Need some criticism
https://xxwolfdawgxx.deviantart.com/art/A-commission-720774114
I used sketch.io and DA.Muro (blending)
Summer Month: 1 
Night 
Clear Moon: 
| Chatbox |
| The Reaper |
| Some days I sit here and wonder if anyone smiles when I come in chat lol |
| Zeraphia |
| Urux One imma whip up. As... soon as I figure out the prophecy/plot. |
| Urux |
| Vah Oh! I see. Do I smell an Urux + Vah 2.0 on the horizon xD I saw him in your art dump, he's so cool! |
| Zeraphia |
| Urux Oooh that's fun. I'm trying to figure out a good solid rp that I can fit him; -Click- into. Mythology, 1960s and now I'm looking for a prophecy. Or the beginnings of one. |
| Urux |
| Vah It was alright, I was 100% the youngest in there lol I see you and Stray are figuring something out, I feel bewildered lol On that note, hi Stray ^^ |
| Zeraphia |
| Stray You're totally good. This is going to be so fun. I just need a prophecy that makes somewhat sense. |
| Zeraphia |
| Urux Oooh that sounds like fun! I'm sore but doing pretty solid! I hope the pub was fun? |
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| Alliance Battles |
| Challenges |
 | Vicuna Wolf : -3 |
| Mountain Lion : -1 |
| Mamba : +4 |
| Chatbox |
| The Reaper |
| Some days I sit here and wonder if anyone smiles when I come in chat lol |
| Zeraphia |
| Urux One imma whip up. As... soon as I figure out the prophecy/plot. |
| Urux |
| Vah Oh! I see. Do I smell an Urux + Vah 2.0 on the horizon xD I saw him in your art dump, he's so cool! |
| Zeraphia |
| Urux Oooh that's fun. I'm trying to figure out a good solid rp that I can fit him; -Click- into. Mythology, 1960s and now I'm looking for a prophecy. Or the beginnings of one. |
| Urux |
| Vah It was alright, I was 100% the youngest in there lol I see you and Stray are figuring something out, I feel bewildered lol On that note, hi Stray ^^ |
| Zeraphia |
| Stray You're totally good. This is going to be so fun. I just need a prophecy that makes somewhat sense. |
| Zeraphia |
| Urux Oooh that sounds like fun! I'm sore but doing pretty solid! I hope the pub was fun? |
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