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12:56:49 She /her/ daughter/

I was in the play sleeping beauty today
:( :'(
IDK if I liked it or not

Snowichaibunni

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Just said geez louise in front of my grandma while I went to fetch a jacket (dog was jumping at me so I could harness her up for the car) and my grandma laughed at me :'(

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Paws???

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Venn

not broken, but it did give me a jumpscare when my entire message looked like an ancient evil chant ToT

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Sig - so long as you don't break the chat.

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Venn

don't look in the sales chat then... ^^"

SammytheRaccoon

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blehh

12:30:28 Mr Palette Guy

Venn,
If you ever do make more palettes I'll probably be the first one at your forum haha

12:29:44 Venn/Venne

The broken emojis are killing me

12:28:38 Venn/Venne

Still cant think of a theme for a new palette, so i guess you cma ha e the reins for now. ð

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Dad

By the way, I like your palette ; )

12:24:58 Venn/Venne

Lol. Ok.

12:24:15 Mr Palette Guy

Venn,
Ahah, I knew a palette artists gut would pick the easiest palette for me to do.

12:23:35 Venn/Venne

12:22:47 Mr Palette Guy

Venn, pick one :0

VioletEcho

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I go to sleep now. Because I am... losing my mind. Lol

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12:58:34 She /her/ daughter/

IK ;D

Eternity

12:57:12 ET

Oh my god, Sigma 😭

12:56:49 She /her/ daughter/

I was in the play sleeping beauty today
:( :'(
IDK if I liked it or not

Snowichaibunni

12:46:59 Bunni

Just said geez louise in front of my grandma while I went to fetch a jacket (dog was jumping at me so I could harness her up for the car) and my grandma laughed at me :'(

12:41:46 She /her/ daughter/

Paws???

12:38:25 Leo | Leon | Sigma

Venn

not broken, but it did give me a jumpscare when my entire message looked like an ancient evil chant ToT

12:36:50 Venn/Venne

Sig - so long as you don't break the chat.

12:36:04 Leo | Leon | Sigma

Venn

don't look in the sales chat then... ^^"

SammytheRaccoon

12:35:18 Sam/Samuel/Racc

blehh

12:30:28 Mr Palette Guy

Venn,
If you ever do make more palettes I'll probably be the first one at your forum haha

12:29:44 Venn/Venne

The broken emojis are killing me

12:28:38 Venn/Venne

Still cant think of a theme for a new palette, so i guess you cma ha e the reins for now. ð

Spirit Wolves

12:26:00 Spirit (Her/She)

Dad

By the way, I like your palette ; )

12:24:58 Venn/Venne

Lol. Ok.

12:24:15 Mr Palette Guy

Venn,
Ahah, I knew a palette artists gut would pick the easiest palette for me to do.

12:23:35 Venn/Venne

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Venn, pick one :0

VioletEcho

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June 17, 2018 01:25 PM

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Heya, I was hoping for some critique on this!
https://image.ibb.co/my78pd/04_B80_E15_8317_4_AFD_A3_CC_39_B9_AB3_ACB6_C.png

June 17, 2018 01:30 PM

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It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

June 17, 2018 01:31 PM

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ThunderousSymphonies said:
It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

Thanks! I'm fixing now!

June 17, 2018 01:39 PM

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https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

June 17, 2018 01:54 PM

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It is gorgeous, but to make it more eye catching, I would recommend more shadow and more light.

The shading is very dull, but that can be easily fixed!!!

Other than that, it is a stunning piece of artwork!

June 21, 2018 05:37 PM

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I would make the eyes larger and with a slightly more defined shape, along with the nose, and make the muzzle and ears a little sharper and the chin a little bigger.

https://image.ibb.co/nq4oVT/advice.png

https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

By the way, I love your colouring! I can't colour for anything!

June 22, 2018 11:30 PM