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 The Reaper
05:53:10 Reaper / Grim
I'm back
 Zeraphia
05:50:44 Space Pirate Captain
I forgot how much I am absolute *garbage* at prophecies.
 Zeraphia
05:47:56 Space Pirate Captain
Urux

One imma whip up. As... soon as I figure out the prophecy/plot.
 Urux
05:47:41 Urox, Uris
Nobachey
The wings look cool!
 Urux
05:47:16 Urox, Uris
Vah
Oo okay, one you're going to whip up or have you spotted one you like?
 Zeraphia
05:46:35 Space Pirate Captain
Urux

I'm thinking it might end up as a group rp. :3
 Urux
05:45:05 Urox, Uris
Vah
Oh! I see. Do I smell an Urux + Vah 2.0 on the horizon xD
I saw him in your art dump, he's so cool!
 Nobachey
05:44:18 Call me anything
I'm happy with this gear :)
-WP Click-
 Zeraphia
05:43:45 Space Pirate Captain
Urux

Oooh that's fun.

I'm trying to figure out a good solid rp that I can fit him; -Click- into. Mythology, 1960s and now I'm looking for a prophecy. Or the beginnings of one.
 Lackadaisy
05:40:18 Stray, LT | H/H
I can help write it once I regain my hand lol
 Urux
05:40:11 Urox, Uris
Vah
It was alright, I was 100% the youngest in there lol
I see you and Stray are figuring something out, I feel bewildered lol

On that note, hi Stray ^^
 Zeraphia
05:39:29 Space Pirate Captain
Stray

You're totally good.

This is going to be so fun. I just need a prophecy that makes somewhat sense.
 Lackadaisy
05:38:16 Stray, LT | H/H
Sorry, typing one handed is hard
 Lackadaisy
05:37:49 Stray, LT | H/H
Oooo
 Zeraphia
05:37:27 Space Pirate Captain
...
I need a prophecy. That's what I need.
 Zeraphia
05:34:11 Space Pirate Captain
Stray

I do enjoy the sixties, I can't lie--
 Zeraphia
05:33:57 Space Pirate Captain
Urux

Oooh that sounds like fun! I'm sore but doing pretty solid!

I hope the pub was fun?
 Lackadaisy
05:33:57 Stray, LT | H/H
Vah,

Could do 60s?
 Urux
05:33:09 Urox, Uris
Vah
I'm good ^^ just got back from the pub. I'll stay up a bit longer but I will definitely fall asleep withint 2 hours lol. I have an electric vlanket tonight >:)
How're you?
 Zeraphia
05:32:29 Space Pirate Captain
Urux! How are you?

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 The Reaper
05:53:10 Reaper / Grim
I'm back
 Zeraphia
05:50:44 Space Pirate Captain
I forgot how much I am absolute *garbage* at prophecies.
 Zeraphia
05:47:56 Space Pirate Captain
Urux

One imma whip up. As... soon as I figure out the prophecy/plot.
 Urux
05:47:41 Urox, Uris
Nobachey
The wings look cool!
 Urux
05:47:16 Urox, Uris
Vah
Oo okay, one you're going to whip up or have you spotted one you like?
 Zeraphia
05:46:35 Space Pirate Captain
Urux

I'm thinking it might end up as a group rp. :3
 Urux
05:45:05 Urox, Uris
Vah
Oh! I see. Do I smell an Urux + Vah 2.0 on the horizon xD
I saw him in your art dump, he's so cool!
 Nobachey
05:44:18 Call me anything
I'm happy with this gear :)
-WP Click-
 Zeraphia
05:43:45 Space Pirate Captain
Urux

Oooh that's fun.

I'm trying to figure out a good solid rp that I can fit him; -Click- into. Mythology, 1960s and now I'm looking for a prophecy. Or the beginnings of one.
 Lackadaisy
05:40:18 Stray, LT | H/H
I can help write it once I regain my hand lol
 Urux
05:40:11 Urox, Uris
Vah
It was alright, I was 100% the youngest in there lol
I see you and Stray are figuring something out, I feel bewildered lol

On that note, hi Stray ^^
 Zeraphia
05:39:29 Space Pirate Captain
Stray

You're totally good.

This is going to be so fun. I just need a prophecy that makes somewhat sense.
 Lackadaisy
05:38:16 Stray, LT | H/H
Sorry, typing one handed is hard
 Lackadaisy
05:37:49 Stray, LT | H/H
Oooo
 Zeraphia
05:37:27 Space Pirate Captain
...
I need a prophecy. That's what I need.
 Zeraphia
05:34:11 Space Pirate Captain
Stray

I do enjoy the sixties, I can't lie--
 Zeraphia
05:33:57 Space Pirate Captain
Urux

Oooh that sounds like fun! I'm sore but doing pretty solid!

I hope the pub was fun?
 Lackadaisy
05:33:57 Stray, LT | H/H
Vah,

Could do 60s?
 Urux
05:33:09 Urox, Uris
Vah
I'm good ^^ just got back from the pub. I'll stay up a bit longer but I will definitely fall asleep withint 2 hours lol. I have an electric vlanket tonight >:)
How're you?
 Zeraphia
05:32:29 Space Pirate Captain
Urux! How are you?




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Criticism?January 3, 2018 11:40 PM


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http://preview.ibb.co/gavXBb/image.jpg

I need a little help editing this guy. This is my first hyena drawing~

I'm decent with anatomy, and I've studied up on most things about hyenas, but I haven't got my hands on anything about their faces at the moment. So I'm looking for criticism on the facial structure, how it looks, etc. since I'm not sure on it yet, especially the mouth, jawline, and ears. The flower crown could be commented on as well, although I like it the way it is. It's probably sucky as well >>

So comment any judging below. Keep in mind that there's a border between constructive criticism and being rude, but don't worry, I don't often take offense personally~

Edited at January 3, 2018 11:41 PM by Taboo
Criticism?January 4, 2018 12:21 AM


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I personally think it could use a bit more shading on the sides of the nose.
Criticism?January 29, 2018 07:06 PM


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I'm not sure about the jawline, ears, and fur texture... all seem slightly abnormal. But overall, it's nice. :3
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:16 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/8po2knqfz/6_EC7223_B-3695-479_C-9903-764_DCDCBF117.jpg?dl=1

I think the only thing throwing me off is the nose. It could use more shading, and be more 3-dimensional. I sketched a little example on my iPad for you.

I agree with Seaward about the mouth/jaw being a bit weird, but not overly.

I think it looks awesome.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:18 PM by Deer
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:41 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/58m0hfjld/AF6002_C1-6436-43_C1-_AF8_D-99_E26_C324792.jpg
Here I was just scrolling through google images of hyenas and jotting down/sketching my observations. Hope this helps. :)

I know nothing about hyenas, this is simply what I noticed while scrolling through images.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:44 PM by Deer

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