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 VioletEcho
07:19:57 Is a dinosaur rawr
Jack almost there
Lmao that was me awhile ago except everything was 0 XD
 Jack-A-Boo
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Apples: 0
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Mushrooms: 438
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getting closer to 10k mush
 VioletEcho
07:18:19 Is a dinosaur rawr
I know there's healing potions you can buy from thr marketplace
 Echo Eclipse
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Violet
Yeah good game
 VioletEcho
07:17:53 Is a dinosaur rawr
Good game Echo...I think it was you ^^
 starlightpack
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eek! @violet echo
do you have anything that can heal a wolf my alpha male is at 1 precent health!
 starlightpack
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yah i ackedently just picked one but good job!
 VioletEcho
07:14:37 Is a dinosaur rawr
Good game
 starlightpack
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violet echo
i will just give me a sec
 VioletEcho
07:05:32 Is a dinosaur rawr
Pvp anyone? ^^
 cloudedDreams
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@kota
sorry just got excited when i saw that
 cloudedDreams
07:01:23 
i do!

 Kota
07:00:40 
Hi does anyone need breeding for their females
 starmutt
04:50:56 marsh | they/it
how do you code
-Click-
 Phlame3
04:46:35 Flame | Celeste
Ohh thanks :D
 starmutt
04:45:39 marsh | they/it
stagger the dominance lol
 Phlame3
04:44:18 Flame | Celeste
Does anyone have any idea why my pack happiness is only 15? Everyone’s in green for food and water, and all my wolves are good or excellent affinity except 2 that are ‘Ok’ :’D
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You *chose* to be a bio major? Thoughts and prayers...
 Enigma
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Someone please tell me why I decided to add a bio major. I forgot how crazy the STEM field is
 Urux
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Eek sorry I was driving haha
So he was a wild card chimera! That makes it even better!

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 VioletEcho
07:19:57 Is a dinosaur rawr
Jack almost there
Lmao that was me awhile ago except everything was 0 XD
 Jack-A-Boo
07:18:45 Jack, Boo, Vapor
Apples: 0
Apples Saved: 0
Mushrooms: 438
Mushrooms Saved: 0

getting closer to 10k mush
 VioletEcho
07:18:19 Is a dinosaur rawr
I know there's healing potions you can buy from thr marketplace
 Echo Eclipse
07:18:13 Echo | (They/She/He)
Violet
Yeah good game
 VioletEcho
07:17:53 Is a dinosaur rawr
Good game Echo...I think it was you ^^
 starlightpack
07:16:58 
eek! @violet echo
do you have anything that can heal a wolf my alpha male is at 1 precent health!
 starlightpack
07:15:05 
yah i ackedently just picked one but good job!
 VioletEcho
07:14:37 Is a dinosaur rawr
Good game
 starlightpack
07:07:13 
violet echo
i will just give me a sec
 VioletEcho
07:05:32 Is a dinosaur rawr
Pvp anyone? ^^
 cloudedDreams
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@kota
sorry just got excited when i saw that
 cloudedDreams
07:01:23 
i do!

 Kota
07:00:40 
Hi does anyone need breeding for their females
 starmutt
04:50:56 marsh | they/it
how do you code
-Click-
 Phlame3
04:46:35 Flame | Celeste
Ohh thanks :D
 starmutt
04:45:39 marsh | they/it
stagger the dominance lol
 Phlame3
04:44:18 Flame | Celeste
Does anyone have any idea why my pack happiness is only 15? Everyone’s in green for food and water, and all my wolves are good or excellent affinity except 2 that are ‘Ok’ :’D
 SACRIFICE
04:21:09 ECIFIRCAS
You *chose* to be a bio major? Thoughts and prayers...
 Enigma
04:18:56 
Someone please tell me why I decided to add a bio major. I forgot how crazy the STEM field is
 Urux
04:00:47 Urox, Uris
Eek sorry I was driving haha
So he was a wild card chimera! That makes it even better!




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I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 06:34 PM


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Getting straight into it. I have this little scholarship essay, a looming due date, and nobody to look over it for me. Help?

Prompt: What are your education and Career Goals? How do you plan on impacting your community in the future?

Essay: Min- 250. Max-500. Current- 261

Revised: 258 words.

My name is []. I'm a senior at [] High School, and my goal, once I graduate, is to pursue an Associate Degree in Baking and Pastry Arts and a Bachelor's in Food and Beverage Management at [] & [] University. This will prepare me for owning my own business in the future. What made me desire a career in this field? My passion for baking, as well as the sheer joy I felt when seeing others enjoy the dishes I made The happiness that I was able to create using nothing but my hands and mediocre skills gave me a sense of fulfillment. I then knew that, unlike other hobbies I had tried, this was what I truly enjoyed and wished to spend time furthering my knowledge of. When I first had the thought of owning my own business, I didn't think of doing much with it. Before long, I began to think of all the good I could do for those in situations that I could have been in, had I not been so fortunate. My wish is to create a community filled with acceptance and warmth by using any business I create. What I wish to do is hire certain nonviolent criminals and those who are beginning to age out of the foster care system, therefore giving a second chance to those who need it. This scholarship would allow me to gain the skills necessary to not only survive but thrive in my chosen field, as well as use my experience to help others thrive.


Edited at December 31, 2022 08:21 PM by Flower Field
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 06:43 PM


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It's good, but I feel like there are still some things you could improve
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 06:46 PM


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Heyo, I would replace a bit of your wording;
"while also" -> "in addition to",
"Before too long, however," -> "Not too long after".
Apologies if this was vague or didn't make sense, I'm a little tired hehe. There's a whole list somewhere, but I forgot what it's called.
However if your school has a career center or similar, I do recommend going there or asking a trusted teacher!
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 06:54 PM


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It does help! Also, I wish I could ask a teacher to look it over but the due date is before winter break is over so most of my teachers aren't checking their email.

Wilted said:
Heyo, I would replace a bit of your wording;
"while also" -> "in addition to",
"Before too long, however," -> "Not too long after".
Apologies if this was vague or didn't make sense, I'm a little tired hehe. There's a whole list somewhere, but I forgot what it's called.
However if your school has a career center or similar, I do recommend going there or asking a trusted teacher!


I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 07:08 PM


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Edited at December 31, 2022 07:53 PM by Flower Field
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 07:20 PM


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Hmm, have you tried reading this out loud? There's a lot of commas/pauses. I wouldn't exactly try to compress everything into one sentence, as that can be a mouthful (brainful? I'm still tired).
Try splitting them up a bit?
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 08:30 PM


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Try to change "What made me desire a career in this field? My passion for baking, as well as the sheer joy I felt when seeing others enjoy the dishes I made" to:
My passion for baking made me desire a career in this field, as well as the sheer joy I felt when seeing others enjoy the dishes I made.
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 08:33 PM


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Be sure to add a period between 'made' and 'the'
My passion for baking, as well as the sheer joy I felt when seeing others enjoy the dishes I made The happiness that I was able to create using nothing but my hands and mediocre skills gave me a sense of fulfillment.
Should be
My passion for baking, as well as the sheer joy I felt when seeing others enjoy the dishes I made. The happiness that I was able to create using nothing but my hands and mediocre skills gave me a sense of fulfillment.
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 08:34 PM


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I'm just pointing out minor things that need to be fixed for now
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 08:35 PM


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Wow, kinda embarrassed I didn't notice I forgot a period lol
Also, I appreciate any and all help!

Edited at December 31, 2022 08:36 PM by Flower Field

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