or not
 Snowichaibunni
12:46:59 Bunni
Just said geez louise in front of my grandma while I went to fetch a jacket (dog was jumping at me so I could harness her up for the car) and my grandma laughed at me :'(
 Forest whisp
12:41:46 She /her/ daughter/
Paws???
 The Sigma
12:38:25 Leo | Leon | Sigma
Venn

not broken, but it did give me a jumpscare when my entire message looked like an ancient evil chant ToT
 Vennenum
12:36:50 Venn/Venne
Sig - so long as you don't break the chat.
 The Sigma
12:36:04 Leo | Leon | Sigma
Venn

don't look in the sales chat then... ^^"
 SammytheRaccoon
12:35:18 Sam/Samuel/Racc
blehh
 SpiritGuardian
12:30:28 Mr Palette Guy
Venn,
If you ever do make more palettes I'll probably be the first one at your forum haha
 Vennenum
12:29:44 Venn/Venne
The broken emojis are killing me
 Vennenum
12:28:38 Venn/Venne
Still cant think of a theme for a new palette, so i guess you cma ha e the reins for now. 😅
 Spirit Wolves
12:26:00 Spirit (Her/She)
Dad

By the way, I like your palette ; )
 Vennenum
12:24:58 Venn/Venne
Lol. Ok.
 SpiritGuardian
12:24:15 Mr Palette Guy
Venn,
Ahah, I knew a palette artists gut would pick the easiest palette for me to do.
 Vennenum
12:23:35 Venn/Venne
3
 SpiritGuardian
12:22:47 Mr Palette Guy
Venn, pick one :0
 VioletEcho
12:22:44 Is a dinosaur rawr
2
 Zeraphia
12:22:38 Space Pirate Captain
I go to sleep now. Because I am... losing my mind. Lol




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Help me/CritiqueJune 28, 2018 04:27 PM


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Something isn't settling well with me and this image... Could you guys help?

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Help me/CritiqueJune 29, 2018 08:42 PM


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You did a very good job, but I can see a few things that could be touched up on.

The cat's chest is facing us, but the entirety of it's side is visible. It's back wouldn't be able to twist like this so we should either see only part of the chest, or part of the side and back.

If you chose to keep the back instead of the front-facing chest, I would add a little more exaggeration to the back and maybe lose, or change, some of the fur detail. With cats, the elegant curve of the back is very noticeable.

If you decided to keep the front-facing chest, the back and hind legs would be behind it, though the curve would still be visible, of course.

The legs themselves are a little lumpy, compared to the graceful lines a cat has. The heels should be lower, and at a less extreme angle, while the knees would have a slightly shallower curve that blends gracefully into the body. The hindquarters could be rounder, and shorter to show where the hip bones are.

I've never been great with front-facing legs, but cats have slightly thicker, short forearms, usually. There might not be as deep a dip from shoulder to neck, and the most noticeable joint from the front of the leg would be the wrist curving slightly sloping outwards, thickening before becoming the paw.

The ears could be less rounded, though of course it depends on the breed or OC you were drawing. Cat ears are most often triangular, and I would set them a little higher up on the head while lengthening the cheeks. Cats have slightly round heads.

I would make the tail tuft thick and blend it into the tail more, rather than a separate piece of fur, but that one is more a personal preference.

I would love to draw little bits to visually represent my advice, but my tablet's too scratched up to pick up my pen, apparently. '-_- If I get it working again soon, I'll add some pics.

Edited at June 29, 2018 08:43 PM by The Watch

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