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01:11:26 Mr Palette Guy

My eyes feel like they're melting.
Im so fucking tired but I have to finish stuff

The Veil

01:09:41

Does anyone know if animals have a level cap on map levels that they can appear?
I have been searching for a green stag for days.

12:58:34 She /her/ daughter/

IK ;D

Eternity

12:57:12 ET

Oh my god, Sigma 😭

12:56:49 She /her/ daughter/

I was in the play sleeping beauty today
:( :'(
IDK if I liked it or not

Snowichaibunni

12:46:59 Bunni

Just said geez louise in front of my grandma while I went to fetch a jacket (dog was jumping at me so I could harness her up for the car) and my grandma laughed at me :'(

12:41:46 She /her/ daughter/

Paws???

12:38:25 Leo | Leon | Sigma

Venn

not broken, but it did give me a jumpscare when my entire message looked like an ancient evil chant ToT

12:36:50 Venn/Venne

Sig - so long as you don't break the chat.

12:36:04 Leo | Leon | Sigma

Venn

don't look in the sales chat then... ^^"

SammytheRaccoon

12:35:18 Sam/Samuel/Racc

blehh

12:30:28 Mr Palette Guy

Venn,
If you ever do make more palettes I'll probably be the first one at your forum haha

12:29:44 Venn/Venne

The broken emojis are killing me

12:28:38 Venn/Venne

Still cant think of a theme for a new palette, so i guess you cma ha e the reins for now. ð

Spirit Wolves

12:26:00 Spirit (Her/She)

Dad

By the way, I like your palette ; )

12:24:58 Venn/Venne

Lol. Ok.

12:24:15 Mr Palette Guy

Venn,
Ahah, I knew a palette artists gut would pick the easiest palette for me to do.

12:23:35 Venn/Venne

12:22:47 Mr Palette Guy

Venn, pick one :0

VioletEcho

12:22:44 Is a dinosaur rawr

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01:11:26 Mr Palette Guy

My eyes feel like they're melting.
Im so fucking tired but I have to finish stuff

The Veil

01:09:41

Does anyone know if animals have a level cap on map levels that they can appear?
I have been searching for a green stag for days.

12:58:34 She /her/ daughter/

IK ;D

Eternity

12:57:12 ET

Oh my god, Sigma 😭

12:56:49 She /her/ daughter/

I was in the play sleeping beauty today
:( :'(
IDK if I liked it or not

Snowichaibunni

12:46:59 Bunni

Just said geez louise in front of my grandma while I went to fetch a jacket (dog was jumping at me so I could harness her up for the car) and my grandma laughed at me :'(

12:41:46 She /her/ daughter/

Paws???

12:38:25 Leo | Leon | Sigma

Venn

not broken, but it did give me a jumpscare when my entire message looked like an ancient evil chant ToT

12:36:50 Venn/Venne

Sig - so long as you don't break the chat.

12:36:04 Leo | Leon | Sigma

Venn

don't look in the sales chat then... ^^"

SammytheRaccoon

12:35:18 Sam/Samuel/Racc

blehh

12:30:28 Mr Palette Guy

Venn,
If you ever do make more palettes I'll probably be the first one at your forum haha

12:29:44 Venn/Venne

The broken emojis are killing me

12:28:38 Venn/Venne

Still cant think of a theme for a new palette, so i guess you cma ha e the reins for now. ð

Spirit Wolves

12:26:00 Spirit (Her/She)

Dad

By the way, I like your palette ; )

12:24:58 Venn/Venne

Lol. Ok.

12:24:15 Mr Palette Guy

Venn,
Ahah, I knew a palette artists gut would pick the easiest palette for me to do.

12:23:35 Venn/Venne

12:22:47 Mr Palette Guy

Venn, pick one :0

VioletEcho

12:22:44 Is a dinosaur rawr

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May 15, 2018 02:12 PM

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https://s9.postimg.cc/u0o0j78j3/Untitled412.png

Any improvements I can make? :/

Edited at May 15, 2018 02:13 PM by Cún.

May 16, 2018 12:44 AM

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The tail and back leg are extremely strange and I can't quite figure out what's going on there. XD

Also, instead of two sitting poses, I'd add one that clearly shows a side view.

Edited at May 16, 2018 12:45 AM by Lykotia

May 16, 2018 01:57 AM

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Lykotia said:
The tail and back leg are extremely strange and I can't quite figure out what's going on there. XD

Also, instead of two sitting poses, I'd add one that clearly shows a side view.

I haven't a clue what I did either. It's so cringy for other players to notice :')

Thanks for the help. :D

May 20, 2018 12:26 PM

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Um... maybe make the lower jaw line up a bit more with the upper jaw. Otherwise it kinda looks like an overbite. Hope that helps a bit.

May 20, 2018 12:27 PM

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Hunters said:
Um... maybe make the lower jaw line up a bit more with the upper jaw. Otherwise it kinda looks like an overbite. Hope that helps a bit.

Thanks, anything is helpful x'D

May 20, 2018 08:40 PM

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I think it looks really good, but the head looks a tad big for the body, and didnt quite flow well into it. Other than that, awesome job!

May 21, 2018 01:52 AM

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Cutting Edge said:
I think it looks really good, but the head looks a tad big for the body, and didn't quite flow well into it. Other than that, awesome job!

>.< Thanks!

May 21, 2018 02:28 AM

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The back legs are a bit too stretched out to be a natural position, and it looks like the tail is coming off of the back leg. A line there to separate the tail from the leg would help it look less off. ^^

Edited at May 21, 2018 02:29 AM by Evee4ever228

May 21, 2018 09:53 AM